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March 15, 2018 at 5:52 pm #66920
Hey, guys!
Someone had this idea a while back (I feel like it was Rosey Mucklestone, but kudos to whoever it was!). Anyway, someone starts a story, then someone else writes the next part and so on. Essentially, this is a cool way to write an interesting and sometimes crazy story all together! It was super fun the last time we did it. 🙂
Here is the first sentence of the story: I wake to the sound of rustling grass and the smell of blood.
@dekreel @dragon-snapper @kate-flournoy @ariel-ashira @daughteroftheking @jenwriter17(And by the way, you can write more than one sentence. This one is just to get us started.)
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March 15, 2018 at 6:08 pm #66923@ingridrd Did you see the topic that @dekreel started which is similar to this? 😀 Of course, this one only has a short section for anyone to add to, and hers is a several-paragraph-at-a-time story tag, but you should check it out.
- This reply was modified 6 years, 7 months ago by Rochellaine.
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March 15, 2018 at 8:10 pm #66956@ingridrd I shall continue this quest.
I wake to the sound of rustling grass and the smell of blood. Only, I couldn’t see anything, not even when I opened my eyes.
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March 15, 2018 at 8:24 pm #66958@ingridrd @dragon-snapper *continues quest*
I wake to the sound of rustling grass and the smell of blood. Only, I couldn’t see anything, not even when I opened my eyes.
“Did we win?” I mumble breathlessly.
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March 15, 2018 at 10:19 pm #67005@ingridrd @dragon-snapper @daughterotheking
I wake to the sound of rustling grass and the smell of blood. Only, I couldn’t see anything, not even when I opened my eyes.“Did we win?” I mumble breathlessly.
Akila wiped stray hairs away from her face. “Yeah, why?”
IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!
March 15, 2018 at 10:35 pm #67008@ingridrd @dragon-snapper @daughteroftheking @catwing
I wake to the sound of rustling grass and the smell of blood. Only, I can’t see anything, not even when I open my eyes.
“Did we win?” I mumble breathlessly.
Akila wipes stray hairs away from her face. “Yeah, why?”
I grunt, struggling to sit up. “If we won, why am I bleeding?”
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https://forums.theaetherliMarch 15, 2018 at 10:46 pm #67010@ingridrd @dragon-snapper @daughteroftheking @catwing @aislinn-mollisong I’m breaking tradition. Three new sentences.
I wake to the sound of rustling grass and the smell of blood. Only, I can’t see anything, not even when I open my eyes.
“Did we win?” I mumble breathlessly.
Akila wipes stray hairs away from her face. “Yeah, why?”
I grunt, struggling to sit up. “If we won, why am I bleeding?”
“When you got stabbed the enemy, everyone was so surprised they managed to hit such an amazing fighter they stopped and stared allowing us to take them by surprise and win.”
“Really?”
“No.”
March 15, 2018 at 11:00 pm #67014I wake to the sound of rustling grass and the smell of blood. Only, I can’t see anything, not even when I open my eyes.
“Did we win?” I mumble breathlessly.
Akila wipes stray hairs away from her face. “Yeah, why?”
I grunt, struggling to sit up. “If we won, why am I bleeding?”
“When you got stabbed the enemy, everyone was so surprised they managed to hit such an amazing fighter they stopped and stared allowing us to take them by surprise and win.”
“Really?”
“No.”
“Akila, what is this thing on my eyes?”
You can pronounce it however you want.
March 15, 2018 at 11:32 pm #67021@ingridrd How long do I have to wait before I can go again? 😛
My brother asked if you were old, since he thought you said kiddos. XD
@dekreel My brother thinks you are a mouse/rat person.
“No, she’s a wolf-like chasm beast.” XP
(He politely asks that you do not kill him. For obvious reasons.)
He’s the comedian. XDIMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!
March 15, 2018 at 11:57 pm #67023*gapes* Mouse/rat person? Mouse/rat person?!
Ahh, all right. I won’t kill you…
@catwing You mean Leumeister?You can pronounce it however you want.
March 16, 2018 at 10:29 am #67039@rochellaine Oh no, I didn’t see that. I will check it out… 🙂
@catwing Hmmm…you can go again any time, as long as you give other people a chance to write (and don’t do two posts in a row). 😉Tell your brother I am 15. 🙂 Is he a Kapeefer?
A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)
March 16, 2018 at 1:28 pm #67058I wake to the sound of rustling grass and the smell of blood. Only, I can’t see anything, not even when I open my eyes.
“Did we win?” I mumble breathlessly.
Akila wipes stray hairs away from her face. “Yeah, why?”
I grunt, struggling to sit up. “If we won, why am I bleeding?”
“When you got stabbed the enemy, everyone was so surprised they managed to hit such an amazing fighter they stopped and stared allowing us to take them by surprise and win.”
“Really?”
“No.”
“Akila, what is this thing on my eyes?”
“It’s a blindfold, of course.”
“Why is there a blindfold on my head if I’m bleeding?”
Akira tucks a strand of hair behind her ear. “So you wouldn’t see your own blood and faint. But it looks like you managed to push it away. I’m begging you, right now, do not look at yourself.”
I glance down.
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Also, Daeus has 22 turtles in his signature.March 16, 2018 at 3:36 pm #67065I wake to the sound of rustling grass and the smell of blood. Only, I can’t see anything, not even when I open my eyes.
“Did we win?” I mumble breathlessly.
Akila wipes stray hairs away from her face. “Yeah, why?”
I grunt, struggling to sit up. “If we won, why am I bleeding?”
“When you got stabbed the enemy, everyone was so surprised they managed to hit such an amazing fighter they stopped and stared allowing us to take them by surprise and win.”
“Really?”
“No.”
“Akila, what is this thing on my eyes?”
“It’s a blindfold, of course.”
“Why is there a blindfold on my head if I’m bleeding?”
Akira tucks a strand of hair behind her ear. “So you wouldn’t see your own blood and faint. But it looks like you managed to push it away. I’m begging you, right now, do not look at yourself.”
I glance down.
I see red. Literally. Who did this to me? my mind starts whirling but then my head begins to buzz and I no longer need the blindfold to cover my eyes, for I can’t even see with them open. The last thing I remember is Akira’s startled shout.
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March 16, 2018 at 5:21 pm #67089@rochellaine @catwing @sam-kowal @dekreel
Ohh, this is getting intense! I’m not going to copy and paste the first part of the story for the next portion, if that’s okay. It’ll just get too long. 🙂
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Pain. It’s all that is real in this world of misery. Sometimes I feel gentle hands bathing my wounds, but then the pain comes again and I let myself fall back into darkness.
A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)
March 16, 2018 at 5:30 pm #67091…
I see red. Literally. Who did this to me? my mind starts whirling but then my head begins to buzz and I no longer need the blindfold to cover my eyes, for I can’t even see with them open. The last thing I remember is Akira’s startled shout.
* * *
Pain. It’s all that is real in this world of misery. Sometimes I feel gentle hands bathing my wounds, but then the pain comes again and I let myself fall back into darkness.
Between periods of unconsciousness, I hear mumbling voices above me, including my brother’s voice. I feel warmth from the bathing water and from the fire, which I hear crackling to my left.
I must be back at Fren’s hideout. I think dimly.
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You can pronounce it however you want.
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