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Ellette Giselle.
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June 3, 2025 at 12:44 pm #203734
If you need to finish your school first, I think she will understand
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
June 3, 2025 at 12:46 pm #203735No kidding.
Plus someone crashed me yesterday going into town. Add that to the list. ?
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
June 3, 2025 at 12:47 pm #203736It just wrapped up, so I should have time now.
?For our Blessed Lady's sake, bring us in good ale!?
June 3, 2025 at 12:52 pm #203739My sister accidentally deleted the file, but has now restored it. You should be able to use the link now.
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
June 3, 2025 at 12:53 pm #203740Crashed? Like a vehicle accident?
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
June 3, 2025 at 12:54 pm #203741That worked! I’ll read through it later.
?For our Blessed Lady's sake, bring us in good ale!?
June 3, 2025 at 12:56 pm #203742June 3, 2025 at 12:58 pm #203743Yeah. Dented up my pretty blue car. ?
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
June 3, 2025 at 12:59 pm #203744Oh no! No one was hurt though?
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
June 3, 2025 at 1:01 pm #203745I’ve been a bit busy lately, so I’ve been paused at chapter 15 for a while. I’m still interested too, just need to start up again… as soon as i get some time.
wa wawawa waaaa
June 3, 2025 at 1:08 pm #203749@ellette-giselle awww that’s a shame! I echo Linus here, no one was hurt right?
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
June 3, 2025 at 6:26 pm #203767@linus-smallprint I haven’t, sorry. She’s kept writing it thoguh, right? I might go back and catch up.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
June 3, 2025 at 8:57 pm #203772Sorry. Didn’t see this until now.
I’m fine, and they’re fine. Was pretty shaken up, but also weirdly cool. It was a very interesting experience all around.
Gave me some insight into writing adrenaline charged characters.
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
June 4, 2025 at 11:26 am #203796I’m fine, and they’re fine. Was pretty shaken up, but also weirdly cool.
Okay. Glad to hear that!
Gave me some insight into writing adrenaline charged characters.
Of course you would come out of an accident and say this!
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
June 4, 2025 at 11:29 am #203798I haven’t, sorry. She’s kept writing it thoguh, right? I might go back and catch up.
Thank you! She’s entirely finished book one in this series, and the full thing should be in the document.
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
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