@writefury
Active 7 years, 4 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Ingrid replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Captions in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien Ha. Those are literally the story of my life. 😂
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Ingrid replied to the topic Writing Inspiration in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@hannah-c Boy, do I need this reminder sometimes. 🙂 To be honest, I’m at a weird stage in my writing career. I’m struggling to find time to write *coughschoolcough*, but I want to write so bad. All. The. Time. And that just doesn’t work when life is so busy. *sighs*
I guess I need to start making time to write because I don’t want my…[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 6 years, 9 months ago
@Daeus Thanks.
Well, you’d better come up with an epic soundtrack for it then. 😉
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy 6 years, 9 months ago
@dekreel Is your character a girl?
All I can think of are names like Peregrine (for a boy), Parrianne and Perris (those aren’t that good, I know). 😉
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 6 years, 9 months ago
@emma-flournoy Sure, here’s one. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oV9qnLtpy4Cwn8-JFfJaXzOn4A5-yqRBR-AqlFIyYdk/edit?usp=sharing
Yeah, song creation and all that. I probably should have come up with something more original, but in my defense the song creation is the basis for the whole magical system, the last book’s allegorical aspects, and the…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 6 years, 9 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 @rochellaine Thanks. 😀
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 6 years, 9 months ago
@Daeus Oh hey, could I have it in a doc too? I was going to do it without one, but that sounds a much more efficient option.
I don’t write poetry, but I certainly appreciate good poetry, especially with good cadence. That’s my favorite part.
I read through it, and it’s beautiful, and I do have some metrical suggestions.
Also, I feel compelled…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 6 years, 9 months ago
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 6 years, 9 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 More for metric pattern, but either one.
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Daeus started the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 6 years, 9 months ago
Hi KeePers,
Any of you who write structured poetry, I could use a bit of help with a poem I’ve written. This is for the fantasy novel I’m writing and essentially recounts the first events of the world.
My problem is that I know a few spots have clunky meter. I generally have a good ear for meter and maybe I could fix this by myself, but…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Unlikable Protagonist? in the forum Characters 6 years, 9 months ago
@introvert_girl Sam really said it already, but you can also add a backstory to show why the character acts the way they do. The overall tone of the story will help too. I think though that the most important thing is proactivity, like Sam said.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Why do you write? in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
I write for two reasons. 1) Because I believe the Lord can work through words and that the words we speak and write have power. 2) I write because I have to. What else would I do with all these insane, lovely ideas swirling around in this head of mine? Not that ideas are a burden buuut…*glares at all my WIP…[Read more]
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Facebook in the forum Publishing & Platform 6 years, 9 months ago
@Dragon-snapper I’ve recently started up a facebook page too, and I’m just learning the ropes. I normally share all my blog posts on there, and some updates on my WIPs (though I should do that more). I’m thinking of doing a ‘Saturday Snippets’ sort of thing where I share a piece of writing every Saturday, etc.
Other than that, I also second…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Just a Bit… Dismal in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@dragon-snapper First of all, nice example. 🙂
I don’t think that it’s too dismal by itself. Even a lot of that can be good. It creates tension, you know.
It just takes a little bit of hope to keep the reader on the right track. Simple things too. Depression works because it pretends to be immense. Little, pleasurable, “childish” (quote on…[Read more]
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Ingrid replied to the topic A Year Ago… in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99Â *tackle hugs you*Â Love you to bits, my dear.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic A Year Ago… in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 My pleasure. XD
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Daeus replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 6 years, 9 months ago
@dragon-snapper We’ll I think you’re the first to ever reveal their name after hiding it for a long time. It’s kinda funny too because Danielle has a really soft feel to it which…doesn’t exactly make me think of a dragon. lol. Don’t burn me with a ball of flame, please! I like the name. It starts with a Da, after all. What more could you ask for?
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Daeus replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 6 years, 9 months ago
@dragon-snapper *drops jaw* Did you just reveal your…actual name?
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Daeus replied to the topic A Year Ago… in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@That_writer_girl_99 I’m feeling slightly sentimental like you’re leaving, but you’re celebrating the fact that you’re not leaving. I find that utterly fascinating. Write that down somewhere. Happiness can be sad.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic A Year Ago… in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 Yay!!! Congratulations, and may you reap the goodness of KP for many more years. 😉 D’ye remember our first conversation? It was regarding Luke Skywalker and whether or not he’s whiny. XD
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