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April 21, 2025 at 7:27 am #201874
@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty @linus-smallprint
First off, I love that Linus is like,”wait a month to start the next book.”
I finally convince him that I should start it sooner…….
1 month later……….
Hello all!!!! GUESS WHAT?!?! It’s book 4 time!!!!!
Okay, just a little warning…… anyone who found the other books pretty violent…… we’re in the Empire…… and things just went downhill………
Consider yourself properly warned.
Anyone who cringed at the writing of the last three books, (a.k.a. me) prepare to cringe more. 😭
Okay, enough trigger warnings.
Time for the story!!
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
April 21, 2025 at 8:10 am #201875@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty @linus-smallprint
Book Aesthetic Board.
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
April 21, 2025 at 10:49 am #201876@ellette-giselle how bout it?
on the violence, I grew up reading Warrior Cats where characters are killed in terrible ways. It shouldn’t be any worse than that, especially since you have a Christian perspective on violence (for example, not just adding it in for shock factor)
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
April 21, 2025 at 10:49 am #201877Yay!!!
Oh boy. 🫣 I see the white knight on there… and an arena… and the creepy prince mask. 😬
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
April 21, 2025 at 10:49 am #201878also I love the title.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
April 21, 2025 at 10:50 am #201879Good to know.
btw, did KP tag you on this? The last couple times I tagged people it didn’t work.
Also, what do you think of the book aesthetic? Any predictions?
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
April 21, 2025 at 10:50 am #201880also I love the title.
Me too!
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
April 21, 2025 at 10:52 am #201881Yay!!
Oh boy. 🫣 I see the white knight on there… and an arena… and the creepy prince mask. 😬
Hmm, funny you should mention the creepy prince mask when the only prince is dead……….. 🤐
Yep! There’s the white knight!
Any predictions or ideas of what might happen based on the board??!
(it will be funny to see if you guess anything right)
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
April 21, 2025 at 10:57 am #201884@ellette-giselle it worked fine!!
The board is cool but I don’t have any predictions besides what I said on the last forum.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
April 21, 2025 at 10:57 am #201885I know! Who’s wearing it now!? Or is it just a throwback to Dietrich’s death and place in the story?
Uhh… there will be gladiator fighting. I feel like Leon is going to get pulled into that again. Maybe Julian too. And I might be seeing a prison cell on the bottom left… unless that’s something else.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
April 21, 2025 at 11:01 am #201887yay! Awesome! KP was looking like it wasn’t gonna work for a little bit.
Wouldn’t you like to know. 😈
You know, y’all called gladiator fighting last time……
I’ll say no more on the rest of what you said.
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
April 21, 2025 at 11:01 am #201888You know, y’all called gladiator fighting last time……
So you’re overdue. 😝
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
April 21, 2025 at 11:04 am #201889Wow! I did NOT expect that comeback! That was quick.
One point for you.
I’m still not saying if it will even happen.
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
April 21, 2025 at 11:07 am #201890Lol.
I’m still not saying if it will even happen.
Yeah, yeah. XD Can’t be giving away spoilers before the book even starts.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
April 21, 2025 at 11:09 am #201891ya know….. I might make y’all wait until tomorrow before I post.
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
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