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    Cloaked Mystery
    @jonas
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      Hello, KP people, it has been quite a while since I have been here!

      In fact, last time I was here was with the purpose of sharing a story I was working on last summer. The only problem was that I didn’t actually get around to writing that story last summer. I am here now because I am actually being disciplined and have started seriously writing it.

      I have a first chapter ready, and I plan to continue writing some for the next few months of summer (however, it is unlikely that I complete the entire book before school starts up again.)

      So, if anyone is up for reading what I’ve got, I would welcome the feedback.

      For now, the link should be public, so anyone should be able to see the doc. At some point in the future I might restrict access since I don’t want this to be publicly available indefinitely. If I do so, I can still grant specific people access, but for now it is easier to just leave it open. Link below. (As usual remove space after the ‘h’.)

      h ttps://drive.google.com/file/d/1O3ppGmjOwnUeYwN2A2ZqvMgbmk3tgGF4/view?usp=sharing

      If you’re wondering what to expect, this is a fantasy story, though some elements will feel a bit like sci-fi (you’ll see once we get to like chapter 4 or something.) Violence-wise, this should be fairly tame. It is definitely not a gritty story. Obviously, we will have magic systems (this is me we’re talking about after all), which is art-based if that interests you at all.

      It’s been a while since I’ve really been on here, so I’ll just tag some recently active people, and if anyone else want to tag other people who might be interested, go ahead.


      @highscribeofaetherium
      @rae @whalekeeper @loopylin @ellette-giselle @keilah-h

      If you’re not interested in participating, no pressure to!

      I’ll take whatever feedback anyone wants to give me, but what I’m particularly interested in is just your reactions to the story, whether that be worldbuilding, characters, events, etc. Understanding how readers are feeling about things is some of the most valuable information I can get.

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