Zelphia Peterson

@jess Change of plans; I can write in 20 minutes if you want. I have some rewriting to do.
Anyone can join if they want.

@daeus, @jess, @clairec Just letting you all know, I won’t be writing today. Sorry.
@daeus, thanks for the points above. 🙂

@corissa-maiden-of-praise I’m saying God says wait……………………………. then He either says yes of no. And what God answers is always right, even if we don’t see it right there and then. Faith is to trust Him no matter what the answer is or whether we understand it or not.
Does that help you understand my pov?

@corissa-maiden-of-praise I’m saying God says wait………………………………………… then He either says yes of no. And what God answers is always right, even if we don’t see it right there and then. Faith is to trust Him no matter what the answer is or whether we understand it or not.
Does that help you understand my pov?

@corissa-maiden-of-praise I’m saying God says wait…………………………………………then He either says yes of no. And what God answers is always right, even if we don’t see it right there and then. Faith is to trust Him no matter what the answer is or whether we understand it or not.
Does that help you understand my pov?

@corissa-maiden-of-praise I’m saying God says wait…………………………………………..then He either says yes of no. And what God answers is always right, even if we don’t see it right there and then. Faith is to trust Him no matter what the answer is or whether we understand it or not.
Does that help you understand my pov?

Okay, I’m going to present some different viewpoints; I’m not saying I agree with them, I’m just saying I’ve heard them used and I’m curious how you will respond to them.

@hope Christ says in Mark 11:24, “Therefore I say unto you, What things soever ye desire, when ye pray, believe that ye receive them, and ye shall have them.” He’s obviously not…[Read more]

@corissa-maiden-of-praise
*this is a quote* “I heard a story once about two farmers who desperately need rain. And they both prayed to God for it. But only one went out and prepared his fields for it. Which one do you think trust God to send the rain?” (This is from Facing the Giants) 🙂

Is constantly praying for something a lack of faith? God…[Read more]

@corissa-maiden-of-praise
*this is a quote* “I heard a story once about two farmers who desperately need rain. And they both prayed to God for it. But only one went out and prepared his fields for it. Which one do you think trust God to send the rain?” (This is from Facing the Giants) 🙂

Is constantly praying for something a lack of faith? God…[Read more]

@Jess I’m contemplating reading it as well. Right now, I’m in the middle of reading the Fellowship of the Ring for the third time. 😉

@clairec Wow, I loved it! Great with the characters and the story! Keep writing because you’ve got a gift from God. 😉

Excellent! Well written, and in a way that visualizing the scenes was not hard at all. I could almost taste the dust at the ranch, see the joy mingled with sorrow on his mother’s face as he grew, and feel the tension as Bert reached for his gun. That is one of the best signs of a good writer in my opinion. 😉
*goes and reads poem* 🙂
This must…[Read more]

Actually @clairec I haven’t heard of Fuzzy Wuzzy Angels. *Must look it up*
But OH MY GOODNESS!!!!! That’s an awesome story. Nearly made me cry. I was just to hooked to let the tears get in my way. I…well…I really don’t know what to say. It was AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well done. 🙂

@jess Yes, he does know why he doesn’t want to be king. Very simple; it’s a boring job. It would be much more fun to be out fighting dragons and saving princesses in distress. 🙂

@daeus. After much careful thinking and all of that kind of stuff, here are my answers to your questions.

Do your normally edit your stories? No. I give them to my Mum.
Have you ever gotten an in-depth critique from another writer? No. Let me rephrase that. I just got one. Still haven’t looked at it.
How many times do you re-edit a story? As…[Read more]

@daeus No support. No reason. No plot. No excitement. Does that help you understand it?