Zelphia Peterson

Thanks for reading and critiquing it, @kate-flournoy! 🙂

All right, @Daeus and @kate-flournoy. I’ve edited some. It’s still not quite done, but if you have time, would you mind reading it through? If you don’t have time, that’s perfectly fine.
@kate-flournoy, Is the showing vs. telling problem better? *looks hopeful*

The day of my thirteenth birthday I met my true love. I invited my entire…

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All right, @Daeus and @kate-flournoy. I’ve edited some. It’s still not quite done, but if you have time, would you mind reading it through? If you don’t have time, that’s perfectly fine.
@kate-flournoy, Is the showing vs. telling problem better? *looks hopeful*

The day of my thirteenth birthday I met my true love. I invited my entire…

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@Hannah-c, Thank you! 😀 🙂 😉

@kate-flournoy I know…it’s so depressing. I still can’t believe Cruz and Kasich dropped out. 🙁 I just have to remember that God’s got it under control. *sigh*

@ingridrd

That’s great. I agree with you all. So let me put it this way. Here is a topic “Kingdom Pen” Let’s write a poem together. Someone else start as I’m terrible. Write what you can and someone else will join their verses on… and so on. Does that make sense.
@gretald @ingrid @overcomer @daeus (I do agree that the poem was pretty terrible. 😛 )

@Hannah-c Thank you! Yes, it’s actually a lamb. XD

@bluejay I like the topic for the poem! 😉 However, I agree with @Daeus that there isn’t really much rhythm to the poem…I would work on the meter and rhythm a bit and go from there. Great idea for a poem, though! 🙂

Okay let me tag a few people to get this going. Let’s see who’s good at poetry. @overcomer and @daeus I know you two for definite. C’mon people.

@hannah-c No it’s not quite a word war. What you do is tag someone and set a time to write for; half an hour, hour etc. It helps you stay focused and stops all those annoying distractions. When you have finished your time you can post how much you got done.
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@hope @writefury

@hope @writfury

I was once writing a story and an old dog died in the fist half. The grand-daughter of the dog’s owner asks him, “Will Bess go to Heaven, Grandpa?”
Bill tried to smile down at her. “Do you think she will?”
Wendy pondered the question for a bit. “She was a good dog,” she replied. “So yes I think that Jesus would like to have her in Heaven.”
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@Hannah-c I like it…Duchess Razzmatazz, I will willing polish thy scepter. XD

@rolena-hatfield @daeus How do you delete a post that you’re already posted?

Well, I’m no help @abigail-blomberg. I’m sure someone else, maybe @spradlin, would know how to delete messages. Sarah, do you know???????????????????????? :S

Let me see if I can find out. Here goes. This is not working.

Let me see if I can find out. Here goes.