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February 15, 2023 at 2:33 pm #133004Anonymous
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@godlyfantasy12. Yep, and I may add more later too! đ đđ
Sooo…I think I’ll break my groups into smaller groups, for when you and I both add more, lol.
Okay, so…I guess we can have these groups meet each other (and you can change things up if you want! đ):
Jonathan/Isabel/Eli ~ Aria/Fenrys
Steve/Bucky/Ryo ~ Lucien/Caden/Puck (just bc I think it’d be interesting…đđđ)
And then that still leaves Madelene/Alex and Viola for my charries. đ
Lily
âAwesome!â Bren cried.
Lily smiled, but it quickly faded.
November had…disappeared…?
She knew the world wasn’t exactly…safe…after all, she was a grown woman now, not a little innocent girl…but disappearing for no reason?
But she smiled, knowing she needed to be there for these two boys that needed someone to rely on. “Well, you two can come with me, Elias, and Albert, if you’d like. We can help you find your sister.”
February 15, 2023 at 2:34 pm #133005NOOO!!! November!! What happened?!?
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Aww Ryo!!! He’s so adorable <3<3
And Steve!! Bucky!!!
And girl, I’m sorry you haven’t been feeling well!! I hope you feel better soon :). You were missed!!
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February 15, 2023 at 2:37 pm #133006Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Aww Ryo!!! Heâs so adorable <3<3
AHH!!! IKR!? đđđđđ
And Steve!! Bucky!!!
YESSS!!! Ma BOIS!!!! đ€©đ€©đ€©đ€©
And girl, Iâm sorry you havenât been feeling well!! I hope you feel better soon :). You were missed!!
Aww, thanks girl!!! đđđ I’m doing better today, just still have a sore throat and I’m tired. đ Awwwwww…you’re so sweet. đđđ
February 15, 2023 at 2:39 pm #133007@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
And yes, I’ll try to RP later today as my boys. I’m about to go to a nature park with my dad and brothers, to go on a hike! But when I get back I might be able to đ
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February 15, 2023 at 2:40 pm #133008Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@lightoverdarkness6. Sounds good!!! Have fun on your hike!!! đđđ
February 15, 2023 at 3:18 pm #133023@freedomwriter76 oooh a villain yesss!!!
Iâm now imagining Viola meeting Corvinaâs youngest!!!
(I havenât introduced any of corvinaâs girls yetâŠbut out of all of themâŠher youngest is the most morally gray andâŠwellâŠthe most likely to go the wrong way đđŹ)
also imma RP as some of the others! @lightoverdarkness6 feel free to join us
Caden
âWhoo,â Lucien whistled, placing a hand on his knee, which was pulled to his chest. âThis place could use a bit of work.â
Caden looked around at the dingy looking hall they had woken too and couldnât help but agree. He could just imagine the complaints heâd be hearing from his âUncleâ if he were here.
He chuckled.
âBut hey, it beats being outside,â Lucien laid back, placing his arms behind his head and closing his eyes as if preparing to go back to sleep.
Caden shook his head, âFor you maybe! I happen to like sleeping outside. Makes me feel more attune with my wolf side,â He raised his brows as he said this, placing his hands on his hips and striking a daring pose.
Lucien spit out a laugh. âWolf side? The only part of you that even somewhat resembles a wolf is your sorry excuse of a shifter form. And even then you look like a golden retriever. Benji is more wolf then you!â
Caden sputtered with feigned hurt, kicking his brother in the side. Lucien rolled, laughing.
âI will have you know that my golden retriever has come in handy many times!â
âYea, when we play fetch.â
Caden pushed his tongue into his cheek, smiling coyly. âYouâre something else.â
Lucien shrugged, also smiling.
(Aaaahhh I am loving writing these twoooo)
Sitting up, Lucien stretched and sighed. âI guess we should probably try to figure out where in AĂș we are, huh?â
âOr at least where everyone else is.â
âMm, yea that might be a good idea.â
Caden looked up, noticing the dimly lit sconces on the walls. He pursed his lips. âI didnât see any sign of Fenrys before I woke you.â
Lucienâs green eyes narrowed slightly. âIâm sure heâs somewhere around here.â
âI donât see why heâd leave usâŠâ
âFor that matter, I donât see why the others would either.â
âWell, I can understand why they might leave you,â Caden said cheekily.
âHa ha. Seriously though, were we brought here?â
âWouldnât we have felt it? Even if theyâd knocked us out?â
âMaybe they drugged usâŠâ
Caden frowned at that, biting his bottom lip. If that was the caseâŠwho knew what these people, whoever they were had in mind for all of them. Or where the others were.
What if something terrible had already happened to them?
To Fenrys?
âHeyâŠâ Caden met his brotherâs green eyes. âDonât think like that, alright. No good comes from it.â
Caden nodded. âYeaâŠalright.â
Lucien stood, dusting himself off. âWell, guess we should try to find some of the others. No use just sitting around huh?â
âAbout time. Thought you two were gonna stay there all day.â
Caden and Lucien jerked around, Lucien gripped his bow from behind his back, ready to aim it at will, although the voice was familiar.
Their eyes widened.
âPuck?!â
The white-haired boy leaned against an opening a few feet away, arms crossed. He   blinked slowly, blue with purple mixing.
âHow long have you been standing there?!â Lucien asked, incredulous.
âLong enough.â The kid walked from his post up to the two older teens. The height difference was obvious, with Puck only reaching slightly below their chest.
Not that it seemed to intimidate him in the slightest.
âWhy didnât you say anything?â Caden tilted his head, like a curious puppy.
âNo reason to. If you guys didnât notice me, then there was no reason to alert you of my presence.â He smiled coyly.
Lucien narrowed his eyes. âWell,â he drawled, âHave you seen anyone else?â
âNope. And I donât think we were drugged either.â
âWhat makes you say that?â Caden asked.
âI think the side affects would be more obvious donât you? Weâd still feel it?â The boy cocked a brow. âObviouslyâŠâ
Lucien let out a long sigh/growl, raising his eyes to the ceiling. âAlright, whatever, it doesnât really matter. Point is, we need to find everyone else.â
Puck smiled, nodding as if he were a sweet angel.
âGlad we can agree on thatâŠâ Lucien whispered.
(OH MY GOSH I JUST REALIZED!!! So freedomâŠFenrys is missing a leg, but he has a replacement one instead, (Iâm thinking itâs like one of those leather/wood or whatever ones, I still gotta figure it out) but later what if he meets Bucky with his metal arm! đ)
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#ProtectSebFebruary 15, 2023 at 3:28 pm #133028Also, I kinda wanna share what exactly happened to FenrysâŠ
mention of pregnancy things but nothing badSo, Fenrys had what is called Amniotic Band Syndrome, and you can look this up,  but basically what happens Is the sac is damaged during pregnancy, creating string like tissues that entangle around  the baby or parts of the baby or umbilical cord inside. They can become so tight that some parts of the body must be amputated (which is what happened to Fenrysâ leg.)
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#ProtectSebFebruary 15, 2023 at 3:38 pm #133032Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. Ooh…Viola meeting Corvina’s youngest would be interesting, based on what you’ve mentioned about the youngest…đ€
Also…CADEN AND LUCIEN’S DYNAMIC…I JUST…đđđđđđ
(OH MY GOSH I JUST REALIZED!!! So freedomâŠFenrys is missing a leg, but he has a replacement one instead, (Iâm thinking itâs like one of those leather/wood or whatever ones, I still gotta figure it out) but later what if he meets Bucky with his metal arm! đ)
*GASPS*Â Oh. My. Gosh!!! AHHHH!!!!!!! YESSSSSS!!!!! đđđđđ
But for now…Bucky Boi and the two others he’s with are gonna meet up with the group you just did! đ
Steve
They walked down the hall, their boots clicking against the floor where there wasn’t carpet.
It was a castle…like the two times they’d been in a castle and met all of those people.
Leon. Isabel. Kursk. Dante. Frida. Adolphus. Dietrich. Reuben.
And many others.
“This seems familiar.”
Steve turned, smiled, and nodded at his best friend. “Sure is, Buck. This one seems a little different though…maybe it’s a different castle.”
“How can you tell the difference? They’re both barely lit up.”
Steve laughed. “I guess you’re right, but there’s a bit of a difference.”
Bucky shrugged.
Ryo, with his stuffed bear, Mr. Bear, in hand, smiled brightly. Lifted his arms up. “Bucky! Bucky!”
Bucky smiled and bent down to pick Ryo up, swinging him up onto his hip, holding him with his metal arm.
Ryo giggled and wrapped his arms around Bucky’s neck.
Steve smiled, when he heard something.
He instantly pulled out his shield. “Someone’s close by.”
He saw Bucky’s body tense, and Steve glanced forward.
Someone was up ahead…maybe behind the corner.
Steve put one hand up. “You stay here with Ryo, Buck, I’ll check this out.”
Bucky nodded, so Steve slowly crept forward, his grip on his shield tightening with each step he took.
February 15, 2023 at 3:39 pm #133033Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. Ooh, I see.
Poor baby. đđđ
February 15, 2023 at 3:53 pm #133036@freedomwriter76 so since I donât have it all figured out Iâm just gonna not go into detail on Fenrysâ Artificial limb too much, because it also has to be something he can shift with so Iâll have to get some advice with it.
Just know I kinda imagine it as like a mix of wood and leather that maybe he can like adjust as needed and such, but he still sorta limps with it a bit.
Fenrys
âHear anything?â
Fenrys brought his head back in from the open windowsill. He shook his head. âNo, nothing.â
Aria frowned, brows lowering. She turned, her hood swaying as she did so. She lowered it, allowing Fenrys to get a clear look at her face and the brown curls that framed it.
She turned to face him, her deep brown eyes searching. Seeing. Through him?
Aria was always a bit of aâŠmysterious one.
She cocked a brow. âWhat are you thinking?â
He blinked. He was wondering that about her. He looked back out the window at the morning sky.
The terrain was unfamiliar, though that wasnât saying much, considering heâd never left home before.
None of them had.
He swallowed, again reminded of how wholly unprepared they all were for this.
âJustâŠthinking.â
âWell, weâve plenty of time to do that as we search.â She offered a small smile. âIâm sure all of our brothers are concerned about us.â
Fenrys met her gaze, returning her smile. âHehâŠyea. Iâm sure.â He looked down.
Knocked his fist against the mix of materials that was his right âleg.â
Ariaâs brows furrowed. âThatâs not what I meant. Your brothers know how capable you are. Trust me, Iâve seen you beat them in our sparring matches plenty of times.â
Fenrys couldnât help but laugh at that, though he couldnât help but wonder if his brothers ever let him win.
ButâŠthey wouldnât do that, would they?
A hand touched his shoulder.
âCome on. If we find everyone else before them, it gives you another chance to show them up.â Aria playfully smirked, a glint of mischief in her eye.
Fenrys let out a hearty laugh.
OKâŠ.yallâŠwriting thatâŠ
im kinda shipping Fenrys and Aria now!!
so I have a question. How do yâall feel about people marrying like for instance twins marry other twins so theyâre sister in laws but not technically related is it ok if they marry someone else in that family? Does that make sense?
my friends say thatâs ok lol but I always thought it was weird? But if it is that makes thing sooo complicated. I think Iâm just worrying over nothing.
Im asking because, Lucien and Hadassah are an item (Corvinaâs eldest)
Corvina is Novemberâs sister,
Ara is Novemberâs wife
so If Fenrys and Aria get together
and Lucien and Hadassah get together, would that be ok, or weird?
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#ProtectSebFebruary 15, 2023 at 4:02 pm #133038Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. For that instance, I don’t see it as too weird, bc they’re not really related, like in the case of Hadassah and Lucien, and if they are, they’re considered distant relatives, y’know?
Guess I should be my group now then, huh? đ
Isabel
Isabel walked down the hall in between her husband and her brother-in-law, a protective hand over her stomach.
The baby was due almost any day now.
Jonathan smiled softly and wrapped an arm around her. “You okay?”
Isabel offered her husband a small smile. Nodded. “I’m fine.”
Eli offered them both a small smile even though he couldn’t hear what they were saying, and Isabel offered her brother-in-law a warm smile.
But all three of them paused when they heard two voices.
One masculine, one feminine, but both of them fairly younger-sounding.
Jonathan grabbed Isabel’s hand and squeezed it. “Someone’s close…”
February 15, 2023 at 4:06 pm #133039@freedomwriter76
AHH RYOOOO! So cute.
AND YAAAY!!!
Lucien
Lucien and Caden turned, ears picking up on the subtle sound of footsteps echoing nearby. The two met eyes.
Puck raised a brow, crossing his arms. âWhatâs with the twin-sense?â
âStay here.â Lucien said sternly, pointing to where Puck stood.
âYouâre not my dad,â Puck glared. Lucien gawked, incredulous. Caden rubbed the back of his head.
âJustâŠstay, Puck, alright?â Caden said. Puck let out a sigh.
Lucien and Caden stepped ahead of the younger boy, Lucien pulling out his bow and a single arrow, lowering into position.
Caden listened. âWhoever it is, theyâre coming closerâŠâ He whispered. The blonde looked back, making sure Puck still remained in place.
Lucienâs eyes narrowed, fingers tensing against the string of his bow as the footsteps continued, in tune with the beating of the twins hearts (since Fen isnât here theyâre called twins)
A figure emerged from the opening, lowered in a similar position as Lucien, though a few years older then him, and holding a colorful shield before him.
The boys and young man stood at a stand still, none willing to move.
The blonde stranger raised a brow, studying the twins, and then the boy behind them. Until Caden moved to block his view.
Slowly, shield still held in front of him, the stranger stood.
âAnd who are you?â Lucien asked, voice low.
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#ProtectSebFebruary 15, 2023 at 4:13 pm #133040Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. IKR!? Isn’t he just the CUTEST!? đđđđ
Steve
Two boys were both crouched low to the floor, in the same position Steve was in, the one with green eyes holding a bow and an arrow.
No one moved for a long moment.
They looked…fairly…odd, come to think of it. Dressed odd, at least.
Steve studied them. Raised an eyebrow before seeing another boy back behind them.
The boy with yellow eyes moved, blocking Steve’s view.
Steve stood, making sure his shield was still in front of him.
The boy who still remained crouched spoke low, “And who are you?”
“I’m Steve. Steve Rogers. I mean you no harm….who are you three?”
February 15, 2023 at 4:13 pm #133041@freedomwriter76
Aria
The two continued down the hall, at a slightly slower pace, but Aria would never bring that up to Fenrys.
She knew he already struggle with the disabilities that his leg brought.
Despite what everyone else thought, and said, it seemed Fenrys always thought he had to prove himself and push himself harder.
Perhaps he was a bit slower then some when walking, but other then that? He was as strong in heart, cunning in mind and courageous in soul as any other. Perhaps even more so, because of what he had been through.
If only he believed it.
âAria, wait.â A hand on her shoulder made her pause.
âWhat? What is it?â She looked back, eyes automatically drifting to his leg, though she hated herself for it.
âI heard somethingâŠâ
Aria narrowed her eyes, looking ahead. Her hand went to her dagger, hidden under her cloak. She pulled her hood over her head as Fenrys adjusted the leather on his right leg.
âWhat do you hear?â
âI thinkâŠsounds like a woman.â
âA woman?â
âYea. They stopped though.â
âThink theyâre friendly?â
Fenrys was quiet for a moment. âOne way to find out.â
Aria let out a small sigh. Nodded. âSuppose youâre right.â She relaxed slightly, trying to tap into her more, princess like stature.
How did Aaron do this?
Her mother?
She took a step forward, hand still hovering over her hidden dagger.
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#ProtectSebFebruary 15, 2023 at 4:22 pm #133042@freedomwriter76
Caden
Caden glanced at his brother, who still looked wary. Slowly, Lucien stood, bowstring still held tight.
âSteveâŠalright Steve. State your business. Did you bring us here?â
Steve cocked a brow, and then, realization seemed to dawn on his face. He shook his head, slowly lowering his shield, but only a bit.
âNoâŠI didnât bring you here. I have a feeling weâre in the same boat. Let me guess, youâve no idea how you got here.â
Caden and Lucien exchanged another glance. Steve gave a small smile.
âI have to admit, neither do IâŠâ
Caden tilted his head.
HeâŠbelieved him.
âLucienâŠâ He whispered.
Lucien met his brotherâs eyes. Then, slowly rose, lowering his bow and arrow. He nodded at Steve.
âAlright.â Lucien placed the bow back on his back, and the arrow back in his quiver. âMy brother seems to believe you, and I trust him.â Lucien then smiled, extending a hand. âNameâs Lucien Beowulf. This is one of my triplet brothers Caden.â
Steve raised a brow, looking back and forth from Lucien to Caden.
The two laughed.
âWeâre fraternal.â Caden explained.
Steve made an âOâ with his mouth, nodding.
âAnd this is-â
âNameâs Puck.â Puck pushed his way through, hands on his hips. He glared up at Steve. âYou alone, Steven?â
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