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@mineralizedwritings yeah that’s just cause of my weird cartoon-realistic combo artstyle haha, but thanks!
you and @grcr have a very similar style! I can see why you’d pick that one.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
congrats!! How many wins is this?!?!
it was well earned.Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
Oo yippeee! Thank you!! 😊
I would say his face is a little slimer than I draw it but I didn’t specify that so it doesn’t really matter.
I think Jonathan at 27ish would look just like yours.
Ah ok.
The boots look so good!
Thanks!! 😊😁😁
Thanks!! 😄😄 lol it’s my third!
Flaz: *yawns* Did the sun just come up? In the west?
Ready!? Shoot!
*sitting here pencil tapping* Or is there some kinda code about congratulation period that I missed?
lol.
I’m ready whenever the others are.
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
Congratulations on your third win!
Jonathan’s clothing looks more professional than what I picked up from his description. I imagined him dressed casually in a tee-shirt.
@theductator
A request for when you submit your description. When I created this challenge, I intended it to help authors develop their ability to describe character appearances. This is also a test to see how people imagine your characters as they read. Could you please write the description of the character as it would appear in your book (or something close to it)?
Yeah I probably should have specified more. I’m super into fashion so most of my characters dress semi formal and I forget other people don’t do that lol.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
Okay! I will try to have a description by tonight.
The squirrels are collecting more nuts than usual this winter. I've already lost 3 relatives.
Well, now you’ve learned a little more about describing characters and how that impacts how your reader imagines them!
Here’s my description/scene! This is not a direct excerpt, but it probably will be once I get there. 🙂 Character name: Perpetua Grace Frankton
“Can I pet your doggie?”
Stephen looked down into a pair of large dark brown eyes. “Sure.” He told Phil to sit. The girl who had asked gave him a dimpled grin. She was a cute little thing, probably four or five. Despite the light snowfall, she wore no coat, only a sparkly grey t-shirt and denim overalls covered in dog stickers. At least she had boots, though they were on the wrong feet. Her cheeks and nose were red from the cold, and her hands, now buried in Phil’s soft fur, were chapped, but she didn’t seem to care.
“What’s its name?” she asked.
“Phillard, but he goes by Phil.” Stephen looked around. “What’s your name? Are your parents with you?”
The girl shook her head vigorously, knocking several leaves out of her shoulder length red blonde curls. “I’m Pet, and they’re taking a nap.” Phil licked her and she giggled. “I want seventeen dogs for Christmas, but they said no.”
What kind of a name was Pet?
The squirrels are collecting more nuts than usual this winter. I've already lost 3 relatives.
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The squirrels are collecting more nuts than usual this winter. I've already lost 3 relatives.
Thank you for the description! I will get to this if I have time.
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