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February 10, 2023 at 5:37 pm #132578
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Your charries sound awesome! I’d join this RP if I wasn’t so busy with the other one.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
February 10, 2023 at 5:49 pm #132584Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. Sorry!!! I didn’t really feel like RPing much the past 2 days. 😅
Lily
She sank down beside the wall, laughing. “That was fun! But…woo…I’m tired now…” She smiled up at Albert, who still stood, and Elias sank down beside her.
Elias smirked. “We beat you, Albert…”
Albert crossed his eyes at his younger brother, making both Lily and Elias laugh.
But suddenly, Albert tensed up and looked around. “…Did…did either of you hear that…?”
“What do you-” But then Lily heard it too…voices. Coming from nearby.
She stood. “Here…it’s coming from this door right here…”
And she reached for the doorknob, turned it, and opened the door, revealing two young boys.
February 11, 2023 at 9:34 am #132608@freedomwriter76
Aaron
“Where’s Aria?” Bren peeked around Aaron’s waist, scanning the room for any sign of their sister.
Aaron let out a breath. “Not sure…” he admitted.
A noise made him and his brother turn. A door a few paces away was opening…
Could it be…?
The door opened, revealing a young woman, much older then Aaron, and two young men the same.
Bren tilted his head, taking a single step out, but Aaron gripped his shoulder, pulling him back. His eyes narrowed.
“Stay here,” He whispered. Bren looked up at him, baby blues shining.
“But maybe they know where-”
“Stay.” Aaron put his brother behind him, never taking his eyes off the strangers. He straightened, though he couldn’t ignore his heart beating in his chest.
But he had to be brave. For Bren.
“Who are you?” He called out, a single arm still held out over his baby brother. “Are you the ones who brought us here?”
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#ProtectSebFebruary 11, 2023 at 9:36 am #132610@sarafini I’ll hopefully add some more charries later today so yours can maybe meet them if you like.
also thank u @keilah-h
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#ProtectSebFebruary 11, 2023 at 6:14 pm #132630@sarafina would your charries like to meet Aria? And then she might be with one other Charrie I’m gonna introduce in a minute. I think I’m gonna go ahead and introduce all the main ones but not RP as them….
now…just to let ya know there are quite a few (I feel like Freedom with all her charries XD) tho I do have 8 MCs….
and it is their kids sooook XD
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#ProtectSebFebruary 11, 2023 at 6:39 pm #132631@freedomwriter76 SO FIRST….I reaaaaally wanna introduce these two (ok mainly the second one XD XD but I’m gonna go in order of age for the siblings cuz it’s less confusing doing it that way)
SO PLEASE MEET…
Lila Eiddwen Hope Fabel
Lila is the firstborn of Luna and Paxton! *cue the awwws from the crowd XD*
Despite her parents being younger then the rest, she’s only a few months younger then Aria, as it took a little bit for Ara and November to be able to have children (and they all married young)
Lila is gentle, compassionate and slow to judge, gaining much of her father’s personality, mixed with her mother’s faith and ability to help and understand those around her.
Though she doesn’t have her mother’s empath gifting, she still has a wisdom beyond her years, that allows her to help and guide others when they’re at their lowest.
Though, sometimes this means she takes too much onto herself.
Gifted with her father’s “siren” ability-
(I think I’ll change the name on this, and again Paxton and Luna are the most “unresolved” if that makes sense XD on the world building part of things…so just uhh yea things are a bit blank still there)
-Lila rarely, if ever uses it, feeling it does more harm then good. She knows that it can be used to uplift and encourager, and not to control or even manipulate, and she knows her father is a master as encouraging others, with or without his gift.
But she’s secretly afraid to use it.
Afraid she’ll mess things up, or force people to do things they wouldn’t want to do.
And inside…she’s afraid she’s already done.
Because what if people don’t actually like her? But…are only there because she’s made them be?
Appearance: Silky, snowy white hair like her father’s (and the pic above) that reaches below her shoulder, and silver ice blue eyes. She looks like the pic above basically lol.
Age: 14
Note: She also has her mother’s Light powers, and is more adept at using them then her brother.
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#ProtectSebFebruary 11, 2023 at 7:00 pm #132633AHHHH AND NOW ANOTHER BABY!!!!! Yaaaaaay!
Meet ma boy- (I love him yall…)
Nevan (Puck) Sren Fabel
Nevan is the secondborn of Paxton and Luna, and…well…
Let’s just say he’s feisty…
Full of spunk, Nevan-Er…Puck has a mind of his own most of the time. Looking at him from the outside, most wouldn’t know he was Luna or Paxton’s child.
Showing off a rebellion and defiance for rules that neither of his parents have given him, or his aunt and uncle, or cousins, Puck is definitely the black sheep of the Fabel family.
They’ve all come to accept this from him-mostly-though, and he even has a “second” name to fit with his personality better.
Thank goodness he didn’t inherit his father’s siren gift…
Though…he did inherit his mother’s empathy, which in itself is a bit of a problem.
Though he’s unskilled in using it, and has been taught not to manipulate the emotions of others.
The biggest issue with his gift, actually isn’t for others, but for himself.
See…no matter how much Puck hates to admit it…
He’s got a lot of his dad in him.
And…he’s really a very sensitive little guy.
In fact (though if you tell anyone he’ll deny it) he still has the bear his father passed on to his sister and him.
His sister knows though. But has promised not to tell.
Being more sensitive then he likes to admit…Puck can be a bit vulnerable when it comes to other’s emotions, and sometimes, it’s hard to tell which ones are his, and which ones belong to other people.
So…sometimes the best thing to do when you don’t know which emotion is yours…is to either don’t show any at all…
Or react.
Appearance: Like the picture above and he does have parts where you can see a purple-ish/midnight colored ombre (mostly at the end by his ears and neck) also a few midnight blue colors streaks in his hair but very small so they just kinda shine in the sun/moonlight.)
Note: Also has his mothers light powers but are not skilled in them at all. Can’t really control them or hardly use them.
Also for both of these kids I like them to have some sort of thing with their ears wether they’re pointe for whatever, I haven’t figured that out for Luna’s race lol.
I also haven’t figured out if I’m going to have Puck grow wings later in the story… (he’d be the first ever Fae to actually grow them and not be born with them if so so they might would even look different so I think I might. That being said I think he has like some lighting blue veins or streaks on his back where they’d come out from, and a bit of bone sticks out, as well as the downy feathers like his father has, dunno if any of that makes sense but again I’m kinda experimenting lol)
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#ProtectSebFebruary 11, 2023 at 7:01 pm #132634OH and he is 11 with bright blue eyes that have specks of purple and midnight blue in them
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#ProtectSebFebruary 12, 2023 at 2:23 pm #132646@godlyfantasy12 The growing wings idea sounds awesome!! I’d do it!!
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
February 12, 2023 at 10:54 pm #132688@keilah-h I think so too!!
@freedomwriter76 imma introduce some others
These guys are triplets and AHHH I LOVE THEM (and they are HANDSOOOOOME 😍😍)
First off-
Lucien Beowulf
Eldest son of Grimm and Jocelyn, Lucien was born three minutes before his younger brother Caden, and a total twenty-five minutes before Fenrys.
He very much enjoys “lording” his age over his brothers, though in a playful way, and his family has definitely full of rough and tumble pups.
Lucien takes after both his parents, gaining his courage and strength from his father, but mischievous nature and bounding loyalty from his mother.
A bit snarky, quick-witted and rascally, Lucien enjoys wrestling around with his brothers and mercilessly teasing others, though it’s a bit harder for him to take what he dishes out.
He seems to take quite a bit after his “uncle” Nyx.
And no, his uncle is not a pet.
Appearance: Looks exactly like the pictures above.
Wolf Form: Out of all the Beowulf boys, he looks the most like his father in his wolf form. As a child his gray fur had a blue-ish tint to it, but now that he is older it has become a darker/silver gray, with dark and white markings on his maw, legs and paws.
Age: 16
Love interest: Hadassah Arimiche
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#ProtectSebFebruary 14, 2023 at 7:22 pm #132899Oh I forgot to mention that Lucien is also skilled at Archery!
annnnd I didn’t do the other triplets XD SO HERE WE GO!
Caden Lowell Beowulf
The second born son, Caden takes after his mother in every way, encapsulating her energy, spunk, and boundless joy. Caden is an inspiration to all and can brighten even the darkest of places.
Loyal almost to a fault to his family and others around him, Caden would do anything to keep them safe, or make them smile!
A bit of a jokester, his puns and tricks are more on the laid back side then those of his brother Lucien’s, though he will sometimes join in the teasing.
In tune with nature then the rest of his brothers, and much more agile, Caden can tend to get a bit lost in thought, though some of this could also be attributed to his ADHD, (obviously in the fantasy world it wouldn’t be diagnosed but here I’m gonna diagnose it)
Appearance: Like the picture above, bright green eyes, (Lucien also has green eyes though not as bright as Caden’s)
Wolf form is a golden yellow wolf with darker gold/brown fur on his paws, the tip of his tail and his back and ears. (Like in the picture)
Skilled in agility
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#ProtectSebFebruary 14, 2023 at 7:22 pm #132900Obviously the triplets are the same age lol
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#ProtectSebFebruary 14, 2023 at 7:42 pm #132906And now!!!
Fenrys Beowulf (I’ll probably come up with more middle names later lol)
Born 25 minutes after Lucien, and 22 after Caden, Fenrys’ birth was riddled with complications.
Unsure as to if he’d even survive, things were stop and go for a few days afterward, but eventually, the strong lad made it through, much to the joy of his parents and those around him.
However, he wasn’t entirely unaffected.
See, Fenrys doesn’t have his right leg, due to the same issues that nearly caused his death.
Due to this, Fenrys has had struggles that neither of his older brothers have had to face, and while he’s faced them well, he can’t help but feel…
Lacking.
Especially in the face of his father.
He knows his father loves him, unconditionally…
But that doesn’t stave off the feeling of never measuring up. Especially from the looks of…guilt? Pity? He also seems to receive from the older man.
He doesn’t understand it…
But…he’ll continue to strive to do his best. It might be a bit of an uphill climb, perhaps even more so, all things considered, but, he has his brothers at his side, two loving parents, devoted friends and found family, and an extremely snarky “Uncle.”
With that…not even a missing leg can hold him down.
Appearance: Top right picture and top left, bright cobalt blue eyes.
Wolf form: A beautiful white wolf just like his late aunt Mirella, with silver markings and a cream underbelly, back, tail end and large spot on his head.
Skilled in observation and hand to hand.
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#ProtectSebFebruary 14, 2023 at 10:14 pm #132925Oh I love Fenrys already!
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February 15, 2023 at 11:01 am #132948Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. Ooh, love ’em!!! 🤩😍
Sorry for not RPing…the weekend was busy (one thing to the next!!!) and then I caught whatever virus my brother had, so…didn’t feel like getting on KP much…😅🤷♀️ But I’m doing better now. Still recovering, but I’m doing better. 😊💕
Elias
They opened the door, revealing two boys.
The seemingly older one of the two stepped forward, an arm held out. “Who are you? Are you the ones who brought us here?”
Elias blinked. “Brought you here…? We don’t even know how we got here. I’m Elias, this is my brother Albert, and this is our sister-in-law Lily.”
“Nice to meet you!” Lily cried out, smiled, “but who are you…? And we saw two of you…where’s the other little boy?”
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