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  • October 15, 2026 at 9:41 am #214348
    Lillian
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      Calling All Readers!
      I would love some feedback on my short story!

      Here is the information:

      Title: Untitled (as of now) if you read and have any suggestions I would love to know!
      Genre: Mystery, Supernatural, Fable
      Word Count: 3,627
      Content warnings/labels: Ghost like figures & mentions of death
      What kind of readers you’re looking for: Committed (Please I need this done by Wednesday Oct. 21)
      Story Summary:

      Grady Bruadair is consumed by his career, forgetting the life he built before. When an unexpected thing happens he falls asleep near a tree and wakes up in a dream, located 20 years in the future. He is visited by two ghost-like figures. Fechin Doyle and Sagan Colm. (Gives Rip Van Wrinkle mixed with A Christmas Carol)

      (Here is the link for the story.)

      https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OWTiTGQBlVus-dVWnWChr6yrANJ3dB6HRiEIdjArlNw/edit?usp=drivesdk

      There is a grain of truth in every fairytale

      October 15, 2026 at 11:03 am #214351
      Lillian
      @lillian
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        you can comment on the document if you would like. Anyways…enjoy!

        There is a grain of truth in every fairytale

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