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May 8, 2018 at 5:25 pm #72166
@jenwriter17 @seekjustice Here’s part 14.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PvJ2pKRNd26TxIeH9RYA0CtqkZTfROBHFbMsF30hjxk/edit?usp=sharing
"For God hath not given us the spirit of fear; but of power, and of love, and of a sound mind."
May 8, 2018 at 8:51 pm #72179@skredder I think I can read it all tonight 😀
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www.jennaterese.comMay 8, 2018 at 9:15 pm #72185@jenwriter17 Wahoo!
"For God hath not given us the spirit of fear; but of power, and of love, and of a sound mind."
May 9, 2018 at 11:31 am #72230@skredder I am so sorry! I said I’d be able to read it yesterday, but I didn’t get a chance. I’ll do it today though 🙂
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www.jennaterese.comMay 9, 2018 at 12:19 pm #72237@jenwriter17 That’s fine. 🙂
"For God hath not given us the spirit of fear; but of power, and of love, and of a sound mind."
May 11, 2018 at 10:38 am #72373@jenwriter17 @seekjustice Alright, here’s part 15.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OzPEMCng2eUTOTbRsQLQSMETCvgJt08PwGVX5C_-CCQ/edit?usp=sharing
"For God hath not given us the spirit of fear; but of power, and of love, and of a sound mind."
May 17, 2018 at 10:57 am #72800@jenwriter17 @seekjustice Here’s part 16. It’s pretty short, but kind of important. The next part will be much longer.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zDW8Q0s4lOSNAHAl1znpxIOLyg3e7mYPDbtni8v4ttU/edit?usp=sharing
"For God hath not given us the spirit of fear; but of power, and of love, and of a sound mind."
May 17, 2018 at 12:49 pm #72802@skredder Awesome 🙂
So, I have a question: I’ll be going on a trip leaving this Saturday, so I was wondering if you might wanna post all your parts now, so that I can print them off for the trip and get a lot more reading done? That’s fine if you don’t want to do it that way, but I’m not sure how the internet or whatever is going to be where I’m going, so it might work out better printing them off.
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www.jennaterese.comMay 17, 2018 at 1:03 pm #72805@jenwriter17 Do you mean all the parts from sixteen to where I currently am in writing? If so, do you want them in one doc, or in separate docs like they are right now?
"For God hath not given us the spirit of fear; but of power, and of love, and of a sound mind."
May 17, 2018 at 4:02 pm #72809@skredder yup, from part 16 on. either way is fine, whichever is best for you 🙂
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www.jennaterese.comMay 17, 2018 at 9:25 pm #72815@jenwriter17 Okay, I went ahead and put everything on a separate doc. It’s just about as long as everything you’ve read so far. And there’s a bout 15,000 – 20,000 more words left.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1K2gcW2VDMwceVyzKPWxAtGQID1ttkQrFpRljfQoppmk/edit?usp=sharing
@seekjustice You can read this one too if you want.I hope y’all like it! 😀
"For God hath not given us the spirit of fear; but of power, and of love, and of a sound mind."
May 17, 2018 at 11:53 pm #72820@skredder Perfect! 😉
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www.jennaterese.comAugust 26, 2018 at 9:24 pm #76364@jenwriter17 Did you ever get the link to work? I’m sorry for not getting back to you sooner. I can resend that link if you’d like.
Here is the link to the final part of the book!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1r-LzMslrHPU3nSL9w7gBeyrlwH4fkz8ocMv8Lx8nK9Q/edit?usp=sharing
It’s the entire final section, about 10,000 words. I have made some decisions about a few things that will change the beginning parts of the book a wee bit. The story remains the same though.
"For God hath not given us the spirit of fear; but of power, and of love, and of a sound mind."
August 26, 2018 at 9:45 pm #76368@skredder Oh my word I’m so sorry! I think I figured out the problem, but then I started beta reading Seekjustice’s book (which has a deadline I’m trying super hard to meet). I really wanna finish it; but would it be okay if I finish reading Seekjustice’s then hop right to yours? (since there’s a deadline).
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www.jennaterese.comAugust 27, 2018 at 10:29 am #76382@jenwriter17 Sure. That’s absolutely fine! I’m taking a little time off before I start editing. 🙂 You’ve got some time.
"For God hath not given us the spirit of fear; but of power, and of love, and of a sound mind."
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