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February 6, 2025 at 7:15 pm #197382
Hello, how are you all? Nice Thursday isn’t it (well, the weathers not great here but that’s okay).
Here, I will be posting chapters for my new WIP, The Woods of Rosen. I’ll probably post the first chapter tomorrow once it has been thoroughly cleaned up, and please feel free to critique anything from it. If you don’t like something in it, something doesn’t make sense, or anything else you notice about it, please let me know.
The general plot of the story is that the townsfolk in Rosen, an isolated town surrounded by a forest, go missing, and two twins and three of their questionable allies are searching for them in the woods.Anyway, tags (feel free not to respond though if you don’t want to): @rae @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @hybridlore @loopylin @whaley @raxforge @theducktator @keilah-h @anyone else
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"And she realized that Gnag the Nameless' best efforts to blacken the world would only serve to sc
February 6, 2025 at 7:20 pm #197385Up above.
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
February 6, 2025 at 7:20 pm #197386sounds interesting!
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
February 6, 2025 at 10:11 pm #197392Whoops, thanks for catching the tag lol. Also thanks!
"And she realized that Gnag the Nameless' best efforts to blacken the world would only serve to sc
February 7, 2025 at 7:16 am #197397Yep!!
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
February 7, 2025 at 8:39 am #197399Anonymous
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Yay, now I get to stalk my sis’ book! I mean… hello stranger I don’t know, I will also be critiquing it too!
February 7, 2025 at 10:51 am #197403Yayy!! It sounds interesting—a little creepy, perhaps, but I’m intrigued!
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
February 7, 2025 at 10:57 am #197404Anonymous
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February 7, 2025 at 11:06 am #197407@the_lost-journal
Really, lol. Hmm… I feel like other people do, too, but I’m not sure because I haven’t read too many people’s writing. But you’re right, most of us don’t for the most part.
Also, random question. What made you choose the name Kefa? (You don’t have to answer if you don’t want to.)
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
February 7, 2025 at 11:51 am #197417Anonymous
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I don’t think so… Most people on here write historical fiction, fantasy, love…? or stuff like that.
Also, random question. What made you choose the name Kefa? (You don’t have to answer if you don’t want to.)
? … what? …????
Uh, … that is my name????
February 7, 2025 at 12:00 pm #197420@the_lost-journal
I think me and shadow are the only people on here who write anything creepy… ?
I don’t know…I started a pretty creepy story in my school notebook a couple weeks ago.
?For our Blessed Lady's sake, bring us in good ale!?
February 7, 2025 at 12:01 pm #197421Anonymous
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I don’t know…I started a pretty creepy story in my school notebook a couple weeks ago.
Hm, but do you frequently write horror?
February 7, 2025 at 12:07 pm #197422@the_lost-journal
No. I think you two are probably the only ones who write creepy stuff regularly.
?For our Blessed Lady's sake, bring us in good ale!?
February 7, 2025 at 12:11 pm #197424Anonymous
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February 7, 2025 at 12:37 pm #197432@the_lost-journal
Oh, cool. I meant you didn’t have to answer if you didn’t want to because some people don’t share their names on here, and I didn’t know if it was your real name.
A lot of times people pick fake names or usernames on here for internet safety. Like Rae and Loopy. Obviously Hybridlore isn’t my real name xD
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
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