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    Kylie
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      This is a short story. A poetic short tale. The happenings of a character. Many times, as a writer, we learn to embrace our characters. To love them. This is the other side of reality. There are just some characters we just put under the bus. Maybe we started to write their story but upon realizing all the work, we crumpled up the paper and threw it in the trash. This is a voice. One singular voice crying out to her friends because she dreams of a bigger life.

      Are fictitious characters real? No.

      Is it fun to write them though? Absolutely!

      And that is what this is…a tale of a character….a girl who refuses to give up when all else seems lost.

      Do your characters hate you for their unfortunate ‘mishaps’? This is a topic where your character is free to express their feelings to the world…that way, maybe we authors will be a little less harsh lol. Feel free to write a poem, a short story, or an interview with the character even and post it below!! I can’t wait to see what y’all come up with XD

       

      lost but not alone

      #146192
      Kylie
      @livingwoodchronicles
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        I will always be here
        A poetic short tale 

        —————————————

        Here I am

        The author put me under the pen
        Trapped me in a room of fantasy
        Trapped me in these words

        Ink, everywhere

        Scratch marks of original drafts
        But, even in the void, I was there
        A small character in an empty abyss

        Placed in an hourglass
        Watching minutes slowly pass

        The author didn’t care
        No, not at all

        She just muddled word after word
        Spinning a tale of endless tragedies

        Placing me in the light
        To be loved one second
        Only then to be thrown against a wall of insecurity
        She threw me in a cavern

        Stuck
        Alone

        Here I cry

        These tears being just untold stories

        I want to be free
        To never fall
        To become alive

        And to be loved for real

        But, alas, this too is vain
        For the author will never allow such

        She will forever spin me in a cauldron of mishaps
        A series of misadventures

        Where feelings wrestle feelings
        And fear is forever haunting me

        Sadness taunting me
        And heartache causing these tears to brim

        I want out
        Out of this spinning world

        Like a bird
        Free of this cage

        To be held

        To dance like no-one is watching
        And to be loved like I’ve never been hurt
        To sing like no-one’s is listening

        Darkness will never drive out darkness
        Only light can do that

        Hate can never drive out hate
        Love can only do that

        I soar
        And I fall

        I break apart
        And I breathe

        And mend
        And heal

        Because I know
        This dream will never be true

        But I know something no-one else does

        I know

        That hope
        Is stronger than hate

        And love
        Is bonded with mercy

         

        So take a step
        Onto the waves

        Let go, my child
        And may Christ only be the light that shines through us
        Even though we face torment

         

        Because I hope
        Just hope

        That unlike some
        You will feel me
        And show me love

         

        lost but not alone

        #146193
        Kylie
        @livingwoodchronicles
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          lost but not alone

          #146199
          GodlyFantasy12
          @godlyfantasy12
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            @livingwoodchronicles beautiful!!!

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            #146208
            Esther
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              @livingwoodchronicles

              I loved that poem!!

              I’ll have to do an interview with my charries soon… 😏 (Kinda scared to know what they’re going to say 😬😂)

              Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende

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              Keilah H.
              @keilah-h
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                @livingwoodchronicles wow that was cool!!

                I don’t know…..my charries would have a LOT to say about me, and not all of it is nice so…..Hmm, maybe I’ll interview one of the tamer ones, the ones who WON’T bite my head off.

                Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

                #146228
                Felicity
                @felicity
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                  @livingwoodchronicles

                  That is so…heartbreaking! I don’t even want to think about all the poor characters that I once created but will never write again.

                  Just because the stories are so lame….

                  or I’ve forgotten what was going to happen next.

                  I have a whole three-ringed binder FULL of old stories I probably won’t ever finish.

                  All those poor, trapped characters… *sob*

                  ~~~~~

                  Such a good idea, though! 🙂 Thanks for the inspiration!

                  He must increase, but I must decrease.

                  #146331
                  Euodia
                  @euodia-vision
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                    @livingwoodchronicles

                    I love this idea! And that poem was amazing!

                    I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child

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