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    Ellette Giselle
    @ellette-giselle
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      @freed_and_redeemed

      I just posted a review for your book on Amazon!!

      it’s under my parents scout so it’s WU but it’s me!! ❤️

      Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God

      #184137
      Keilah H.
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        @freed_and_redeemed I FINISHED THE BOOK!!

         

        I don’t have time to write all my thoughts on it right now though…please remind me tomorrow or whenever you see this lol

         

        But I do have a few short things! (A few spoilers, watch out!)

        -The story was absolutely RIVETING.

        -The characters were well fleshed out.

        -Since I already knew most of the plot twists (Fin’s and Hans’ deaths and stuff), I wasn’t too shaken by them, but they felt impactful all the same, and I feel like I would’ve been shocked by Fin’s death if I hadn’t known it was coming. (I completely forgot about Jezyk dying though, that one caught me off guard. Poor guy.)

        -There was one small formatting issue in the beginning of the book, but I’ll go into that when I review it in detail.

        Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

        #184181
        freedom
        @freed_and_redeemed
          • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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          @ellette-giselle I saw the review!!! Tysm girl😭😭💖💖


          @keilah-h
          I’m so glad you enjoyed it!! I’d love to hear more thoughts if you have them😁 and I apologize about the formatting😅 that was on Amazon’s end, and they totally wrecked it😭

          #BeardedSteveRogersIsSuperior

          #184190
          Keilah H.
          @keilah-h
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            @freed_and_redeemed so you’re aware of the formatting issues? Ok, that’s good. Can you do anything to change them or is that the way it’s gonna have to be?

            Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

            #184195
            freedom
            @freed_and_redeemed
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              @keilah-h It’s kinda stuck like that😅 There’s a small possibility I could go in later on and change things, but that would require taking the whole book down, redoing EVERYTHING, and then reuploading everything🫠 and idk if I could even do that tbh😅

              #BeardedSteveRogersIsSuperior

              #185024
              RAE
              @rae
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                CALL TO ALL WHO HAVE READ FREEDOM’S FIRE!

                I just went to Amazon to see if there are any reviews on Freedom’s fire yet and I had to go back to my purchase history to find it! It didn’t even come up when I used the search bar!

                So far, there are two five-star reviews, and I just submitted a third, so if you have read the book and are able to, PLEASE WRITE A REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The more reviews, the more Freedom’s book will get out there!


                @whalekeeper
                @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator @theshadow @savannah_grace2009 @princesachronicle22 @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @kyronthearcanin @grcr @smiley @highscribeofaetherium @jonas

                I don’t know how many of you have read the book, I’m just tagging, can you tell?

                "You need French Toast."
                #AnduthForever (hopefully 💕)

                #185050
                freedom
                @freed_and_redeemed
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                  @RAE

                  RAEEEEEEEEE 😭😭😭 YOU ARE JUST THE SWEETEST!!!!!!! 💖💖💖💖

                  AHHH I HOPE YOU LOVED READING FREEDOM’S FIRE!!!

                   

                  (and Broken Shackles is in the 2nd edit, and, with any luck, may, MAY (this is a small, SMALL possibility, be able to be published before Christmas🤩 but don’t say anything, bc it’s not for certain yet and anything could happen😅 if not before Christmas, then early 2025, January-May or so, if I had to guess👀)

                  #BeardedSteveRogersIsSuperior

                  #185600
                  RAE
                  @rae
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                    @freed_and_redeemed

                    Huh, somehow I never got the notification

                    RAEEEEEEEEE 😭😭😭 YOU ARE JUST THE SWEETEST!!!!!!! 💖💖💖💖

                    Thanks

                    And I loved it! It’s actually in my pile of extra special books rn.

                    I got my best friend to read it and she liked it too! And then after he’s finished with the Hobbit I’m gonna get my crush to read it too! He likes Unbroken (it’s actually his favorite) and even though it’s historical fic, I’m sure he’ll love Freedom’s Fire! 

                    Girl, how do you manage to write so fast and so good? I’ve been working on Guardian Angels two years and it’s no where near that level!

                    "You need French Toast."
                    #AnduthForever (hopefully 💕)

                    #185611
                    Koshka
                    @koshka
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                      @freed_and_redeemed

                      IJUSTFOUNDYOURBOOKONAMAZONANDITSONKINDLEAND-

                      *Ahem*

                      I’ll just go read the sample for the moment…

                      First Grand Historian of Arreth and the Lesser Realms (aka Kitty)
                      Fork the Gork

                      #185613
                      Keilah H.
                      @keilah-h
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                        @rae

                        And then after he’s finished with the Hobbit I’m gonna get my crush to read it too

                        Me realizing people’s crushes are usually real humans and not fictional characters:

                         

                        you know all about that incident in the meme forum eheheheheh

                        Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

                        #185633
                        RAE
                        @rae
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                          @keilah-h

                          XDXD

                          I’d make him a character but he’d end up being too perfect lol

                          "You need French Toast."
                          #AnduthForever (hopefully 💕)

                          #185635
                          Elishavet Elroi
                          @elishavet-pidyon
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                            @freed_and_redeemed

                            HOW DID I MISS THIS THREAD?

                            maybe because I haven’t been active really. O.o

                            IT’S PUBLISHED! My sister told me it was, but seeing this made it so real. It’s the author’s dream! (Not without it’s rough spots, but still a dream) I’m so excited for you!

                            I won’t be able to read it for a while, but ooooh, this is awesome.

                            You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan

                            #185737
                            Keilah H.
                            @keilah-h
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                              @rae lol that’s too funny.

                              Heh, maybe being obsessed with a fictional character has its merits….he already has all his flaws built in and you can’t talk him out of changing them, so you just have to accept him with them……

                              XD do we really wanna go back into this conversation????

                              Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

                              #185894
                              freedom
                              @freed_and_redeemed
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                                @rae

                                Aww I’m so glad you enjoyed it!!!💜😭

                                And thank you so much for sharing it with friends!!! That means so much <3

                                uhhhhhh idk??? I just write a lot😅 Honestly Broken Shackles prob won’t be until 2025 regardless, bc I think there are some things I need to tweak, still formatting/editing still, and I’ve been busy.

                                and maybe don’t write as much as I do, bc I push myself to burn out way more than is healthy😅🫠🫠

                                 


                                @koshka
                                AHHHCDFRFWEFAWFWWNJDWHCUSYGDHCSUYBH

                                 


                                @elishavet-pidyon
                                THANK YOU SO MUCH😭😭😭

                                #BeardedSteveRogersIsSuperior

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