Zelphia Peterson

I just write, and sometimes the characters are just somehow made for each other and create the romance without any help from me. (Sort of;) Other times, they don’t, and the story is just as good. (To me, anyway)

I think it’s alright to write romance like this. This happens even in life.
It’s hard to write about romance, as for each person it’s d…[Read more]

I just write, and sometimes the characters are just somehow made for each other and create the romance without any help from me. (Sort of;) Other times, they don’t, and the story is just as good. (To me, anyway)

I think it’s alright to write romance like this. This happens even in life.
It’s hard to write about romance as for each person i…[Read more]

@adry_grace

After a while I begin to laugh

Maybe cut out “after a while” here.

It’l be okay.

I think that’s supposed to be “it’ll.” 😉

Just like that her voice breaks.

I would take out “just like that.”

But the choice is yours too make

“Too make” would be “to make.” 😉

but sure enough I find her walking by my side.

I’d take out “sure e…[Read more]

Thank you all. My next stop motion is going to have less movement I promise. It’s also going to have mouth movement. 🙂 😀 🙂
@writefury Could you find out what camera your brother used? The quality looks really good.

Ok @daeus See you tomorrow.

@writefury Wonderful poem! I like it. 🙂

Tag – @anna-brie

Ok, so I wrote for half an hour to make up for it. I’m writing a poem for the comp and got 124 words written. I’m pretty please with that as poetry is not my “thing.” It does get easier the more I do it though.
And I’m sorry again. 🙁 I’ll try to do better tomorrow. Do you want to write 12-1? *I will remember* Let’s just blame @daeus. He’s…[Read more]

I’m so sorry @anna-brie. I forgot!!!! 😮 *cries really hard.* I got occupied with my sister’s school work and did a few jobs for mum and then realized that I’d missed. So very sorry. 🙁 *wails miserably*
I can write later if you want to write with me. *falls to the ground in desolation* **How could I forget?!?!?!?!**

@anna-brie What about 4:15-4:45? If not 4:30 will be ok, but I might stop a bit before 5. Depends when we’re having tea.

@anna-brie Just letting you know that I won’t be able to write this afternoon as I’m out till 4pm. If you want to write after that, let me know. 🙂

344 Haha I beat!!!! 😛 *eats cookies* See what you’ve started me doing @daeus. I can’t stop eating cookies. 😀

Wait up! *puff puff* I’m here. Ready. Set. *realizes you’ve already gone.* Goes.

@daeus

@anna-brie Ok. I’ll be busy till 10 too. 😀 And I’ll be writing at 10:30 with @daeus if you want to join us for the half hour. (And we can make it an hour if you want to continue) 🙂

O wow! @writefury That is really good. I really do like it. I’m not very good at poetry, but I would fix or change anything. *Other people might think differently. 😛 *