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February 15, 2023 at 12:30 pm #132981
@freedomwriter76 btw @lightoverdarkness6 is gonna join us I think with Matthew and Asher later!
Aaron
Aaronās eyes narrowed, weighing the expressions of the two older men.
Could he trust them?
The young woman, Lily, seemed genuine, her energy boundless, reminding him of his GodIma Lyn.
But they could just as well have been lying.
āNice to meet you!ā The young woman spoke, ābut who are youā¦? And we saw two of youā¦whereās the other little boy?ā
Aaron felt shuffling behind him as Bren poked his head out. Aaron looked at him, eyes widened. He gripped his brotherās shoulder tight, forcing him to stay in place.
āI donāt see where thatās any of your concernā¦ā Aaron said quietly. āMy brother and I will be going now.ā
Bren looked up, brows furrowed. He opened his mouth to say something but Aaron shook his head, pulling him as he turned turned, though making sure to keep an eye on the strangers.
āBut Ron!ā Bren protested.
āNot now.ā
āBut-ā Aaron pulled him closer to the door. āWhat if they know where Aria is? They can take us to her!ā
Aaron paused. He looked down at his brother. At his bright blue eyes, shining with innocence. Trust for others. That beautiful childlike naivety that Aaron so desperately wished he had.
That heād make sure was never stolen from his little brother.
He sucked in a breath. Released it.
Turning back around, he met the eyes of the young woman, her face full of concern.
He straightened, refusing to show any fear. He was a prince. Heir to a kingdom.
Protector of his siblings and others.
Heād be brave. Strong.
āMy name is Aaron Mael Fabel. And this is my brother-ā
āIām Bren!ā The redhead smiled, his single dimple showing. Aaron couldnāt help but give a smile smile at his brotherās enthusiasm.
āBy any chanceā¦have you seen our sister?ā Aaron asked.
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#ProtectSebFebruary 15, 2023 at 12:30 pm #132982OKā¦.
I SERIOUSLY LOCE WRITING AARON AND BRENāS INTERACTIONS/RELATIONSHIP AHHHH!!!!!
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#ProtectSebFebruary 15, 2023 at 12:34 pm #132983Also! I still have more charries to introduce but for now Iām good XD
and Iām going to split them like this-
Puck will be by himself cuz heās hilarious and I want to write him like that
Caden and Lucien will be together
Aria and Fenrys
And Iāll wait on Lila till I introduce some others
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#ProtectSebFebruary 15, 2023 at 12:34 pm #132984Anonymous
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@godlyfantasy12. Ooh, yay!!! I can’t wait until she joins! ???
And AWW, BREN, AARON!!!! ???????
Albert
āBy any chanceā¦have you seen our sister?ā
Albert shifted from foot to foot.
He didn’t mind meeting new people…but new people…they often didn’t…understand him.
Not that Albert really understood himself very well.
Elias slowly shook his head, giving the two brothers a small, soft smile. “Afraid not…you two are the first people we’ve run into…we haven’t seen anyone else. But I’m sure she’s in here somewhere…”
Lily studied Bren, blinking a few times. “Hey, you look familiar! Ooh, I know!!! You look like November, a teenage boy I met in another castle similar to this one when I was little!”
February 15, 2023 at 12:36 pm #132986OOF @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 I got Cadenās eye color wrong. Itās the same as the pictures on his board. The amber gold color lol
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#ProtectSebFebruary 15, 2023 at 12:37 pm #132987Lucien Is the one with green eyes like his mom
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#ProtectSebFebruary 15, 2023 at 12:44 pm #132989@freedomwriter76 ā¦.oof Lily you donāt know the emotions youāve just brought onā¦
and uhh this is what I meant when I said you probably wouldnāt like the plot I kinda have in mind for the kidsā bookā¦.
Aaron
Brenās eyes nearly popped out of his head. He left from behind Aaron before his brother could grab him. āYou knew our father?! Really? As a boy? What was he like?!ā Bren ran up to the young woman, his excitement palpable.
āBren!ā Aaron called, but it lacked real emotion, his heart thudding into his stomach.
Aaron stared at the young woman, who was laughing sweetly at Brenās enthusiasm.
He knew it was only a matter of time until he met someone who had known his parents when they were youngerā¦
His parents had ventured throughout multiple lands, changing lives. Destinies. Futuresā¦
He knew the stories.
Some by heart.
But that didnāt make the mention of his fatherās name any less painful.
He slowly approached, until Bren looked his eyes, eyes still wide as his smile.
āShe said she met him in a castle just like this! When she was littler!ā Bren said.
Aaron gave a small smile, though it didnāt meet his eyes. He looked up at Lily, heart aching.
Already knowing the answer.
āHaveā¦have you seen him recently?ā
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#ProtectSebFebruary 15, 2023 at 1:07 pm #132991@freedomwriter76 who do you want your other charries to meet? Iām thinking either Puck (cuz I wanna write Puck XD) or maybe Caden and Lucien
GASP I SHOULD PUT CADEN AND LUCIEN WITH PUCKā¦.
ok ok change of plans I think this is what Iām gonna do⦠XD
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#ProtectSebFebruary 15, 2023 at 1:08 pm #132992Alsoā¦DONāT YALL JUST LOVE THE TRIPLETāS NAMES?!?! LIKEā¦
I am legit in luv with the names Lucien and Fenrysā¦.
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#ProtectSebFebruary 15, 2023 at 1:12 pm #132993@freedomwriter76 btw I havenāt told ya yet but I missed u big time while u were gone lol
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#ProtectSebFebruary 15, 2023 at 2:03 pm #132997Anonymous
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@godlyfantasy12. Aww…it feels wonderful knowing that you missed me. ??
And yes, their names are AMAZING!!! ????
Okay, okay…I was thinking Isabel, Jonathan, and Eli could meet Aria and Fenrys. š
And now for the RP!!!
Also…I’m terrified of seeing where the sequel storyline is…??
Lily
Something was wrong…desperately wrong.
Aaron smiled, but it didn’t meet his eyes. āHaveā¦have you seen him recently?ā
Lily slowly shook her head. “No…I-I haven’t seen him since I was five…”
Something was wrong.
“Is…is something wrong with November…?”
February 15, 2023 at 2:08 pm #132999Anonymous
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@godlyfantasy12. @lightoverdarkness6. Sooo…I put a group in the character castle, but I don’t know if there’s really anyone for them to meet, so I’m moving them here instead. š
Here they are!!!

Top Row (left to right)- Madelene, Alex, Ryo
Bottom Row (left to right)- Steve, Bucky
First!!!
Name: Madelene Natalina SmithĀ (Turgenev is her real last name)
Age: 31
Personality: Sweet, kind, highly intelligent, devoted, strong in her values/beliefs/morals, always aches to helps others, generous, empathetic
Looks: Bright blonde long slightly wavy hair, bright blue eyes, pale skin. Wears a simple navy blue sweater, a knee-length black skirt, black ankle boots, and a white pearl necklace.
Next up!!!
Name: Alex LeahĀ (doesnāt have a last name)
Age: 18
Personality: Loving, creative, passionate, devoted, protective, highly intelligent, sarcastic at times, friendly, kind, welcoming, always loves people, never judges anyone
Looks: Black slightly wavy shoulder-length hair, bright green eyes, pale skin, freckles. Wears a white long sleeve shirt with red stripes, a jean jacket overtop, ripped blue jeans with black leggings underneath, and black combat boots.
Next!!!
Name: Ryo Leon (doesnāt have a last name)
Age: 2 1/2 years old
Personality: Sweet, loving, energetic, excitable, kind, outgoing (meaning not shy at all!!! ?), very loud at times, intelligent, silly
Looks: Black straight hair that comes right below his ears, dark brown almond-shaped eyes, pale skin. Wearing a white T-shirt with a red T-Rex on it, a blue jacket, blue jeans, and blue SpongeBob sneakers (have all of the main characters on it but theyāre blue like the seaā¦Ryo is just adorable, yāall. ???)
Next up!!!
Name: Steven (Steve) Grant Rogers
Age: Technically like 99 or somethingā¦but weāre gonna go with more like 25 years old ??
Personality: Strong, devoted, patriotic (obviously! ?), kind, forgiving, never afraid to admit when heās wrong, friendly, protective
Looks: Blonde slightly wavy hair, blueish-green eyes, pale skin, has a beard. Wearing his Infinity War-style uniform and has his shield (this is aligning with my fanfics, yāall, not the canon MCU, okay? ???)
Other: Has some problems with guilt, and has PTSD
And finally!!! My Bucky Boi!!! ???
Name: James Buchanan Barnes (Bucky)
Age: Technically, like 100, but weāre going with 26 ?
Personality: Sarcastic, kind, sweet when you get to know him, loyal to a fault, a bit of a flirt from time to time, pretty quiet most of the time, competitive at times, serious when he needs to be
Looks: Dark brown hair that comes down to his shoulders, bright blue eyes, pale skin, has a beard. Has his black (with yellow stripes) vibranium arm and is wearing his Infinity War-style outfit and has multiple guns and knives on him.
Other: Deals with a LOT of guilt, trauma, and has PTSD.
Oh, and his treatment in Wakanda isnāt over yet, so the trigger words still work on him, so he can still be turned into the Winter Soldier.
Oh, and I’m gonna introduce a villain too…bc why not!? ??
February 15, 2023 at 2:14 pm #133000Anonymous
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Oh, and also…

Name: Viola Juliana Kurt
Age: 32
Personality: Controlling, manipulative, cruel, abusive, uncaring, hard-working, devoted, charismatic, intelligent
Looks: Straight black chin-length hair styled like the picture, bright blue eyes, pale skin. Wears a white long-sleeve button up shirt with a black business jacket overtop, a black knee-length skirt, black heels, and red bracelets on both wrists. Also wears a black satchel on her right shoulder that holds a couple items.
February 15, 2023 at 2:16 pm #133001Anonymous
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Sooo…Viola shall be on her lonesome, because she’s that way, lol, but I may split the other group into 2 smaller groups…IDK… @godlyfantasy12, what do you think?
February 15, 2023 at 2:25 pm #133003@freedomwriter76 YAAAAAY!!!!!! Cuz we have a lot of charries that need to have groups lol!! And Iāll be adding some more later ?
Bren
Bren watched as his brotherās face fell, eyes looking down at his shoes. The redhead frowned. He stepped over to his brother, gripping his shirt.
āRonnie?ā
Aaron looked at him, a smile now on his lips, but Bren didnāt see the twinkle in his eyes that he usually saw.
Ever since dad had disappeared, Aaron hadnāt been quite as happy as he used to beā¦
āIām alright,ā He said softly, running a hand through Brenās soft curls. It didnāt sound very believable though.
āIsā¦is something wrong with November?ā Lily asked.
āAhā¦ā Aaron looked away, a hand still on Brenās head. āWeā¦we donāt know.ā
Bren frowned, slowly wrapping his arms around his big brotherās torso.
āHeā¦lef-ā His eyes rocketed to Bren, āD-Disappearedā¦ā
āWeāre out looking for him! Like an adventure!ā Bren said.
Aaron let out a mirthless chuckle. āYeaā¦ā
His brows quirked, his eyes looking to Lily, scanning her. āWaitā¦you said you wereā¦five, when you met him? And he was a teenager? Ourā¦our father isnāt that oldā¦ā
Lily gave a knowing smile. āAhā¦these castles tend to have a mind of their own when it comes to time.ā
Aaron slowly nodded, while Bren cried, āAwesome!ā
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