@writefury
Active 7 years, 4 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Daeus replied to the topic We need a name in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
So this is kinda freaky. Like, one moment you think you’re talking to a girl, and then the next she turn into a dragon. I mean, I know we talk about fantasy and such occasionally but -. I hope she doesn’t eat me. So – like, isn’t there a rule against having claws on the forum. I should probably report this.
Is this something that only happens to…[Read more]
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Ingrid replied to the topic We need a name in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@writefury
This is an awesome idea! 🙂 🙂 🙂 -
Greta replied to the topic We need a name in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@writefury, what a great idea!
@Daeus, Oh my word, that’s an awesome name! 🙂
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Faith Kindred replied to the topic We need a name in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
Yeah, I’d say I’m a KPer… but Knights of Kingdom Pen sounds awesome! 🙂 I agree with you, @sarah-h. @writefury, you’d better get busy writing up something to say to newly dubbed knights. 😉
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Help! I have a nameless poem! in the forum Poetry 8 years, 8 months ago
@Ingridrd @jadamae thank you for saying so. Your praise encourages me to continue with poetry writing. This is one of the few poems I have written that I think is any good, but you make me want to edit the bad ones and see if I can’t make something of them after all. Who knows? 🙂
As to the name, I’m so glad we’re all of the same mind! That…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Help! I have a nameless poem! in the forum Poetry 8 years, 8 months ago
@Ingrdrd @jadamae thank you for saying so. Your praise encourages me to continue with poetry writing. This is one of the few poems I have written that I think is any good, but you make me want to edit the bad ones and see if I can’t make something of them after all. Who knows? 🙂
As to the name, I’m so glad we’re all of the same mind! That…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Help! I have a nameless poem! in the forum Poetry 8 years, 8 months ago
You see, @daeus , if I name it after the first line it sounds like it’s a poem about a train, and if I name it after the second, it’s a bit vague . . . it could be about a sports car, or a new pair of shoes.
As for naming it after what it’s about, @writefury , that’s kinda difficult. . .
It’s about typewritten words outlasting the machines used…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Help! I have a nameless poem! in the forum Poetry 8 years, 8 months ago
Here, you can read it for yourselves. @writefury , @daeus , @kate-flournoy
Any name ideas or editing ideas are welcome!
Clickety-clack,
New and black;
Click-clack-ding!
And the paper rolls back.Letter then letter
Line by line,
White paper is marred
By a black ink design.Clickety-clack,
Old and rusted;
Years have passed
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Help! I have a nameless poem! in the forum Poetry 8 years, 8 months ago
Here, you can read it for yourselves. @writefury , @daeus , @kate-flournoy
Any name ideas or editing ideas are welcome!
Clickety-clack,
New and black;
Click-clack-ding!
And the paper rolls back.Letter then letter
Line by line,
White paper is marred
By a black ink design.Clickety-clack,
Old and rusted;
Years have passed
Since last it was…[Read more] -
Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Help! I have a nameless poem! in the forum Poetry 8 years, 8 months ago
Here, you can read it for yourselves. @writefury , @daeus , @kate-flournoy
Any name ideas or editing ideas are welcome!
Clickety-clack,
New and black;
Click-clack-ding!
And the paper rolls back.Letter then letter
Line by line,
White paper is marred
By a black ink design.Clickety-clack,
Old and rusted;
Years have passed
Since last it was…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Beginnings make readers— endings make fans in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@Ivy-Rose @zoe-wingfeather @writefury @faithdk @Daeus good thoughts, everyone!
I think, Ivy, that action hooks can certainly work, but I tend to be careful using them because if you slam your reader with immediate action they don’t really care, because they don’t care about the character, because they don’t KNOW the character. Get me?
Also, I…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Beginnings make readers— endings make fans in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@Ivy-Rose @zoe-wingfeather @writefury @faithdk @Daeus good thoughts, everyone!
I think, Ivy, that action hooks can certainly work, but I tend to be careful using them because if you slam your reader with immediate action they don’t really care, because they don’t care about the character, because they don’t KNOW the character. Get me?
Also, I…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
Ighhhh… forgot the tag @writefury
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Ingrid replied to the topic I've Got A Little List in the forum Poetry 8 years, 8 months ago
@writefury
HILARIOUS!!! And so creative… 🙂 ! -
Ingrid replied to the topic I've Got A Little List in the forum Poetry 8 years, 8 months ago
@writefury
HILARIOUS!!! And so creative… :)! -
Greta replied to the topic I've Got A Little List in the forum Poetry 8 years, 8 months ago
Haha! I love it @writefury 😛
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Kate Flournoy posted a new activity comment 8 years, 8 months ago
Wow no what @writefury, you’re not a sailboat?! Welp, I guess that’s just further proof you can’t believe everything you see… 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic I've Got A Little List in the forum Poetry 8 years, 8 months ago
OW that made me laugh so hard! Every single one of those— yes!!!!!!! They’d totally not be missed! 😛
Oh, that’s great @writefury. Just great. Especially love this line:
And the woman in adventures who’s tough as any guy,
To fill the spot of “strong female” . . . or at least another try.Spot on. 😀
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Kate Flournoy posted a new activity comment 8 years, 8 months ago
Hahaha… yes, isn’t the picture so cute @writefury? Just so you know, I don’t really look like that… 😛 😉 I’m about middle height, very thin, with wavy black hair and brown eyes. And no— I don’t like Tabasco. 😉 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Start? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
*two thumbs up* 😉 😛
Ugghhhh… that is like the tenth time I’ve almost written your tag as literally atwritefury. 😛
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It’s really cute. 🙂 Like that’s where he gets his firepower or something. 😛
Ah, I see. 😉
Well, this might come as a shock. But I’m not a sailboat either. :O I’m small with curly, reddish-brown hair and green eyes. Think… a female Pippin. My nose looks a lot like his, actually.
Wow no what @writefury, you’re not a sailboat?! Welp, I guess that’s just further proof you can’t believe everything you see… 😉