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Yeah they do XD I always have ideas XD so if you need me to brainstorm I would be happy to
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It’s just murbargerava@gmail.com. And yeah I have a weird last name XDXD
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Okay!! I added you, here’s the link if you didn’t get the email — https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ij2j3jBqeh9QOeO2PGecKqy1-HtACT8cp9fFe_ZiaMI/edit?usp=drivesdk
Oh, XD my last names kind of boring, so that’s cool! 😅
WE ARE REVIVING THE PROTECTION SQUAD! *steals Joseph, Julian, and Sabina from Ellette*
Awesome!!! Thanks 😉
WE ARE REVIVING THE PROTECTION SQUAD! *steals Joseph, Julian, and Sabina from Ellette*
Okay sounds good!! Thanks! 😁
Sorry about the double tag, by the way, on second thought I didn’t really want my email on here 😅
WE ARE REVIVING THE PROTECTION SQUAD! *steals Joseph, Julian, and Sabina from Ellette*
I didn’t forget about this, promise! XDXD We’ve just been a little busy. 😉
So, I love the story so far. Girl, your writing is SOOOO good, I love it!! ❤️❤️
Brainstorm-wise… There are a few obvious places it could go. She could get out, and then either return or choose to leave because of Arren or some other reason. Oooor she could get caught. I’m not sure right now which would be better for the storyline, because right now I have a bunch of random story ideas in my head, and I just need to write everything out separately XD. I’ll be back wednesday and try to give you a better answer, lol. 🙂
Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.
Oh no worries!! 😁 I’ve been pretty busy too!
Aww. . . thank you!!!!! ♥️♥️ I’m so glad you like it!!
Sooo . . . I forgot to mention this, and I wasn’t really sure if this would be the actual plot, but 😅 my plan was for the rebels to arrive just then . . . with Arren. And then she won’t leave without him.
So yeah, and then (like I said, I’m still not really sure about all this but I’ll just share it anyway) I wanted her to be one of the ones help the rebels, because with her brother there . . . She doesn’t want his life in someone else’s hands. And then the rebels go through with it, and plant the kids nearby . . . and they basically have to figure it out from that point 😅 So yeah, the first half has some plot, second half – nothing. I have no idea how to get them out of this 😂 So any ideas would be awesome!! Also I will probably end up changing some of it, so if you think, oh this would end better if _____ happened, please share!!! 😅
Oh gotcha, that’s completely fine!! I’m not completely sure how much I’ll be on today and tomorrow, but I should be back Tuesday. So that works perfectly!! 😁
WE ARE REVIVING THE PROTECTION SQUAD! *steals Joseph, Julian, and Sabina from Ellette*
Yw!!
Oh, and that would make sense. If they’ve been following her a while, they would know he was her brother. I’ll give you some random thoughts wednesday. 😉
Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.
Ooooh, I really like what you have so far!!
I can’t think of any ideas right now. 😂 But when I come up with some I’ll let ya know!! 😁
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
Thanks!! And that would be great! ♥️ ♥️
WE ARE REVIVING THE PROTECTION SQUAD! *steals Joseph, Julian, and Sabina from Ellette*
Ooof, I’m very late replying to everything… But I LOVE this idea girl! Everyone had such great advice already, but I shall try to think of some ideas.😁
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
Oh you’re good!! Aw thanks! ♥️♥️ that would be great!!
WE ARE REVIVING THE PROTECTION SQUAD! *steals Joseph, Julian, and Sabina from Ellette*
Yes, I agree; Biblical fiction is a weighty challenge to take on. The amount of research and study that has to go into it is one of the reasons I’m holding off on trying it. I want to make sure I have the basic writing skills down before I try to write something that hard. 😉 Hence, Biblical retellings! Since it’s a retelling, I have more freedom to change pieces and adjust plot points. It’s amazing!!! I love how it makes you dive into the story and wrestle through the same questions and doubts the heroes did. You get to know the story better as well as get a better understanding of the Lord.
Aaaaaand that turned into a spiel about this genre. Hope you don’t mind reading all that. 😂
Sorry about the wait! Yeah, it sounds really cool! Maybe I’ll have to try it at some point 😉
No problem!! xD
WE ARE REVIVING THE PROTECTION SQUAD! *steals Joseph, Julian, and Sabina from Ellette*
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