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    whaley
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      This topic has probably been made before, but I needed a fresh thread I guess.

      So, I thought this could be where we discuss our villains for a while. What are their motivations? What’s their villainous style? Their strengths? Weaknesses? Why is the hero connected to them?

      I am actually working on a villain (I was working on the character bio when I got the idea just now). He is kind of a spoilery villain, so I’m not going to give much info, but he is Marcel’s million-year nemesis. In both definitions of the word nemesis. 🙂

      And that villain sparked another question, which has been asked before, but I wanted to know your opinion.

      Can a villain be just evil, or is that not as interesting as a conflicted villain? Which is better?

      Also, which do you gravitate towards?


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      MineralizedWritings
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        @whalekeeper

        Y’know I think pure evil villains can be really intriguing, as long as they have a reason for being why they are. And although they can be partially a victim of circumstance, I think it’s important to show where they made decisions to become evil.

        I mean take somebody like Loki, I don’t know a lot of his backstory, but the guy really says some straight up evil stuff that doesn’t come from any sort of just ‘oh no! Sad backstory! He went the wrong direction!’it’s just him being evil for the sake of it 😅

        Although it is important to not overdo villains into disturbing territory (depends on audience you knew that lol) There’s plenty of people irl who have zero regard for human life, so it isn’t far off to write somebody like that.

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        Allison
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          @whalekeeper

          Ooooh! This is great! Hmm. I guess a evil villain can be just as exciting as a conflicted villain, depending how you write them. Right now my villain (Rosie Anne Walker) is more conflicted. Rosie, the presidents daughter in 20xx in very evil. Rosie’s mother, Jovie, wanted her daughter to stay beautiful forever because that’s the way Jovie thinks people will listen to her only child. So Jovie had Rosie undergo an operation, to make her beautiful forever. It worked and it didn’t. Rosie is now beautiful forever, but now she is crazy and driven to do evil. Her motivation is to make everyone obey her, if they don’t well.. that’s another story. Her style? She does everything in secret, blaming it all on her father, Tom Kane Walker. Her strength is beauty, her weakness is certain words, they make her have uncontrollable shaking. The hero is connected to her, because Rosie is in charge of the kidnappings of the heroes parents.

          Its a lot, but that is my villain. Rosie Anne Walker. 🙂

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          Anonymous
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            @whalekeeper Personally, I believe an evil villain can be just as intriguing as a conflicted villain, so long as they still have a backstory that explains at least a little bit of how they got there.

            Some people, sadly, just truly aren’t conflicted about the evil they do, and they do it gladly. Everyone is born a sinner, but people who are evil to be evil truthfully still choose that path, it’s not like it’s forced upon them.

             

            For my own stories, I probably have a balance of those who are and aren’t conflicted.

            Characters like Hitchens, Frida, Kurt, Franz, Hans…they have no conviction about the evil they do, and they truthfully embrace their sin proudly and truly don’t care if what they’re doing is wrong or not. (though one of the ones I listed does began to feel conflicted later in life 😉)

            Characters like Dietrich, Erich, Adolphus, etc…they DO feel conflicted about it, and it leads to their eventual redemption.

             

            So yeah, I have a balance!!! 💖

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              @freedomwriter76 @acancello @mineralizedwritings @whalekeeper

              Eeeeeeehhh I love this forum!!!

              I have a reputation in my house, for loving the villains

              Ursula is the best part of the little mermaid in my opinion XD

              anyways I’m neutral on the topic, I think both villains are good

              Anyways here are some outfits I dedsighned for my Charries in my new fanfic (Which I can’t tell to much about XD)

              I totally didn’t take any inspiration from Descendants XD *whistles*

              here’s the first one

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              Smiley
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                And the other one

                Note these charries aren’t really villains… well they sort of are, it’s confusing XD

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                  Tell me which one is your favorite

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                  MineralizedWritings
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                    Cool! It reminds me of Wanda, but that’s probably because of the color scheme lol

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                    MineralizedWritings
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                      I like the first one best!

                       

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                        @mineralizedwritings

                        Yeah, I took some inspiration from Wanda

                        the green is probably my favorite, but… I love them both

                        drawing fashion is so much fun

                         

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                        hybridlore
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                          @whalekeeper

                          I think conflicting villains are the best, because I guess I like to deal with morality and the gray area, if that makes sense 😉 Personally I think evil villains are a little overused, but then again so are the villains with a horrible backstory or who were abused, stuff like that, so haha I don’t know what side that makes me on. Maybe I just prefer antagonists? 🤔

                           


                          @smiley

                          Ooh nice!! I really like the top one! ☺️

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                          MineralizedWritings
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                            @smiley

                            Ikr? So much fun!

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                              @mineralizedwritings @hybridlore

                              thanks!!!
                              also I spelled designed totally wrong XD

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                              whaley
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                                @mineralizedwritings

                                I agree, if you’re going to have an evil evil villain, make sure, he’s actively villainous, and doesn’t just have a title, yeah?


                                @acancello

                                Ooh, what about the operation drove Rosie crazy evil? Or is that spoilers?

                                @freedomwriter76

                                Balance is good 😉

                                Yeees, sometimes I’ll see people questioning villains who search for power or money, or hurt people for gain, saying, why?? Get to the source!!

                                And I’m like… They’re evil right?? 😂 Not all villains have tragic childhoods – and even if they did (which, like you said, starting points are important), that doesn’t justify their actions. Sin’s the real source.


                                @smiley

                                I like the first one too ❤ And did you know tho, I’ve never watched Descendants?


                                @hybridlore

                                Ah, the much-discussed Gray Area. I think it’s okay to touch around there, as long as you aren’t getting the good guys and bad guys all muddled up

                                And antagonists are great! So much potential for back-and-forth power dynamics ❤

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                                  I haven’t actually watched it I uh…. Read the book version that Disney made

                                  *me hides from embarrassment* XD

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