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April 10, 2025 at 4:52 pm #201496
I like it so far. I’m not super immersed in the world yet, but that’s cause I have no idea what the world is, and whether these characters are human or something else.
A short section like the one at the beginning of Wingfeather Saga might suffice, the one that introduces the world of Aerwiar and the continent of Skree with its towns.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
April 11, 2025 at 9:52 am #201524AHH!!! NO!!!
I never saw this!!!!!
I was snooping on someone’s profile and tracked a comment down here and that’s how I found it!!! Ugh. KP! I’ll look at this as soon as I can. I try to respond to everything I get tagged for, so if I don’t respond it;’s because I didn’t get the tag.
Fires will rise to testify that 2+2=4. Swords will be drawn to prove that leaves are green in summer
April 11, 2025 at 9:53 am #201525It says access is denied. Is there any way you can let me on? My Microsoft email is
rosewood.debate658@passinbox.com
Fires will rise to testify that 2+2=4. Swords will be drawn to prove that leaves are green in summer
April 11, 2025 at 10:40 am #201532Okay, I added you. Check your email, it may have went to your spam. It will be from my hotmail account (I have way too many email addresses)
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
April 11, 2025 at 10:42 am #201534I like it so far. I’m not super immersed in the world yet, but that’s cause I have no idea what the world is, and whether these characters are human or something else.
The only intelligent species in this world is humans. My sister wouldn’t write a book with any other intelligent species in.
A short section like the one at the beginning of Wingfeather Saga might suffice, the one that introduces the world of Aerwiar and the continent of Skree with its towns.
Okay. I will suggest it to her and see what she thinks.
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
April 11, 2025 at 10:44 am #201535Haha, says the guy talking to the lady with 16!
Thanks, I got it.
Fires will rise to testify that 2+2=4. Swords will be drawn to prove that leaves are green in summer
April 11, 2025 at 10:47 am #201538Haha, says the guy talking to the lady with 16!
Nice! I only have had 9 in total.
Thanks, I got it.
Your welcome! Thank you for volunteering to read it!
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
April 11, 2025 at 10:50 am #201539Of course! I only wish I’d seen it sooner.
Fires will rise to testify that 2+2=4. Swords will be drawn to prove that leaves are green in summer
April 11, 2025 at 10:52 am #201541Of course! I only wish I’d seen it sooner.
No worries. It’s not your fault if Kingdom Pen decided not to notify you.
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
April 11, 2025 at 1:38 pm #201587@linus-smallprint okay, cool!
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
June 3, 2025 at 12:41 pm #203728@keilah-h @ellette-giselle @grcr @the_lost-journal @hybridlore @theducktator @stephie
Hey, are any of you still reading through my sister’s book?
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
June 3, 2025 at 12:42 pm #203730I’m so sorry, I have been swamped. I kept trying, but i just haven’t got the time right now.
Fires will rise to testify that 2+2=4. Swords will be drawn to prove that leaves are green in summer
June 3, 2025 at 12:42 pm #203731Oh no, I completely forgot about that! I’m still interested; it just got lost in the last few weeks of school.
This land is my land, this land is your land, looks like one of us has a forged deed to this land
June 3, 2025 at 12:44 pm #203732Understandable. With the weddings and grad’s you’ve had, I know it can be hard to find the time.
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
June 3, 2025 at 12:44 pm #203733The link won’t let me on for some reason.
This land is my land, this land is your land, looks like one of us has a forged deed to this land
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