By Madelyn Graves
Pain.
Red, hot to the touch
Ripples down my body, echoing my hours of screams
That are now lost in the void of the mountainside.
My white hands
Once soft to the touch
Are now coarse, caked with layers of blood and grime.
Blackened, defiled.
I study them
And I keep walking up.
But then I feel it.
The terrain evens itself beneath my feet
Giving my broken limbs their first signs of relief.
The scarce oxygen flows through my veins
Igniting me with life.
I breathe it in with such exuberance
Energy
And down I go.
The mountain breeze
Its fingers, white and soft to the touch
Gently stroke my face.
And the first hint of a smile creeps onto my cracked lips.
Such a foreign feeling.
Suddenly I see red once again.
Such a familiar crimson
Embedded, carved into my mind.
The red of her eyes.
The red of her blood.
The red of her pain.
My pain.
Such a deep red
Contrasting against the white of the mountainside
But she keeps walking up.
And down I go.
Madelyn Graves is sixteen years old, living in a happy family of four in Louisiana. She has attended a Catholic school for twelve years, and her Christian faith has always been very important to her. She is always looking for new ways to spread God’s Word. Along with writing, Madelyn loves to bake and hang out with her friends from school. Family and friends are a very important aspect in her personal life, and she enjoys spending her free time in their company. She hopes to one day be a published author and an English teacher at her old Catholic middle school, where she continues to do what she loves and spread God’s message.
I have to say free-verse has grown on me since I joined KP, and I really like this one. Thanks for sharing, Madelyn. 😀
I’d have to agree with you Kate, I never really like any sort of non-rhyming poetry but with all the wonderful free-verse poetry around Kingdom Pen, I think my mind has been changed. Great job Madelyn 🙂 I hope to see more of your work around here.
FREE VERSE BUDDY! I really love how thought provoking this is. It’s definitely a poem you have to chew on for a while before you appreciate it fully. 🙂 Thanks so much for sharing, Madelyn. 😀
Beautiful poem, Madelyn! Thanks for sharing. 🙂
WOW. YES. I love this poem, Madelyn! Amazing job!