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So, I’m feeling a little nervous because, as most of you know, I’m shy when it comes to my writing. But you guys were really supportive on my post a few days ago, so now I’ve crawled from my shell and want to share my first chapter. Also, I need some feedback on my quirky writing style 🙂 Now, this is my first novel and my first chapter, so there’s room for improvement. And this chapter has a lot of paranormal things going on (This is intentional, don’t worry. The first chapter is ‘setting the stage’ and building up tons of questions, so I know it’s weird, but trust me when I say it gets explained 😉 )
You can find my first chapter here. Enjoy! And if you guys want me to, I’ll be happy to send more. Also, have mercy on me for any grammar errors 🙂 Thank you for your time! 😁 Don’t have high hopes haha…
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(By the way, for those of you I didn’t tag, I don’t know how many of y’all like fantasy…)
THIS IS SO AWESOME! (whoops, I was shouting wasn’t I?) Ah, I’m just so excited that you’re sharing your first chapter! 😀
I am a slow reader, but I am SO reading this!
😀 😀 😀 😀 😀Hmm, I tried to open the file, but it says I don’t have access. You may have to open the file to sharing, but no worries about rushing (okay, the reader in me is saying rush:)
But seriously, no need to rush, whenever you can is awesome:D@writerlexi1216 I AM SO GLAD YOU DECIDED TO SHARE IT, GIRL!!!!!!!! I am proud that you felt brave enough to do that!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Thank you for sharing it with us!!!
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if nothing's really real
i'll make the winter now my homeOoopsies, I’m sorry! I’m not the best with technology, so I’ll try to figure it out! 😀
No need to apologize (I’m not always the best with technology either:)
YAY! It worked! I cannot wait to read this! 😀 😀 😀
@writerlexi1216
Thank you so much for sharing! That was great! I love how you set everything up.Lately, it's been on my brain
Would you mind letting me know
If hours don't turn into daysYESSSSS!!!!!!!! You put your story up!!!! *jumping up and down and getting really excited* I’m offfff to go read this EPIC STORY!!!
God gives His hardest battles to His strongest soldiers.
TeenWritersNook.comThank you so much!! 🙂 I appreciate that. It all starts getting explained/making more sense in later chapters 😛
I just now realized I never responded to your post! Thank you so much!!! I’m really happy that I was brave enough to share it too XD
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@writerlexi1216 WHAT? HOW DID I MISS THIS POST? AHHHHHHHH! *COMMENCES TO SCREAMING AND FLAILING ABOUT…WHICH IS PROBABLY A BAD IDEA AT 9 PM* I AM SO GONNA READ THIS, BECAUSE I SO WANT TO READ YOUR STORY, BECAUSE I JUST. YEAH. AND I’M STILL WRITING IN ALL-CAPS.
ahem. i’ll get back to you soon, lexi. i am beyond excited right now.
@writerlexi1216 Okay, I finished reading your chapter earlier and…
I didn’t like it.
I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Pardon the exclamation marks XDDD)
Girl, that is SO amazing. I really loved how you described everything and I want to be in that world, I want to meet Caira and Deek!!! I thought that the action flowed perfectly and am very impressed by, well… the whole thing!!! I want more of this!!!!! Please, please, I am dying here. I want to be in this story! I want to meet the characters!! And most of all, I WANT YOU TO BE PROUD OF YOURSELF!!!! This is just SO great, and I’m not saying this to be nice. I’m saying this because it’s true. Thank you for posting this, and know that it inspired me A TON!!!
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if nothing's really real
i'll make the winter now my homeYAY!!! I’m so happy you liked it!! *happy dance* Awww, that means so much to hear! (By the way, Caira and Deek would totally love to meet you too!) Ah, you’re making me tempted to post more! I’ve been getting nothing but positive feedback, so that’s really made me feel better! I’m super glad I inspired you!!! YAAAYYY!
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