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    Andrew McLaurin
    @raxforge
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      A short story for all to enjoy,

      Don’t worry, it doesn’t have gore,

      And I do hope you don’t find abore.

      I do not have a friend named Chris,

      But here is the link you don’t want to miss:

       

      https://docs.google.com/document/d/1f2pVUjwzN521ZTd4i3oktKmzHH-2NxHUMjR8BUlEYIA/edit?usp=sharing

      "Do you want me to keep the sideburns?"
      #AnduthForever (Lord Willing)

      #186753
      RAE
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        Tagging ppl!


        @ellette-giselle
        @jonas @whalekeeper @theshadow @loopylin @highscribeofaetherium @theducktator @grcr @keilah-h

        Sorry if I’m annoying you guys.

        "You need French Toast."
        #AnduthForever (hopefully 💕)

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        Ellette Giselle
        @ellette-giselle
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          @raxforge

          Nice! Nice!

          I like this! You have some good humor!

          Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God

          #186770
          Keilah H.
          @keilah-h
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            @raxforge I love it! Sweet little story, and the way you wrote it was funny.

            Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

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            -GRCR-
            @grcr
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              Finally finished reading this, and boy I love it!! Very cute and funny!! 💛💛

               

              Flaz: *yawns* Did the sun just come up? In the west?

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              TheShadow
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                @raxforge

                Sorry this is late. Your story was really good and your style of writing is really fun and engaging!

                "No! Monkeys should have pets, all monkeys should have pets!"

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