Critiques On My Fantasy World?

[Faith]

@thearcaneaxiom

Thanks!

@starshiness

Thank you! I pronounce it Dor-ANNE

"does anyone have any good ideas?"
"Oh yeah, but none for this"

[Starshiness]

@awsumfaith Ahh ok nice👌🏽

I have no special talent. I am only passionately curious.

[Gwyndalf the Wise]

@godlyfantasy12

No, we aren’t ethically Jewish. but I mean we haven’t done any genetic testing so…I guess it hasn’t been ruled out? XD

Yeah, we try our best every year to celebrate the appointed times in the Bible. =)

@awsumfaith

Uh…I don’t know much about geography…so I’m not sure how to help. However, you might consider renaming Wendlock cove… I kept misreading it as ‘wedlock cove’ *facepalm*

XD I love the “O Snapp” canyon, do your characters end up there?

"...I did not say to the seed of Jacob, 'Seek Me in vain..."
(Part of) Isaiah 45:19

[Faith]

@gwyndalf-the-wise

Lol XD thx for the input.

No, they don’t in this story. BUT I hope to write looots of stories in Doran so hopefully I can pull it up in another someday 🤞

"does anyone have any good ideas?"
"Oh yeah, but none for this"

[Faith]

@gwyndalf-the-wise @starshiness @kathleenramm @esther-c

Ok, so I’ll give a brief description of what races live in Doran.

 

Fairies 

Fairies average 41/2 ft in height and have transparent wings. Women and girls usually keep their hair very long. The fairies like to define themselves by their generational occupations. Seaside Fairies come from a long line of boat builders and fisherfairies. Mountain Fairies are miners, Woodland Fairies are carpenters and loggers,  and River fairies are farmers.

Mermaids and Mermen

The people of the sea. the ocean is their kingdom (which i still need to name) and its ruled by King Quest and Queen Arya.

Nymphs

Tree people, the main population in the Jarst Mountains. they look like ghosts, but lighter and more delicate. these people are very elusive, and though friendly and hospitable, they try to avoid the other races.

And theen there are humans, which i dont think need much explaining

 

"does anyone have any good ideas?"
"Oh yeah, but none for this"

[Gwyndalf the Wise]

@awsumfaith

Cool! =D

"...I did not say to the seed of Jacob, 'Seek Me in vain..."
(Part of) Isaiah 45:19

[Power]

@awsumfaith

So, are there any militaries/wars that I can geek out over?

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