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February 15, 2023 at 12:30 pm #132981
@freedomwriter76 btw @lightoverdarkness6 is gonna join us I think with Matthew and Asher later!
Aaron
Aaron’s eyes narrowed, weighing the expressions of the two older men.
Could he trust them?
The young woman, Lily, seemed genuine, her energy boundless, reminding him of his GodIma Lyn.
But they could just as well have been lying.
“Nice to meet you!” The young woman spoke, “but who are you…? And we saw two of you…where’s the other little boy?”
Aaron felt shuffling behind him as Bren poked his head out. Aaron looked at him, eyes widened. He gripped his brother’s shoulder tight, forcing him to stay in place.
“I don’t see where that’s any of your concern…” Aaron said quietly. “My brother and I will be going now.”
Bren looked up, brows furrowed. He opened his mouth to say something but Aaron shook his head, pulling him as he turned turned, though making sure to keep an eye on the strangers.
“But Ron!” Bren protested.
“Not now.”
“But-” Aaron pulled him closer to the door. “What if they know where Aria is? They can take us to her!”
Aaron paused. He looked down at his brother. At his bright blue eyes, shining with innocence. Trust for others. That beautiful childlike naivety that Aaron so desperately wished he had.
That he’d make sure was never stolen from his little brother.
He sucked in a breath. Released it.
Turning back around, he met the eyes of the young woman, her face full of concern.
He straightened, refusing to show any fear. He was a prince. Heir to a kingdom.
Protector of his siblings and others.
He’d be brave. Strong.
“My name is Aaron Mael Fabel. And this is my brother-”
“I’m Bren!” The redhead smiled, his single dimple showing. Aaron couldn’t help but give a smile smile at his brother’s enthusiasm.
“By any chance…have you seen our sister?” Aaron asked.
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#ProtectSebFebruary 15, 2023 at 12:30 pm #132982OK….
I SERIOUSLY LOCE WRITING AARON AND BREN’S INTERACTIONS/RELATIONSHIP AHHHH!!!!!
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#ProtectSebFebruary 15, 2023 at 12:34 pm #132983Also! I still have more charries to introduce but for now I’m good XD
and I’m going to split them like this-
Puck will be by himself cuz he’s hilarious and I want to write him like that
Caden and Lucien will be together
Aria and Fenrys
And I’ll wait on Lila till I introduce some others
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#ProtectSebFebruary 15, 2023 at 12:34 pm #132984Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. Ooh, yay!!! I can’t wait until she joins! 😉💖🤩
And AWW, BREN, AARON!!!! 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Albert
“By any chance…have you seen our sister?”
Albert shifted from foot to foot.
He didn’t mind meeting new people…but new people…they often didn’t…understand him.
Not that Albert really understood himself very well.
Elias slowly shook his head, giving the two brothers a small, soft smile. “Afraid not…you two are the first people we’ve run into…we haven’t seen anyone else. But I’m sure she’s in here somewhere…”
Lily studied Bren, blinking a few times. “Hey, you look familiar! Ooh, I know!!! You look like November, a teenage boy I met in another castle similar to this one when I was little!”
February 15, 2023 at 12:36 pm #132986OOF @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 I got Caden’s eye color wrong. It’s the same as the pictures on his board. The amber gold color lol
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#ProtectSebFebruary 15, 2023 at 12:37 pm #132987Lucien Is the one with green eyes like his mom
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#ProtectSebFebruary 15, 2023 at 12:44 pm #132989@freedomwriter76 ….oof Lily you don’t know the emotions you’ve just brought on…
and uhh this is what I meant when I said you probably wouldn’t like the plot I kinda have in mind for the kids’ book….
Aaron
Bren’s eyes nearly popped out of his head. He left from behind Aaron before his brother could grab him. “You knew our father?! Really? As a boy? What was he like?!” Bren ran up to the young woman, his excitement palpable.
“Bren!” Aaron called, but it lacked real emotion, his heart thudding into his stomach.
Aaron stared at the young woman, who was laughing sweetly at Bren’s enthusiasm.
He knew it was only a matter of time until he met someone who had known his parents when they were younger…
His parents had ventured throughout multiple lands, changing lives. Destinies. Futures…
He knew the stories.
Some by heart.
But that didn’t make the mention of his father’s name any less painful.
He slowly approached, until Bren looked his eyes, eyes still wide as his smile.
“She said she met him in a castle just like this! When she was littler!” Bren said.
Aaron gave a small smile, though it didn’t meet his eyes. He looked up at Lily, heart aching.
Already knowing the answer.
“Have…have you seen him recently?”
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#ProtectSebFebruary 15, 2023 at 1:07 pm #132991@freedomwriter76 who do you want your other charries to meet? I’m thinking either Puck (cuz I wanna write Puck XD) or maybe Caden and Lucien
GASP I SHOULD PUT CADEN AND LUCIEN WITH PUCK….
ok ok change of plans I think this is what I’m gonna do… XD
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#ProtectSebFebruary 15, 2023 at 1:08 pm #132992Also…DON’T YALL JUST LOVE THE TRIPLET’S NAMES?!?! LIKE…
I am legit in luv with the names Lucien and Fenrys….
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#ProtectSebFebruary 15, 2023 at 1:12 pm #132993@freedomwriter76 btw I haven’t told ya yet but I missed u big time while u were gone lol
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#ProtectSebFebruary 15, 2023 at 2:03 pm #132997Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. Aww…it feels wonderful knowing that you missed me. 💕😊
And yes, their names are AMAZING!!! 🤩🤩🤩🤩
Okay, okay…I was thinking Isabel, Jonathan, and Eli could meet Aria and Fenrys. 😉
And now for the RP!!!
Also…I’m terrified of seeing where the sequel storyline is…😭😱
Lily
Something was wrong…desperately wrong.
Aaron smiled, but it didn’t meet his eyes. “Have…have you seen him recently?”
Lily slowly shook her head. “No…I-I haven’t seen him since I was five…”
Something was wrong.
“Is…is something wrong with November…?”
February 15, 2023 at 2:08 pm #132999Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. @lightoverdarkness6. Sooo…I put a group in the character castle, but I don’t know if there’s really anyone for them to meet, so I’m moving them here instead. 🙂
Here they are!!!
Top Row (left to right)- Madelene, Alex, Ryo
Bottom Row (left to right)- Steve, Bucky
First!!!
Name: Madelene Natalina Smith (Turgenev is her real last name)
Age: 31
Personality: Sweet, kind, highly intelligent, devoted, strong in her values/beliefs/morals, always aches to helps others, generous, empathetic
Looks: Bright blonde long slightly wavy hair, bright blue eyes, pale skin. Wears a simple navy blue sweater, a knee-length black skirt, black ankle boots, and a white pearl necklace.
Next up!!!
Name: Alex Leah (doesn’t have a last name)
Age: 18
Personality: Loving, creative, passionate, devoted, protective, highly intelligent, sarcastic at times, friendly, kind, welcoming, always loves people, never judges anyone
Looks: Black slightly wavy shoulder-length hair, bright green eyes, pale skin, freckles. Wears a white long sleeve shirt with red stripes, a jean jacket overtop, ripped blue jeans with black leggings underneath, and black combat boots.
Next!!!
Name: Ryo Leon (doesn’t have a last name)
Age: 2 1/2 years old
Personality: Sweet, loving, energetic, excitable, kind, outgoing (meaning not shy at all!!! 🤣), very loud at times, intelligent, silly
Looks: Black straight hair that comes right below his ears, dark brown almond-shaped eyes, pale skin. Wearing a white T-shirt with a red T-Rex on it, a blue jacket, blue jeans, and blue SpongeBob sneakers (have all of the main characters on it but they’re blue like the sea…Ryo is just adorable, y’all. 😍😍😍)
Next up!!!
Name: Steven (Steve) Grant Rogers
Age: Technically like 99 or something…but we’re gonna go with more like 25 years old 😅😂
Personality: Strong, devoted, patriotic (obviously! 🤣), kind, forgiving, never afraid to admit when he’s wrong, friendly, protective
Looks: Blonde slightly wavy hair, blueish-green eyes, pale skin, has a beard. Wearing his Infinity War-style uniform and has his shield (this is aligning with my fanfics, y’all, not the canon MCU, okay? 😂😂😂)
Other: Has some problems with guilt, and has PTSD
And finally!!! My Bucky Boi!!! 😍😍😍
Name: James Buchanan Barnes (Bucky)
Age: Technically, like 100, but we’re going with 26 😂
Personality: Sarcastic, kind, sweet when you get to know him, loyal to a fault, a bit of a flirt from time to time, pretty quiet most of the time, competitive at times, serious when he needs to be
Looks: Dark brown hair that comes down to his shoulders, bright blue eyes, pale skin, has a beard. Has his black (with yellow stripes) vibranium arm and is wearing his Infinity War-style outfit and has multiple guns and knives on him.
Other: Deals with a LOT of guilt, trauma, and has PTSD.
Oh, and his treatment in Wakanda isn’t over yet, so the trigger words still work on him, so he can still be turned into the Winter Soldier.
Oh, and I’m gonna introduce a villain too…bc why not!? 😅😉
February 15, 2023 at 2:14 pm #133000Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Oh, and also…
Name: Viola Juliana Kurt
Age: 32
Personality: Controlling, manipulative, cruel, abusive, uncaring, hard-working, devoted, charismatic, intelligent
Looks: Straight black chin-length hair styled like the picture, bright blue eyes, pale skin. Wears a white long-sleeve button up shirt with a black business jacket overtop, a black knee-length skirt, black heels, and red bracelets on both wrists. Also wears a black satchel on her right shoulder that holds a couple items.
February 15, 2023 at 2:16 pm #133001Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Sooo…Viola shall be on her lonesome, because she’s that way, lol, but I may split the other group into 2 smaller groups…IDK… @godlyfantasy12, what do you think?
February 15, 2023 at 2:25 pm #133003@freedomwriter76 YAAAAAY!!!!!! Cuz we have a lot of charries that need to have groups lol!! And I’ll be adding some more later 😂
Bren
Bren watched as his brother’s face fell, eyes looking down at his shoes. The redhead frowned. He stepped over to his brother, gripping his shirt.
“Ronnie?”
Aaron looked at him, a smile now on his lips, but Bren didn’t see the twinkle in his eyes that he usually saw.
Ever since dad had disappeared, Aaron hadn’t been quite as happy as he used to be…
“I’m alright,” He said softly, running a hand through Bren’s soft curls. It didn’t sound very believable though.
“Is…is something wrong with November?” Lily asked.
“Ah…” Aaron looked away, a hand still on Bren’s head. “We…we don’t know.”
Bren frowned, slowly wrapping his arms around his big brother’s torso.
“He…lef-” His eyes rocketed to Bren, “D-Disappeared…”
“We’re out looking for him! Like an adventure!” Bren said.
Aaron let out a mirthless chuckle. “Yea…”
His brows quirked, his eyes looking to Lily, scanning her. “Wait…you said you were…five, when you met him? And he was a teenager? Our…our father isn’t that old…”
Lily gave a knowing smile. “Ah…these castles tend to have a mind of their own when it comes to time.”
Aaron slowly nodded, while Bren cried, “Awesome!”
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