By Daisy Torres
I watched you go ice skating, but my mind found something grating. You stood on the ice with a
friend, took a quick picture, and that was the end.
I saw you scrolling yesterday, looking at a post. It seemed like you thought reality was a ghost.
You seem so intent on seeing pictures of mountains, that you forget—they don't exist on the
internet.
I saw a man talking to you, but I don't think you knew. His smile grew strained as he waited for
you to reply, but only a screen seemed to hold your eye.
I saw things that were lovely—flowers and trees with wonder in their leaves, but there's a
loneliness that comes when the visions I see can't be shared without screens.
Time is watching you, that much is known. And it's not waiting for you to put down your phone.
Daisy Torres
Great job, Daisy!! 😄 This is such a great reminder!
Thank you so much, Esther!
I love all the quick scenarios you used throughout the poem. It’s such a great way to illustrate the poem’s message.
Aw thanks!
Amazing poem, Daisy! I think this is a reminder we all need at times!!! ❤️
Thank you!!
Wonderful reminder and poem, Daisy!
Ah, I love this so much, Daisy!!!<3 Great poem! I wish everyone in our generation could see this.
Good reminder. I love it when teens don’t have phones at all or they put them away when socializing. I only know a few like that but I treasure them. 😉
“You seem so intent on seeing pictures of mountains, that you forget—they don’t exist on the internet.”
Wow. . . <3
I don’t have a smartphone and I never want one. Great job!