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    Power
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      Let us walk among the stones of fire

      Let light breath upon these living coals

      Let the glory fill every desire

      Let it shine through the jagged holes

      Let the burn imbue with power

      Let the furnace refine and form

      Let the blaze flow like wildfire

      Let new lifes and minds be born

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      Elishavet Elroi
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        @power

        Hmmm. I like this. The paralel of each line starting the same is neat, and the message is heartfelt, ESPECIALLY the first line. Nice, Biblical imagery…

        It reminds me of a song we sang in chapel last week which had me crying like a florist with alergies.

        Still a ChaosGremlinâ„¢ on the inside.

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