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Home Page › Forums › Fiction Writing › Critiques › Novel Critique Requests › 1 Chapter of my epic fantasy novel for critique
Hey Kingdom Pen! I’ve realized that I never come here or post anymore, but the last thing I posted in this forum was a request for critiquing the first few chapters (>9,000 words) of the second novel in my epic fantasy series. I have another chapter here ready for you guys!
The Well of Sorrows is volume #2 in my epic fantasy series “The Ascendance Trilogy.” Book 1 (The Empire of Ashes) is about 107,000 words, and I’m expecting at least 140,000 for this volume. Book 3 will probably be upwards of 200,000, with the outlines I’m creating it might be closer to 300,000. Yeah, there’s a lot of stuff going on! 12 main POV characters and an epic battle for the fate of the universe y’all!
Content warnings just to be safe: I’m not going to read through the entire darn thing (8000 words lol) but this series has heavy magic use with a completely developed magic system, no small amount of violence (though not very graphic), a little bit of romantic touch including some kissing (pretty innocent), demons (millions of them actually!), alternate universes, and all that fun stuff.
Here’s the docs link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1h5XRDIYr_w1CgeOKumbw4qfxcjDZQBZ1z69VaYmn5QY/edit?usp=sharing
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