@writefury
Active 8 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
- Total Posts: 467
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Ingrid replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@daeus Ah, there we go. Nice job. 🙂
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Daeus replied to the topic Hey Everyone in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 7 months ago
@sam-kowal Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet!
I like your dragon too. 🙂
And definitely Brandon Sanderson. I just finished his Mistborn trilogy recently. Really good.
Some of my favorite stories? (not necessarily in order) The Count Of Monte Cristo, Dreamlander, A tale of two cities, cry the beloved country, crime and…[Read more]
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Jane Maree replied to the topic DragonSong in the forum Poetry 8 years, 7 months ago
@aislinn-mollisong Ooh I really like this!! Good job. 😀
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Hey Everyone in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 7 months ago
Welcome @sam-kowal!!! *throws confetti* I am Jane, Aussie, and adventurer. *bows and hands you pizza* I also like pizza. Welcome to the forum, and I hope you enjoy your stay!!
Do you have a favourite author?
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@Daeus much better! I haven’t got anything else to note about that. 😀 *thumbs up*
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Can it Possibly have been a Year? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@dragon-snapper XD Not that kind of frog. The natural frogs are good. Like Frog and Toad, you know? I like Frog. He’s an ENFJ. Or an INFJ. He’s nice either way. And Josiah the Wiser’s pet isn’t bad.
*cough* I said it because she was speaking French (Bonjour!), and French people are commonly (or were, and maybe just by Brits…) known as Frogs.…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@lifeofkatie I think I’ve got it fixed.
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Daeus replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@lifeofkatie On the button?
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Daeus replied to the topic Writing Romance in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@perfectfifths. Hmm. I just noticed one day that it was true because…I noticed it.
The thing I don’t like about romances is that they are fake. They make them too emotional. People aren’t like that.
They are so totally fake, but I don’t actually think people are any less emotional. They’re just less cheesy about it. ……[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
Yikes! These tags aren’t working. Let me try again. @shannon @emily @winter-rose.
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Daeus replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@jane-maree @shannon @emily @winter-rose @ingridrd @lifeofkatie
Okay! How about this?
http://www.thescratchingquill.com/the-show-dont-tell-course/
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Can it Possibly have been a Year? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@Ethryndal This place would not be the same if you had not come. Nor all the peeps on it. NOPE. So we can all applaud God with a fury for what He’s put together.
And it’s really great on the writing side of things too. 😛 Because it’s wonderful to know how to write well, and KP sure does brilliantly putting out the learning.
*poke*…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@jane-maree @shannon @emily @winter-rose @ingridrd @lifeofkatie Thanks. I’m working on a revision. I’ll get back to you sooner or later. 😀
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Daeus replied to the topic Writing Romance in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@princessfoo Righty. Well, I don’t really read romance and I’m not an expert on it, but IÂ have written it just a bit.
My point is based on a principle I’m going to call Daeus’ principle just to stroke my vanity. This principle states that if you know at a certain point in your story you can get a reaction out of your reader, do not have any of…[Read more]
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@Daeus personally the site strikes me as good but not eye-catching, this could be because I’m a little of a website snob, with having a web design and developer as a sister. 😛 My thoughts are:
– seconding what everyone’s said about the ‘get your free training now’ button being jarring and not professional or fitting with the rest of the…[Read more]
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Ingrid replied to the topic *bursts in in an explosion of confetti* in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 7 months ago
*sighs* Why am I always late?
@dragongeek First, I love your tag. Second, you sound pretty fantastic. Third, if you could be anything other than a human (assuming you are one of course), what would you be?
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Ingrid replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
Aaaaannnd it’s a good thing that you didn’t spell “Get” like “Geat” as I just did… *facedesk*
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Ingrid replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@daeus Oooooh, me likey! Though I would consider what @lifeofkatie said about the “Geat Your Free Training Now” button. It’s kinda…ugly. 😜 Other than that though, brilliant job! 🙂
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Daeus replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@winter-rose @ingridrd @princessfoo Ah! My bad. Here, try again.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@daeus I’m having the same problem as @winter-rose…😕
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