Marina windows glowing with
moonlight and lightning,
I’m standing on tired toes,
peering into the sky that tastes like ocean,
trembling with wonder as the sky smiles.
Jagged white teeth stretch to touch cotton cheeks
aglow with the cool light of midnight.
Laughter rumbles out from the depths
of a midnight ocean whose tide never turns toward the shoreline
of treetops, shingle roofs, and horizons.
My heart wanders into the waves,
captured again in the unknown course
of currents tugging at its strings.
There’s danger in the night sky,
but I can’t help the wonder
that draws me farther up but further in—
closer to that place where feet walk on water and
wide-eyed dreams mingle with courteous reality
to form spiral galaxies leading to somewhere
beyond the distance my feet can tread.
This song of the tempest
that soars in zephyrs,
roars in my ears;
it has rekindled my awe again, and…
I think I see You in the flashes—
in the life fires that blink
beyond the pale faces of those who have
never tasted the sea—
that paint the world white
and hang in the sky like so much sea foam.
In the song of this storm,
I hear You calling to me.
It’s dark, but by this lightning,
I’m making my way home.
Sarah! Words cannot express how much I love this! This is such a beautiful poem, thank you for sharing this. (I told you that you will be a famous writer someday, this just proves it!) 🙂
Awwwwww! Thank you for reading. <3 I'm so glad you liked it! 😉
Magnificent! ????
Thank you so much, Brianna! 😀
Nice one Sarah! 🙂
Thank you, Tessa! ;D
This is so beautiful! The imagery is amazing. Great job, Sarah!
Daww! Thank you so much, Sarah! I’m glad you liked it! I love using figurative language *grins*, and in poetry, you can go to town and it’s alright. 😀
I literally got chills. I don’t usually go for free-verse, but this is amazing. The pictures in the words are so vivid. Great work.
😀 😀 😀 I’m so glad that you liked it Kate!!! 😀 *Shakespearean aside* A superhero likes my poem! YES! *fist pump* *concludes Shakespearean aside*
*Silver cape flows in the moonlight* All in a night’s work, ma’am. *transforms into a giant moth and flutters away into the gloaming*
I laughed way too hard at this. Seriously gonna write a fanfic about your superhero persona. xD
Ha! Share it with me when you do, and we’ll laugh together. XD
This is so beautiful, Sarah; I hope I can write like that one day! The kind of writing that calls to the inner person the way only that kind of writing can. You’ve got that. : ) (If that makes any sense.)
Thank you so much! 🙂 It seriously made my day to read this comment. The best way to get better at writing is to do it! 😉 If you ever want me to read over something you’ve written (especially poetry 😉 ), feel free to send it my way. 😀
Sarah…Wow. Just wow. This is absolutely beautiful, and the imagery you use is incredible! You are such a gifted writer. Keep using your gifts and talents for HIM! <3
Thank you so much, Greta! I definitely will! 😀
Seriously all these comments have made my day. Y’all are awesome! 😉
Breathtaking and imaginative. I love it. Great work, Sarah! 🙂
Thank you, Ingrid! 😀 🙂
I like your poem, Sarah, especially this part here:
“but I can’t help the wonder
that draws me farther up but further in—
closer to that place where feet walk on water and
wide-eyed dreams mingle with courteous reality
to form spiral galaxies leading to somewhere
beyond the distance my feet can tread.”
It’s so beautiful … thank you. 🙂
Awww! Thank you, Mallory! I’m so glad you liked it! 🙂