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Greta replied to the topic May I ask for some help? -World Naming- in the forum Fantasy 9 years, 8 months ago
@aella
I like all the names you came up with! I’d have to say, though, that I like Ganadir and Caramin the best, but that’s just my opinion. It’s really up to you. 🙂 😉 -
BlueJay replied to the topic Bible Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@sarah-h Thanks and good night. 🙂
@clairec Have you ever read a book about someone paralyzed in the legs and then you feel like you can’t move them? Thank you also for the feed back on it. 🙂 I’ll watch it one day.
I’m off to bed too. See you tomorrow. (Well actually I won’t probably as I’ll be out and about, but I might make it on early in the…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Bible Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@sarah-h Maybe it will be a little bit longer for me, as I’m not that great with blood. I’ll probably talk to my sister and get her opinion too, and maybe, we’ll just skip a scene or two. 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic A Tale From Two Views in the forum Poetry 9 years, 8 months ago
@sarah-h 3AM???? How do you manage to stay awake???? It’s almost 8pm here, so I’m off to bed soon too. 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Bible Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@sarah-h It described his operations. Not in major detail, but in a way that made me wonder what the movie was like. My sister has the movie, so maybe I’ll watch it soon. How many operations does it show? Does it show any twins?
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BlueJay replied to the topic A Tale From Two Views in the forum Poetry 9 years, 8 months ago
Post them all and I’ll use what I can @sarah-h
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@jess No doubt the format will muck this up, but here is my poem for the dare that you gave me. 🙂 Enjoy.
Horse
Majestic, Fierce,
Galloping, Neighing, Prancing, Rearing,
Stallion, Foal *Bull, Calf,
Bawling, Chewing, Grazing, Plodding,
Calm, Gentle
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BlueJay replied to the topic Bible Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@sarah-h He dressed like like the Chinese, yes, and he used chop sticks. And yes, the missionaries where very offended by that. I read about him in a Trailblazer book. But I know there are lots of different books on him.
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BlueJay replied to the topic A Tale From Two Views in the forum Poetry 9 years, 8 months ago
@sarah-h Can you give me a list yourself then?
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BlueJay replied to the topic Fruits of the Spirit in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
@sarah-h no problem at all. *bows low to you.* 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic The Next Book Choosing in the forum Book Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@graciekry @his-instrument @jess @clairec @the-happy-bookaholic @dragon-snapper @timothy-young @warrioroftherealm @emma-flournoy @winter-rose @ingridrd @aysia-serene @adry_grace @daeus @belegteleri @hope @overcomer @vanna @faithdk @gretald @kate-flournoy @jadamae @hislittlerose @hannah-krynicki @writefury @hannah-olsen @zoe-wingfeather @dbhgodreign…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Bible Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@sarah-h Definitely Hudson Taylor. I could just keep repeating his name. He was so awesome. Really trust in God and relied completely on Him. But I just finished off a book called Gift Hands and Ben Carson (the guy the book is about) is pretty amazing too.
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BlueJay replied to the topic A Tale From Two Views in the forum Poetry 9 years, 8 months ago
@sarah-h Where do you get the vocabulary lists from?
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BlueJay replied to the topic Fruits of the Spirit in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
@sarah-h
1. Click on “link to poem”
2. Right hand click on picture and click “view image info”
3. Highlight all the text beside the word “location” (make sure you get all of it.)
4. Press ctrl (control) c on your keyboard
5. Come back to KP.
6. Begin a new message.
7. Click on the “img” button.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Fruits of the Spirit in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
Oh good it worked. I’d explain how I did it, but I think it would be too confusing. However, if you really want to know, I can tell you.
Hey, I notice you spell Saviour with a ‘u’. Why is that? I thought America didn’t spell it that way. Same with colour and other words which the website is telling me are wrong.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Fruits of the Spirit in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
@sarah-h Oh, you lost your profile pic??? Well, the one you have no is cute. 🙂 I have a friend who as a cockatiel.
As for the poem, it’s great. I hope you don’t mind, but let me try something…

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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@daeus I won’t be able to write tonight either. I’ve got stuff I need to do. Sorry. 🙁
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@daeus I won’t be able to write tonight either. I’ve got stuff I need to do. Sorry. 🙁
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BlueJay posted an update 9 years, 8 months ago
Correct me if this doesn’t make sense, but this was a quote that I made up myself.
“Everything in life is fair. It’s just not always what we want.” ~ Tessa 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Fruits of the Spirit in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
@daeus Yes, I did realize what the visual allowed you to see. I had planed on doing a cross first, but the words came and formed a body, which I like better.
Okay, yeah, I understand that. Thanks for critiquing this for me. I don’t normally write poetry, but I love this form.
Do you mind if I submit this poem to KP with your changes, as long as I…[Read more] - Load More

@bluejay No, that makes perfect sense.
@Bluejay yep, that totally makes sense.
@bluejay, agreed! 🙂
@bluejay Nice quote! And yes, it does make sense. 🙂
Makes perfect sense! That sounds like a line from a movie or something.