Jitterz and His Coffee Mayhem

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  • October 5, 2024 at 12:51 pm #186738
    Andrew
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      A short story for all to enjoy,

      Don’t worry, it doesn’t have gore,

      And I do hope you don’t find abore.

      I do not have a friend named Chris,

      But here is the link you don’t want to miss:

       

      https://docs.google.com/document/d/1f2pVUjwzN521ZTd4i3oktKmzHH-2NxHUMjR8BUlEYIA/edit?usp=sharing

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      Bestest Teddy Bear
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      October 5, 2024 at 3:03 pm #186753
      RAE
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        Tagging ppl!


        @ellette-giselle         @jonas @whalekeeper @theshadow @loopylin @highscribeofaetherium @theducktator @grcr @keilah-h

        Sorry if I’m annoying you guys.

        Confuzzled, RAE
        (PS. Pfp by SelkieSeal on Unvale. My dear Chase ❤️?)

        October 5, 2024 at 4:10 pm #186754
        Ellette Giselle
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          @raxforge

          Nice! Nice!

          I like this! You have some good humor!

          And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music

          October 5, 2024 at 6:35 pm #186770
          Keilah H.
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            @raxforge I love it! Sweet little story, and the way you wrote it was funny.

            "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

            October 6, 2024 at 5:12 pm #186863
            -GRCR-
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              Finally finished reading this, and boy I love it!! Very cute and funny!! ??

               

              wa wawawa waaaa

              October 14, 2024 at 6:00 pm #187570
              TheShadow
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                @raxforge

                Sorry this is late. Your story was really good and your style of writing is really fun and engaging!

                "And she realized that Gnag the Nameless' best efforts to blacken the world would only serve to sc

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