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February 27, 2017 at 9:29 pm #26572
Daeus
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@emma-flournoy The truth is the identity truth.

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February 27, 2017 at 9:43 pm #26574
Emma Flournoy
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@Daeus I thought so but couldn’t figure out which—the girl’s, his, or the man’s, and why it necessarily would endanger his life.
February 27, 2017 at 9:49 pm #26576
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@emma-flournoy Well, ok, I took a bit of a liberty with the wording there. Often in a synopsis “will” means what will happen in the story, not that there is no way in the story it couldn’t have happened a different way. That was the intent. It could be taken either way, but I made his reaction an assumption. I mean, saying, “a long-hidden truth that may threaten his life if he lets it” just doesn’t have the same feel.

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February 27, 2017 at 9:57 pm #26581
Emma Flournoy
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@Daeus I must be overthinking. Pay me no mind. *shallow sigh*
So was it the man’s identity (not Edwin—the other guy)?
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February 27, 2017 at 10:09 pm #26583
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@emma-flournoy Other guy? No. The girl.

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February 28, 2017 at 12:31 pm #26604
Emma Flournoy
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@Daeus Okay. I’d thought of that, but I wasn’t thinking in a roundabout enough way. 😛
Thanks.
(By the other guy, I meant Blackwood.)
February 28, 2017 at 7:44 pm #26618
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@daeus I’ve got nothing but general agreement with the masses. Good luck!
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