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April 21, 2025 at 5:59 pm #201931
Thanks! I’m glad.
Okay, I’ll see what the others think. I liked it as a nice recap of everything that was happening.
Erich is one of the Stien children. He’s married and has a kid. They were the family that Julian, Roland, and Aelic were staying with when Rolf and Leon caught up with them.
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
April 21, 2025 at 6:09 pm #201932Sounds good!
Oh, gotcha, thanks.
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April 22, 2025 at 10:53 am #201970Ugh. Kingdom Pen decided not to tag me, but I checked anyway because I remembered you saying yesterday that you would have something to post today. And good thing I did! I will have to remember to check myself if I don’t get a notification email.
Anyway… Book!
Not only have we lost two dear friends in Marius and Prince Dietrich, but we have lost the heir to the Empire’s throne!
This may seem like an odd question, but what is your view on end times?
Erichand his wife Helene.
Aelic really seems to come alive around Hue
Trying to remember who the people I underlined are.
Leon sighed. “Then why do I feel so guilty?”
“Maybe because of those who chose to stay,” Julian replied, quietly. “I feel it to, Leon. Yes, we’re warning the other churches, but anyone could have done that. We were the ones who led those churches, and now we’ve turned and run at the first sign of real trouble.”
Ah, the comparison game again.
A fine first section. I like how Joseph was mentioned again. I guess we will see where this goes.
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
April 22, 2025 at 11:00 am #201971This may seem like an odd question, but what is your view on end times?
Woah. That is an odd question. Well, I’ve been working over it. I have several friends who love to debate end times, and I like to sit and listen, but as of yet I haven’t drawn a complete conclusion from listening to them, other pastors, and reading.
Why do you ask?
Also, in case there was confusion, he means that they’ve lost them in life. They are dead.
Trying to remember who the people I underlined are.
Stien siblings. Landstraten church. They were the family Aelic, Roland, and Julian were with when Rolf and Leon caught up to them. I think if you read 3 through and then picked up book 4 without the breaks and talking and discussion it would make more sense. We are playing book 3 backwards, so to speak.
Ah, the comparison game again.
Again?
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
April 22, 2025 at 11:12 am #201973Why do you ask?
Okay. You’re view on end times could impact where this story goes. For example, some Christian believe that over time, the world will get better and we ought to get involved with politics and things like that to make a Christendom. Others might believe it would be nice if our government became Christian, but don’t take it for granted. So I was curious where you might stand on end times to get a better idea of how much of a shock the prince’s death was to your characters.
Stien siblings. Landstraten church. They were the family Aelic, Roland, and Julian were with when Rolf and Leon caught up to them. I think if you read 3 through and then picked up book 4 without the breaks and talking and discussion it would make more sense. We are playing book 3 backwards, so to speak.
Ah.
Again?
Joseph in book 2.
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
April 22, 2025 at 11:17 am #201974Ah, I see.
It’s a shock because they did set their hope on him taking the throne. With a Christian ruler, they would be free to worship in peace.
Joseph in book 2.
Eh, kind of. Joseph was more acting out of fear and wresting with the thought that he had to do this on his own. Leon and Julian are shocked because they didn’t die, and they’re second guessing themselves because they feel like they abandoned the church in the Capital.
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
April 22, 2025 at 1:30 pm #201975@ellette-giselle awesome first section!!
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