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January 9, 2025 at 3:48 pm #193998
ugh, idk what to rp. Last time Silvanis and I talked, he was criticizing my out-loud reading skills and i told him to stop talking.
"You need French Toast."
#AnduthForever (hopefully 💕)January 9, 2025 at 4:58 pm #194001I’m glad you like Huntress as a character! I honestly didn’t expect too many people to care all that much about her. She’s one of my favorite characters I’ve created so far, so…
I do like her, it’s fun reading from her perspective. Her comments are really funny.
Yay, welcome Izzy and Pilgrim!!
How do you deal with him? He seems a little tough.
"No! Monkeys should have pets, all monkeys should have pets!"
January 9, 2025 at 5:53 pm #194004@theshadow haha thanks! Her personality is slightly inspired by mine lol
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
January 9, 2025 at 5:56 pm #194005@rae lol that’s characters for you
I mean, I couldn’t figure out what I wanted to put down either, and that’s mostly cause Huntress and Sniper were having this kind of conversation in the background of my brain and I couldn’t pay attention:
H: What do you wanna sing? I mean, we gotta give her something so she can write it down.
S: You come up with somethin’, it was yer idea.
H: Oh, so now you don’t wanna sing?
S: Don’t pull that card, Jaylen–
H: Part of the reason she created me was because of your voice.
S: Stop that.
H: Most of the reason, actually.
S: (he didn’t reply to this but his silence spoke volumes)
H: Oh yeah, and you were humming “Fly me to the moon” three days ago and I’m sure you did it where I could hear on purpose, because you know I like that style of music and it’s the song that first got me thinking that maybe you liked me back.
S: When ya threw a chair at me while I was practicin’ the sax outside?
H: Yeah, exactly.
so yeah you’re not the only one with characters who don’t seem to care that they’re interrupting your thought process.
by the way you did finish the fic right?
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
January 9, 2025 at 11:21 pm #194021H: Oh yeah, and you were humming “Fly me to the moon” three days ago and I’m sure you did it where I could hear on purpose, because you know I like that style of music and it’s the song that first got me thinking that maybe you liked me back.
S: When ya threw a chair at me while I was practicin’ the sax outside?
H: Yeah, exactly.
That was hilarious.🤣
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January 10, 2025 at 9:52 am #194026by the way you did finish the fic right?
Oh dear, I forgot to tell you with CWW and going back to school, sorry!
I really really liked the ending! It was so sweet. My only criticism would be I kinda didn’t understand fully what was going on before that point, Otherwise, it was great!
"You need French Toast."
#AnduthForever (hopefully đź’•)January 10, 2025 at 9:56 am #194027Lol, we’re talking about charries as if they’re children or siblings now
How do you deal with him? He seems a little tough.
We make fun of each other. There have been times I’m in a conversation with other people and we’re talking about annoying things, and I’ll go like “You hear that Silvanis? That sounds just like you!”. He usually growls back or makes a stab of his own.
Other times it goes too far and I tell him to be quiet, but he keeps going so I call upon my other charries to make him be quiet. Especially Alpha. Alpha is his father, and also a very tough character. The two of them are interesting.
"You need French Toast."
#AnduthForever (hopefully 💕)January 10, 2025 at 4:44 pm #194089@rae thank you!! Glad you liked it, and yes I can agree the ending was amazing; when I read the original I was like “oh I gotta have this, it’s great”
I actually added the comic artist’s appearance; in the original, it simply shows them all talking and then the doorbell rings, then it switches to a panel of a door, then Scout opening the door and inviting “you” in to sit with the team since it was because of the fans and their love for these characters that made the writers finally settle down and finish it. Awesome and almost even sweeter than my ending when it’s a comic book, a little harder to pull off when it’s a written tale. So I pulled one final TF2-style joke and “canonized” the comics I was inspired by into my own fanfic by making that “you” into the artist who wrote it.
As for the confusing aspect? Welp, if we’re talking the debacle with the Administrator, blame the original writers for any confusion, not me (trust me, I had to read through it like twice to write it properly, so you’re not the only one). The only places I’d be to blame are:
-Huntress telling off Engineer cause he kinda betrayed her trust (fun fact, she wrote that part more than I did lol)
-Huntress and Sniper’s wedding day (can I just say that in the first draft, that scene was a mess because I kept stalling for some reason and as such, my writing was kinda juddery in terms of pacing. Hopefully it was a little more streamlined here)
-The “this is what everyone else did with their lives” portion after that scene
-Any of Huntress and Scout’s dialogue at the end, considering she’s my character and wasn’t in the original writing.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
January 10, 2025 at 4:45 pm #194090Lol, we’re talking about charries as if they’re children or siblings now
They kind of are XD
We make fun of each other. There have been times I’m in a conversation with other people and we’re talking about annoying things, and I’ll go like “You hear that Silvanis? That sounds just like you!”. He usually growls back or makes a stab of his own.
Thats hilarious lol. How does the person your talking to respond?
Other times it goes too far and I tell him to be quiet, but he keeps going so I call upon my other charries to make him be quiet. Especially Alpha. Alpha is his father, and also a very tough character. The two of them are interesting.
That sounds interesting. I need to try talking with my charries sometime.
"No! Monkeys should have pets, all monkeys should have pets!"
January 10, 2025 at 4:46 pm #194091@rae oh yeah and Alpha and Silvanis arguing sounds crazy.
why can I see a pair of angry Night Furies roaring at each other as the image of how that debate would go?
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
January 10, 2025 at 4:50 pm #194093Btw did you see I added chapter titles? What do you think?
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
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