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February 8, 2024 at 4:13 pm #175491
Snake
“Yes, thank you.” Carrie scooped up her little cat thing and climbed onto Snake’s back.
She seemed apprehensive. He couldn’t blame her, especially if she’d never ridden a dragon before. Not many humans could say they had, and not many dragons could say they’d carried one.
“Hold on to my spikes if you need something to grip onto.” he advised her as they soared. “And don’t touch my belt or anything on it.”
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
February 8, 2024 at 4:13 pm #175492@rae lol!!!!
heh, Snake should know better, and if he didn’t his friends would rapidly correct his behavior lol. (If they were here, which they aren’t, but I’m sure his memories of them at least will ward him off from it)
Plus I don’t think he wants to incur the wrath of humans right now. There’s no use being pricked with swords and fighting humans over a companion animal in his world, especially since it’s at war and healing those injuries would take valuable time and resources.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
February 8, 2024 at 9:00 pm #175506Nahim & Bop
As soon as Bop heard the question of how they were going to get in, he leapt off of Nahim’s shoulder. He chippered something, unintelligible as always (he talks like the early Disney Chip and Dale. What do you call that?)
“No, wait! Bop, no!” Nahim groped after the crab as it folded a torch like thing with a purple flame from one of its claws and headed towards the gate.
“Bop! I said nih!”
Bop chipped in reply, his little legs going clickety-click-click on the stone doorstep.
Nahim crouched down, trying to grab the creature.
“I don’t care! This gate is not just enemy property we can destroy!”
Bop replied, pausing his approach to the gates. He put his claw on his ‘hip’.
“I don’t care if you can fix it later! Fixing leaves scars! You are NOT melting the hinges!”
Bop chippered again, and began his approach once more.
“I SAID NIH!” Nahim slammed his metal fist onto the doorstep, causing a odd metal clang, and small chips of rock and pieces of dust to fly. “YOU ARE NOT DESTROYING THIS GATE!” Before the last word, his voice cracked, causing it to come out sounding like metal scraping against metal, or someone badly sharpening a knife. Nahim coughed and grabbed his throat like he was being choked.
Bop took advantage of Nahim’s distraction, and again approached the hinges.
Nahim reached out, and grabbed the crab, his left hand still over his throat.
“Wait…one moment.” It sounded like he could barely scrape out the words. Standing, Nahim put his metal shoulder to the gate, pressing metal against metal. The gate was unlocked, and swung open with just a bit of pressure and strength. Nahim stood aside, motioning for the girls to go first.
Bop looked disappointed that he didn’t have an excuse to melt the hinges. He sullenly folded his torch back into a claw.
Believe me, it was a lot more funy before. Wyoh! You are annoying!
"You need French Toast."
February 8, 2024 at 9:33 pm #175507Kate
“So, thoughtful, Lord Nayhelm,” said Kate sarcastically, as Nahim gestured for someone else to go first.
She hastily wove together a pair of compressions, which she grabbed in either hand. Then, she took a deep breath a strode through the gate brandishing her glowing fists.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksFebruary 8, 2024 at 10:47 pm #175508Does Kate really expect that Nahim would be concerned about manners if he thought they were in danger? They’re literally walking into a paradise garden, through an unlocked gate. Plus, he does have scanners, and will occasionally use them. Seriously Kate, I expected better logic from you.
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February 8, 2024 at 10:59 pm #175509Well, Kate has absolutely no idea what to expect. Sure the gate wasn’t locked, but they’re still entering a mysterious palace without permission after spontaneously finding themselves somewhere they’ve never seen. She also just met Nahim minutes ago, and she wouldn’t have any idea about his scanners. She’s also on the paranormal side.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksFebruary 8, 2024 at 11:26 pm #175510True.
Also, Nahim was recently outfitted with little mini missiles, so if something appeared, he could release those on any enemies. They’d be dead before they saw it coming
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February 8, 2024 at 11:35 pm #175511Nahim
“Do you doubt me that much, Warrioress? Bop, you are assigned to checking under garden leaves until the Warrioress has no worries. Maid, the only heat signatures are birds and little creatures in this area. The palace has no open ports besides the windows which are only closed in case of storm or war. Inside…” He broke off coughing. His voice was still not normal.
Bop finished his sentence. Whatever Bop said, we all wonder.
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February 9, 2024 at 8:39 am #175520Kate
Kate glanced Nahim as his speaking degenerated into coughing again.
“You have a cold, lordling?”
She looked around the garden. Sure, Nahim said there was no one around, but she wasn’t going to rely on the insight of a guy she had just met.
She carefully released her compressions, but drew her sword instead.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksFebruary 9, 2024 at 9:35 am #175524Nahim
“No, Maid, I just have a artificial voicebox, and it malfunctions sometimes,” Nahim whispered. He wanted to fix it, for it felt like he was being choked slightly on the inside, but now was not the time.
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February 9, 2024 at 12:20 pm #175533@rae what happened to Nahim’s original voice box?
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
February 9, 2024 at 1:07 pm #175543When Nahim dueled Vorgan the first time, Vorgan pierced his throat at the correct projectors that it didn’t kill Nahim, but instead ruined his voicebox. Instead of possibly going through multiple surgeries to fix the real one, he opted for it just to be replaced. Every once in a while he regrets this.
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February 9, 2024 at 1:15 pm #175544@rae ahhh makes sense.
Was it on purpose or did he intend to kill him?
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
February 9, 2024 at 2:04 pm #175550Basically, Vorgan was invading Nahim’s home when he was fifteen. Vorgan’s brother killed Nahim’s older brother Knihan, and Vorgan killed Nahim’s father. The Nanian soldiers killed Nahim’s other brother, and one of the three killed Nahim’s mother. Nahim killed Vorgan’s brother, then Vorgan and him began a duel that lasted a couple minutes. Nahim amputates Vorgan’s left arm, Vorgan tries to kill Nahim but only hurts the voicebox, and then Nahim falls down an abyss opened by an earthquake and almost breaks his neck.
Vorgan and Nahim have a history of trying to kill each other.
So, then after all that, Nahim gets new voucebox, leaves Laxor, his home planet, and lives peacefully working as a guard of expensive aracite crystal transport before Vorgan discovers he’s not dead and sends out the first bounty snip. Nahim then goes to a planet called Nahor before meeting his friend Mandin, and then there’s a second bounty snip put out.
Eventually, Nahim’s old friend, Canon betrays him and makes up a plan to get him captured by Vorgan. Nahim is captured and subjected to emotional torture via watching Mandin be tortured. After that, Nahim is thrown to a beast called a mormaka and should be dead, but survives. After this encounter, Nahim is broken for a while, and since his left shoulder was literally crushed during the battle, the bone is replaced with metal.
After that, Vorgan and Nahim majorly meet one last time, in which duel, Vorgan dies, Nahim looses his arm and half of the Nanian palace callapss with both of them inside. Nahim is pulled from the wreckage by the Earth drake, king of Wondian dragons, and is found to be alive, though barely.
And that is the record of every time Nahim gets an artificial body part so far.
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February 9, 2024 at 2:06 pm #175551The typos! It’s the planet Banor not Nahor, and it’s Canin not Canon.
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