- This topic has 5 replies, 6 voices, and was last updated 1 month, 1 week ago by .
Viewing 6 posts - 1 through 6 (of 6 total)
Viewing 6 posts - 1 through 6 (of 6 total)
- You must be logged in to reply to this topic.
Home Page › Forums › Fiction Writing › Critiques › Short Story Critiques › Jitterz and His Coffee Mayhem
A short story for all to enjoy,
Don’t worry, it doesn’t have gore,
And I do hope you don’t find abore.
I do not have a friend named Chris,
But here is the link you don’t want to miss:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1f2pVUjwzN521ZTd4i3oktKmzHH-2NxHUMjR8BUlEYIA/edit?usp=sharing
"Do you want me to keep the sideburns?"
#AnduthForever (Lord Willing)
Tagging ppl!
@ellette-giselle @jonas @whalekeeper @theshadow @loopylin @highscribeofaetherium @theducktator @grcr @keilah-h
Sorry if I’m annoying you guys.
"You need French Toast."
#AnduthForever (hopefully 💕)
Nice! Nice!
I like this! You have some good humor!
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
@raxforge I love it! Sweet little story, and the way you wrote it was funny.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
Finally finished reading this, and boy I love it!! Very cute and funny!! 💛💛
Flaz: *yawns* Did the sun just come up? In the west?