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@emma-flournoy The truth is the identity truth.
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@Daeus I thought so but couldn’t figure out which—the girl’s, his, or the man’s, and why it necessarily would endanger his life.
@emma-flournoy Well, ok, I took a bit of a liberty with the wording there. Often in a synopsis “will” means what will happen in the story, not that there is no way in the story it couldn’t have happened a different way. That was the intent. It could be taken either way, but I made his reaction an assumption. I mean, saying, “a long-hidden truth that may threaten his life if he lets it” just doesn’t have the same feel.
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@Daeus I must be overthinking. Pay me no mind. *shallow sigh*
So was it the man’s identity (not Edwin—the other guy)?@emma-flournoy Other guy? No. The girl.
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@Daeus Okay. I’d thought of that, but I wasn’t thinking in a roundabout enough way. 😛
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@daeus I’ve got nothing but general agreement with the masses. Good luck!
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