The House’s First Twirl
By Sara Abbott
Twirling, spinning, the very first time.
The house is still, but the girl twirls on.
Tilting, moving, the walls go by.
Bright, dull, a story untold;
in this house that is so old.
Height and beauty but empty and still;
it is the house`s first twirl.
It remembers times gone past when children laughed and sang.
When there was still life within.
But cold and bare it stands here,
Wishing for those days to return.
The girl, unaware, dances and spins,
kicking legs and waving arms.
Suddenly, the trance breaks.
The girl stops and catches her breath,
watching the last rays
of the sun dancing on the floor and walls.
Playing with her hair.
She jumps up and flies home,
twirling and leaping on the way.
The house is still,
waiting, listening to her footsteps fade.
It seems to sigh.
It seems to call her back but she doesn’t hear.
As the sun sets, it seems to take all beauty and happiness with it.
But the house still had the memory of its first twirl.
Sara Abbott
Sara Abbott (who goes by Spark) is currently 14 years young and loves yellow, singing, dancing, and playing the uke.
She tries hard (and fails repeatedly) to glorify God in all she does. It’s hard but worth it. 🙂
Sara loves writing poems, stories, and songs that bring out real emotions.
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Love it, Sara! I could picture everything vividly with each word you used, and the ending was so touching.
thank you JC, it means a lot. <3
Sara, this poem is beautiful! I loved the imagery and the way the story progressed. The words you chose really brought the poem to life and made me sad for the house.
thank you Jodi. 🥰
Lovely poem, Sara!! <33 I love the imagery!!:)
thank you!
This is a truly vivid and incredible poem, Sara!
<3
Wow, that was amazing to read! Good job!
I love the imagery and the bitter sweet feeling of this poem. Thank you for sharing it! I Really loved reading it.
wow, i’m published! i can’t believe it!!
i also can’t believe it took this long to get back to the forum. life guys, life.