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May 9, 2025 at 12:55 pm #202614
Ugh. But I like his name. *pouts*
Okay fine, I’ll see what I can do….
Fires will rise to testify that 2+2=4. Swords will be drawn to prove that leaves are green in summer
May 9, 2025 at 1:04 pm #202615Ugh. But I like his name. *pouts*
Then stash it in for a different character. It’s not a bad name.
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
May 9, 2025 at 1:07 pm #202616True, bit it sort of fit him. Now I’m not sure which name to use……
Fires will rise to testify that 2+2=4. Swords will be drawn to prove that leaves are green in summer
May 9, 2025 at 1:14 pm #202617Well, you don’t have to change it, but it’s up to you.
Other ideas if you want them: Nickolas, Charles, Clive.
(I grabbed these names from a very specific source that I cannot name.)
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
May 9, 2025 at 1:24 pm #202618@ellette-giselle I see. But is there a Europe somewhere else (nearby?), or does the island-continent in your map completely replace it?
As in, was the “Rome” referred to in the book of Romans what eventually became the Empire, or is it a different place in a different part of the world, and the two have similar cultures either just because they happened to stumble upon the same ideas, or perhaps a combination of Romans and Germanics exploring the world came across your continent and colonized a part of it?
I’m gonna read the new section now btw, so I might not reply right away.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
May 9, 2025 at 1:27 pm #202619Basically my question is more of “Is this supposed to be a hypothetical eighth continent or small island somewhere in the world, or does this Earth have completely different continents, and the biblical places exist in different configurations?”
Sorry for such a weird question, and sorry if I’ve asked something similar before, but I just wanna know if you’ve thought about that and what your thoughts on it are.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
May 9, 2025 at 1:35 pm #202621Finished it! That was a rollercoaster, between confronting a false teacher and the destruction of the university. The plot thickens.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
May 9, 2025 at 1:39 pm #202622also I had video game soundtracks on in the background while I was doing schoolwork and this one decided to come on right as I started reading and hit the part when they discover the ruined university…..
…one of like three or four orchestral songs in that entire playlist, and oddly fitting too. Funny how that always happens. No matter what soundtrack I’m listening to, whenever I’m reading a Kingdom Pen work, a track often comes on that more or less fits the vibe of what I’m reading.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
May 9, 2025 at 1:44 pm #202624It’s my sister’s birthday so I probably won’t post today.
I’m late but tell her happy birthday!
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
May 9, 2025 at 3:38 pm #202626Ooo, mysterious.
sadly, he’s not any of those. He was very much an Andreas, so I’ll have to find a name with the same flow, beats, meanings, and rhythm.
Naming a character is not a simple thing. 😂Fires will rise to testify that 2+2=4. Swords will be drawn to prove that leaves are green in summer
May 9, 2025 at 3:40 pm #202627it’s an alternate Europe. If that makes sense.
yeah. That was a roller coaster chapter. Any thoughts on Andreas?
Oooo! I’ll have to listen to the song!
Fires will rise to testify that 2+2=4. Swords will be drawn to prove that leaves are green in summer
May 9, 2025 at 3:43 pm #202628@ellette-giselle okay! That makes enough sense for me.
Andreas as a name or Andreas as a character?
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
May 9, 2025 at 3:44 pm #202629as a character
Fires will rise to testify that 2+2=4. Swords will be drawn to prove that leaves are green in summer
May 9, 2025 at 3:53 pm #202630Interesting how he seems to have a connection to the other characters. I do agree his name blends in with the others’ but that’s not a bad thing, nor do you need to change it, that’s just me failing to pay attention lol
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
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