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      @godlyfantasy12. Yep, and I may add more later too! 😅😂💕

      Sooo…I think I’ll break my groups into smaller groups, for when you and I both add more, lol.

      Okay, so…I guess we can have these groups meet each other (and you can change things up if you want! 😊):

      Jonathan/Isabel/Eli ~ Aria/Fenrys

      Steve/Bucky/Ryo ~ Lucien/Caden/Puck (just bc I think it’d be interesting…😂😂😂)

      And then that still leaves Madelene/Alex and Viola for my charries. 😉

      Lily

      “Awesome!” Bren cried.

      Lily smiled, but it quickly faded.

      November had…disappeared…?

      She knew the world wasn’t exactly…safe…after all, she was a grown woman now, not a little innocent girl…but disappearing for no reason?

      But she smiled, knowing she needed to be there for these two boys that needed someone to rely on. “Well, you two can come with me, Elias, and Albert, if you’d like. We can help you find your sister.”

      #133005
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        @godlyfantasy12

        NOOO!!! November!! What happened?!?

        @freedomwriter76

        Aww Ryo!!! He’s so adorable <3<3

        And Steve!! Bucky!!!

        And girl, I’m sorry you haven’t been feeling well!! I hope you feel better soon :). You were missed!!

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          @lightoverdarkness6.

          Aww Ryo!!! He’s so adorable <3<3

          AHH!!! IKR!? 😍😍😍😍😍

          And Steve!! Bucky!!!

          YESSS!!! Ma BOIS!!!! đŸ€©đŸ€©đŸ€©đŸ€©

          And girl, I’m sorry you haven’t been feeling well!! I hope you feel better soon :). You were missed!!

          Aww, thanks girl!!! 💖💖💖 I’m doing better today, just still have a sore throat and I’m tired. 😊 Awwwwww…you’re so sweet. 💕💕💕

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            @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

            And yes, I’ll try to RP later today as my boys. I’m about to go to a nature park with my dad and brothers, to go on a hike! But when I get back I might be able to 🙂

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              @lightoverdarkness6. Sounds good!!! Have fun on your hike!!! 💕👋😁

              #133023
              GodlyFantasy12
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                @freedomwriter76 oooh a villain yesss!!!

                 

                I’m now imagining Viola meeting Corvina’s youngest!!!

                 

                (I haven’t introduced any of corvina’s girls yet
but out of all of them
her youngest is the most morally gray and
well
the most likely to go the wrong way 👀😬)

                 

                also imma RP as some of the others! @lightoverdarkness6 feel free to join us

                 

                Caden

                “Whoo,” Lucien whistled, placing a hand on his knee, which was pulled to his chest. “This place could use a bit of work.”

                Caden looked around at the dingy looking hall they had woken too and couldn’t help but agree. He could just imagine the complaints he’d be hearing from his “Uncle” if he were here.

                He chuckled.

                “But hey, it beats being outside,” Lucien laid back, placing his arms behind his head and closing his eyes as if preparing to go back to sleep.

                Caden shook his head, “For you maybe! I happen to like sleeping outside. Makes me feel more attune with my wolf side,” He raised his brows as he said this, placing his hands on his hips and striking a daring pose.

                Lucien spit out a laugh. “Wolf side? The only part of you that even somewhat resembles a wolf is your sorry excuse of a shifter form. And even then you look like a golden retriever. Benji is more wolf then you!”

                Caden sputtered with feigned hurt, kicking his brother in the side. Lucien rolled, laughing.

                “I will have you know that my golden retriever has come in handy many times!”

                “Yea, when we play fetch.”

                Caden pushed his tongue into his cheek, smiling coyly. “You’re something else.”

                Lucien shrugged, also smiling.

                (Aaaahhh I am loving writing these twoooo)

                Sitting up, Lucien stretched and sighed. “I guess we should probably try to figure out where in AĂș we are, huh?”

                “Or at least where everyone else is.”

                “Mm, yea that might be a good idea.”

                Caden looked up, noticing the dimly lit sconces on the walls. He pursed his lips. “I didn’t see any sign of Fenrys before I woke you.”

                Lucien’s green eyes narrowed slightly. “I’m sure he’s somewhere around here.”

                “I don’t see why he’d leave us
”

                “For that matter, I don’t see why the others would either.”

                “Well, I can understand why they might leave you,” Caden said cheekily.

                “Ha ha. Seriously though, were we brought here?”

                “Wouldn’t we have felt it? Even if they’d knocked us out?”

                “Maybe they drugged us
”

                Caden frowned at that, biting his bottom lip. If that was the case
who knew what these people, whoever they were had in mind for all of them. Or where the others were.

                What if something terrible had already happened to them?

                To Fenrys?

                “Hey
” Caden met his brother’s green eyes. “Don’t think like that, alright. No good comes from it.”

                Caden nodded. “Yea
alright.”

                Lucien stood, dusting himself off. “Well, guess we should try to find some of the others. No use just sitting around huh?”

                “About time. Thought you two were gonna stay there all day.”

                Caden and Lucien jerked around, Lucien gripped his bow from behind his back, ready to aim it at will, although the voice was familiar.

                Their eyes widened.

                “Puck?!”

                 

                The white-haired boy leaned against an opening a few feet away, arms crossed. He    blinked slowly, blue with purple mixing.

                “How long have you been standing there?!” Lucien asked, incredulous.

                “Long enough.” The kid walked from his post up to the two older teens. The height difference was obvious, with Puck only reaching slightly below their chest.

                Not that it seemed to intimidate him in the slightest.

                “Why didn’t you say anything?” Caden tilted his head, like a curious puppy.

                “No reason to. If you guys didn’t notice me, then there was no reason to alert you of my presence.” He smiled coyly.

                Lucien narrowed his eyes. “Well,” he drawled, “Have you seen anyone else?”

                “Nope. And I don’t think we were drugged either.”

                “What makes you say that?” Caden asked.

                “I think the side affects would be more obvious don’t you? We’d still feel it?” The boy cocked a brow. “Obviously
”

                Lucien let out a long sigh/growl, raising his eyes to the ceiling. “Alright, whatever, it doesn’t really matter. Point is, we need to find everyone else.”

                Puck smiled, nodding as if he were a sweet angel.

                “Glad we can agree on that
” Lucien whispered.

                 

                (OH MY GOSH I JUST REALIZED!!! So freedom
Fenrys is missing a leg, but he has a replacement one instead, (I’m thinking it’s like one of those leather/wood or whatever ones, I still gotta figure it out) but later what if he meets Bucky with his metal arm! 😭)

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                GodlyFantasy12
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                  Also, I kinda wanna share what exactly happened to Fenrys



                  mention of pregnancy things but nothing bad

                   

                  So, Fenrys had what is called Amniotic Band Syndrome, and you can look this up,  but basically what happens Is the sac is damaged during pregnancy, creating string like tissues that entangle around  the baby or parts of the baby or umbilical cord inside. They can become so tight that some parts of the body must be amputated (which is what happened to Fenrys’ leg.)

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                  #133032
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                    @godlyfantasy12. Ooh…Viola meeting Corvina’s youngest would be interesting, based on what you’ve mentioned about the youngest…đŸ€”

                    Also…CADEN AND LUCIEN’S DYNAMIC…I JUST…😍😍😍😍😍😍

                    (OH MY GOSH I JUST REALIZED!!! So freedom
Fenrys is missing a leg, but he has a replacement one instead, (I’m thinking it’s like one of those leather/wood or whatever ones, I still gotta figure it out) but later what if he meets Bucky with his metal arm! 😭)

                    *GASPS* Oh. My. Gosh!!! AHHHH!!!!!!! YESSSSSS!!!!! 😭😭😭😭😭

                    But for now…Bucky Boi and the two others he’s with are gonna meet up with the group you just did! 😉

                    Steve

                    They walked down the hall, their boots clicking against the floor where there wasn’t carpet.

                    It was a castle…like the two times they’d been in a castle and met all of those people.

                    Leon. Isabel. Kursk. Dante. Frida. Adolphus. Dietrich. Reuben.

                    And many others.

                    “This seems familiar.”

                    Steve turned, smiled, and nodded at his best friend. “Sure is, Buck. This one seems a little different though…maybe it’s a different castle.”

                    “How can you tell the difference? They’re both barely lit up.”

                    Steve laughed. “I guess you’re right, but there’s a bit of a difference.”

                    Bucky shrugged.

                    Ryo, with his stuffed bear, Mr. Bear, in hand, smiled brightly. Lifted his arms up. “Bucky! Bucky!”

                    Bucky smiled and bent down to pick Ryo up, swinging him up onto his hip, holding him with his metal arm.

                    Ryo giggled and wrapped his arms around Bucky’s neck.

                    Steve smiled, when he heard something.

                    He instantly pulled out his shield. “Someone’s close by.”

                    He saw Bucky’s body tense, and Steve glanced forward.

                    Someone was up ahead…maybe behind the corner.

                    Steve put one hand up. “You stay here with Ryo, Buck, I’ll check this out.”

                    Bucky nodded, so Steve slowly crept forward, his grip on his shield tightening with each step he took.

                    #133033
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                      @godlyfantasy12. Ooh, I see.

                      Poor baby. 😭😭😭

                      #133036
                      GodlyFantasy12
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                        @freedomwriter76 so since I don’t have it all figured out I’m just gonna not go into detail on Fenrys’ Artificial limb too much, because it also has to be something he can shift with so I’ll have to get some advice with it.

                        Just know I kinda imagine it as like a mix of wood and leather that maybe he can like adjust as needed and such, but he still sorta limps with it a bit.

                         

                        Fenrys

                        “Hear anything?”

                        Fenrys brought his head back in from the open windowsill. He shook his head. “No, nothing.”

                        Aria frowned, brows lowering. She turned, her hood swaying as she did so. She lowered it, allowing Fenrys to get a clear look at her face and the brown curls that framed it.

                        She turned to face him, her deep brown eyes searching. Seeing. Through him?

                        Aria was always a bit of a
mysterious one.

                        She cocked a brow. “What are you thinking?”

                        He blinked. He was wondering that about her. He looked back out the window at the morning sky.

                        The terrain was unfamiliar, though that wasn’t saying much, considering he’d never left home before.

                        None of them had.

                        He swallowed, again reminded of how wholly unprepared they all were for this.

                        “Just
thinking.”

                        “Well, we’ve plenty of time to do that as we search.” She offered a small smile. “I’m sure all of our brothers are concerned about us.”

                        Fenrys met her gaze, returning her smile. “Heh
yea. I’m sure.” He looked down.

                        Knocked his fist against the mix of materials that was his right “leg.”

                        Aria’s brows furrowed. “That’s not what I meant. Your brothers know how capable you are. Trust me, I’ve seen you beat them in our sparring matches plenty of times.”

                        Fenrys couldn’t help but laugh at that, though he couldn’t help but wonder if his brothers ever let him win.

                        But
they wouldn’t do that, would they?

                        A hand touched his shoulder.

                        “Come on. If we find everyone else before them, it gives you another chance to show them up.” Aria playfully smirked, a glint of mischief in her eye.

                        Fenrys let out a hearty laugh.

                         

                         

                         

                         

                        OK
.yall
writing that


                         

                        im kinda shipping Fenrys and Aria now!!

                         

                         

                        so I have a question. How do y’all feel about people marrying like for instance twins marry other twins so they’re sister in laws but not technically related is it ok if they marry someone else in that family? Does that make sense?

                         

                        my friends say that’s ok lol but I always thought it was weird? But if it is that makes thing sooo complicated. I think I’m just worrying over nothing.

                         

                         

                        Im asking because, Lucien and Hadassah are an item (Corvina’s eldest)

                         

                        Corvina is November’s sister,

                         

                        Ara is November’s wife

                         

                        so If Fenrys and Aria get together

                        and Lucien and Hadassah get together, would that be ok, or weird?

                         

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                          @godlyfantasy12. For that instance, I don’t see it as too weird, bc they’re not really related, like in the case of Hadassah and Lucien, and if they are, they’re considered distant relatives, y’know?

                          Guess I should be my group now then, huh? 😜

                          Isabel

                          Isabel walked down the hall in between her husband and her brother-in-law, a protective hand over her stomach.

                          The baby was due almost any day now.

                          Jonathan smiled softly and wrapped an arm around her. “You okay?”

                          Isabel offered her husband a small smile. Nodded. “I’m fine.”

                          Eli offered them both a small smile even though he couldn’t hear what they were saying, and Isabel offered her brother-in-law a warm smile.

                          But all three of them paused when they heard two voices.

                          One masculine, one feminine, but both of them fairly younger-sounding.

                          Jonathan grabbed Isabel’s hand and squeezed it. “Someone’s close…”

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                            @freedomwriter76

                            AHH RYOOOO! So cute.

                            AND YAAAY!!!

                            Lucien

                            Lucien and Caden turned, ears picking up on the subtle sound of footsteps echoing nearby. The two met eyes.

                            Puck raised a brow, crossing his arms. “What’s with the twin-sense?”

                            “Stay here.” Lucien said sternly, pointing to where Puck stood.

                            “You’re not my dad,” Puck glared. Lucien gawked, incredulous. Caden rubbed the back of his head.

                            “Just
stay, Puck, alright?” Caden said. Puck let out a sigh.

                            Lucien and Caden stepped ahead of the younger boy, Lucien pulling out his bow and a single arrow, lowering into position.

                            Caden listened. “Whoever it is, they’re coming closer
” He whispered. The blonde looked back, making sure Puck still remained in place.

                            Lucien’s eyes narrowed, fingers tensing against the string of his bow as the footsteps continued, in tune with the beating of the twins hearts (since Fen isn’t here they’re called twins)

                            A figure emerged from the opening, lowered in a similar position as Lucien, though a few years older then him, and holding a colorful shield before him.

                            The boys and young man stood at a stand still, none willing to move.

                            The blonde stranger raised a brow, studying the twins, and then the boy behind them. Until Caden moved to block his view.

                            Slowly, shield still held in front of him, the stranger stood.

                            “And who are you?” Lucien asked, voice low.

                             

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                              @godlyfantasy12. IKR!? Isn’t he just the CUTEST!? 😍😍😍😍

                              Steve

                              Two boys were both crouched low to the floor, in the same position Steve was in, the one with green eyes holding a bow and an arrow.

                              No one moved for a long moment.

                              They looked…fairly…odd, come to think of it. Dressed odd, at least.

                              Steve studied them. Raised an eyebrow before seeing another boy back behind them.

                              The boy with yellow eyes moved, blocking Steve’s view.

                              Steve stood, making sure his shield was still in front of him.

                              The boy who still remained crouched spoke low, “And who are you?”

                              “I’m Steve. Steve Rogers. I mean you no harm….who are you three?”

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                                Aria

                                The two continued down the hall, at a slightly slower pace, but Aria would never bring that up to Fenrys.

                                She knew he already struggle with the disabilities that his leg brought.

                                Despite what everyone else thought, and said, it seemed Fenrys always thought he had to prove himself and push himself harder.

                                Perhaps he was a bit slower then some when walking, but other then that? He was as strong in heart, cunning in mind and courageous in soul as any other. Perhaps even more so, because of what he had been through.

                                If only he believed it.

                                “Aria, wait.” A hand on her shoulder made her pause.

                                “What? What is it?” She looked back, eyes automatically drifting to his leg, though she hated herself for it.

                                “I heard something
”

                                Aria narrowed her eyes, looking ahead. Her hand went to her dagger, hidden under her cloak. She pulled her hood over her head as Fenrys adjusted the leather on his right leg.

                                “What do you hear?”

                                “I think
sounds like a woman.”

                                “A woman?”

                                “Yea. They stopped though.”

                                “Think they’re friendly?”

                                Fenrys was quiet for a moment. “One way to find out.”

                                Aria let out a small sigh. Nodded. “Suppose you’re right.” She relaxed slightly, trying to tap into her more, princess like stature.

                                How did Aaron do this?

                                Her mother?

                                She took a step forward, hand still hovering over her hidden dagger.

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                                  Caden

                                  Caden glanced at his brother, who still looked wary. Slowly, Lucien stood, bowstring still held tight.

                                  “Steve
alright Steve. State your business. Did you bring us here?”

                                  Steve cocked a brow, and then, realization seemed to dawn on his face. He shook his head, slowly lowering his shield, but only a bit.

                                  “No
I didn’t bring you here. I have a feeling we’re in the same boat. Let me guess, you’ve no idea how you got here.”

                                  Caden and Lucien exchanged another glance. Steve gave a small smile.

                                  “I have to admit, neither do I
”

                                  Caden tilted his head.

                                  He
believed him.

                                  “Lucien
” He whispered.

                                  Lucien met his brother’s eyes. Then, slowly rose, lowering his bow and arrow. He nodded at Steve.

                                  “Alright.” Lucien placed the bow back on his back, and the arrow back in his quiver. “My brother seems to believe you, and I trust him.” Lucien then smiled, extending a hand. “Name’s Lucien Beowulf. This is one of my triplet brothers Caden.”

                                  Steve raised a brow, looking back and forth from Lucien to Caden.

                                  The two laughed.

                                  “We’re fraternal.” Caden explained.

                                  Steve made an “O” with his mouth, nodding.

                                  “And this is-”

                                  “Name’s Puck.” Puck pushed his way through, hands on his hips. He glared up at Steve. “You alone, Steven?”

                                   

                                   

                                  XD

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