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February 28, 2021 at 10:08 am #94402
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OfZrcV5g8xwZVQhGqOuR8THhgWdbrshO4f-LjsMFFYI/edit?usp=drivesdk
Here’s the next chapter! Thank you again to everyone helping me <3 I appreciate it more than you’ll know!
@devastate-lasting @nova21 @gracie-j @abigail-m- This topic was modified 3 years, 8 months ago by Daisy Torres.
"It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."
February 28, 2021 at 1:06 pm #94405@daisy-torres Ey I just read through it and left a couple comments! Thanks for sharing!
Lately, it's been on my brain
Would you mind letting me know
If hours don't turn into daysFebruary 28, 2021 at 1:41 pm #94407Anonymous- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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@daisy-torres Dude, this is awesome! Your descriptions are fantastic, your MC is hilarious, and the concept it so cool and unique! I absolutely love this!
February 28, 2021 at 4:53 pm #94413@devastate-lasting Thank you!! I really love your comments!!
"It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."
February 28, 2021 at 4:58 pm #94414@gracie-j Aaahh thank youu!!! I’m so glad you think so!!!
"It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."
March 1, 2021 at 10:34 am #94512I love this soooo much!! Tessa and the other characters, the internal monologue, the mirrors, the music, the prophecy… the whole concept is sooo cool!!! TYSM for sharing!!!!!!!!!
what we do in life echoes in eternity
-gladiator, 2000March 1, 2021 at 11:26 am #94515@nova21 Thank youuu!!! That makes me so happy!!!!! I really really appreciate all of your comments!! And absolutely!! Thank you so much for reading!!!
"It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."
March 1, 2021 at 12:23 pm #94525Anonymous- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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@daisy-torres You’re so welcome! Will you be sharing the next chapter?
March 2, 2021 at 1:30 am #94608@gracie-j I will!! It’s up right now, and I’m about to add the next one as well <3
"It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."
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