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  • #46469
    LivyLynn
    @livylynn
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      Hello Kingdom Pen Peeps!

      I’m SUPER excited to announce that I just finished a novel I’ve been working on this summer!
      I’m not entirely sure what category it falls under, so for now I’m calling it a Fairytale Scifi book! Haha.

      I would absolutely love to get some feedback and critique from other authors and readers out there! If you’re interested in reading and offering feedback for this story (230 pages), please comment below or personal message me.

      I’m not the best at writing brief summary’s, but it’s the story of a girl who doesn’t believe in fairytales, and discovers that she has royal heritage, related to one of the most famous Princesses in all of fairytale history! She’s invited to a school in Germany where she learns about her past, uncovers family treasure, and embarks on some wild adventures. The target audience is YA Teens who enjoy Fairy-tale Retellings, and Scifi.

      I can only take a limited number of Beta readers, as I already have a few others who have volunteered for this project, but I thought it would be a blast if some of my new KP friends wanted to get involved! Plus I know that none of you have read my previous work, so your feedback would be totally unbiased.

      Thanks so much for considering! <3

      #46474
      Rolena Hatfield
      @rolena-hatfield
        • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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        @livylynn Hey! Do you have a certain time you want the feedback sent to you? I’m super interested (fairytale/ sci-fi sounds fascinating!) but am trying to think through all my time commitments.

        https://rolenahatfield.com/

        #46494
        Catwing
        @catwing
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          *crys because she is going to beta read this month a different book and she loves fairy tale rewrites and is busy anyway* Sorry I can’t right now… maybe you will need another beta reader later.
          Sounds cool.

          IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!

          #46528
          Louise Fowler
          @perfectfifths
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            @livylynn It sounds really good! And I am very interested, but I don’t think I’ll be able to. I’m already beta reading three other things for three friends, plus I have a few projects of my own that I really need to give some time to. πŸ™ Sorry! But I just wanted to say, your story sounds so interesting, if I had the time, I’d definitely want to beta read! πŸ™‚ I’m certainly interested in reading when it’s finished. Do you have a title yet? πŸ˜€

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            Currently reading Les Miserables

            #46535
            Hannah
            @salome01w4g
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              @livylynn how long is it?? (Like word count) I might be able to do it. I’m reviewing something for someone else but I’m a quick reader so it shouldn’t take very long.

              ~I don’t know what I’m doing~

              #46582
              LivyLynn
              @livylynn
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                @rolena-hatfield Hi there! Thanks for your interest! Ideally, it would be great to have the feedback either by the end of this month, or the next. πŸ™‚


                @catwing
                Aw! but yes, I’m sure there will be more stories to Beta in the future! πŸ˜‰


                @perfectfifths
                Thanks! And yeah, I totally understand. I do have a title! I’m not sharing it publicly yet though. πŸ™‚


                @salome01w4g
                The word count is 999,729

                #46584
                Hannah
                @salome01w4g
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                  @livylynn oh my that’s impressive. Unfortunately I don’t think I’ll be do it. I’m so sorry. πŸ™‚

                  ~I don’t know what I’m doing~

                  #46585
                  Daeus
                  @daeus
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                    @kate-flournoy Get over here. I just found someone crazier than you.

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                    #46586
                    Daeus
                    @daeus
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                      Wait, @livylynn, are you sure that’s not the character count? It sounds like a lot of words per page.

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                      #46590
                      Kate Flournoy
                      @kate-flournoy
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                        @livylynn *gawks* if that is indeed your word count, I salute you for being crazier than I am! πŸ˜› I thought my books were ridiculously long. My current WIP, at its ‘final’ second draft stage, was 500,000+ words.

                        I love beta-reading but unfortunately I can’t take any extra projects right now. I’d not be able to be as thorough as I’d want to. Sounds really cool though. πŸ™‚

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                        Elizabeth
                        @that_writer_girl_99
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                          Aw, I’d love to do this but unfortunately, I can’t. School comes first and I’ve got too much of that on my plate right now.

                          Writer. Dreamer. Sometimes blogger. MBTI mess. Lover of Jesus and books.

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                          LivyLynn
                          @livylynn
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                            @salome01w4g @daeus @kate-flournoy @salome01w4g Ohhhh my goodnesss, no wonder you all think I’m insane, haha, I’m so sorry, somehow an extra 9 got in there!!
                            The word count is only 99,729 LOL.

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                            #46606
                            Hannah
                            @salome01w4g
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                              Oh well that changes it a great bit, when do you want feed back by??

                              @livylynn

                              ~I don’t know what I’m doing~

                              #46616
                              Rolena Hatfield
                              @rolena-hatfield
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                                @salome01w4g Livy told me she was hoping for it back by the end of this month or Nov.


                                @livylynn
                                Hahaha! I was like, 999,729! Whoa!!!!
                                I would be more than glad to read your story. I’m fairly certain I could get it back to you by the end of this month. If you’re good with that, I can send you my email address. πŸ™‚

                                https://rolenahatfield.com/

                                #46712
                                Louise Fowler
                                @perfectfifths
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                                  @livylynn Ooh, intrigue! Why is that. or are you not sharing that publicly either? πŸ˜‰ And that’s an impressive word count! πŸ™‚

                                  Currently reading Les Miserables

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