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There were a couple near rhyming words near the beginning. By themselves they don!t real rhyme but when read in the sentences you just get this sense of flow.
I force a smile onto my trembling lips and peak my head through the door. Inside, white hospital walls surround a white bed, on a white floor, but all that disappears as my gaze settles upon her.
Now, that I go through and read it again I’m having trouble finding any real instances. 😆 Maybe I just imagined it in the first place. 😄 Anyway, it’s a great story!
*is probably geeking out about something*
@Abigail-Blomberg Wonderful. 😀
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