Rosey Mucklestone

@Ethryndal Ohh. Whoa. She looks to be a character all right. Vena LaVere? Right? The name FITS.
Is the genre steam-punk-y? That’s sorta what it feels like, with that dress and the bottle (be it filled with caustic wit or anything else).

@salome01w4g @dragon-snapper @emily @shannon
UPDATE: thanks to those of you who were praying for my sister. Unfortunately, she went to the doctor yesterday and they said she has mono. Please pray that the rest of us don’t get it and she would have a fast recovery! Thanks again.

@xonos-darkgrate As far as the magic goes, I think it probably needs a bit more fleshing out with details, but as long as the power isn’t actually God’s power, but merely a separate power he created, I think you’re on the right track.

As for romance, it’s really up to you. It could be hard to write it without any experience and you do want to…[Read more]

@ethryndal *shivers* She looks fun to write. Her collage just makes me think “blood”. 😉
@dragon-snapper Well done! I love the picture of the trees.
@daughteroftheking Very cool! I’m guessing the ladybug has some significance?

@xonos-darkgrate Good ideas. The one thing that confuses me is point 1. It sounds strange that Satan could manipulate God’s power. Maybe there’s there’s an outside force of power that God created and controls as a testing ground? I’m sure you’ll figure it all out.

@Catwing I gotta go now. *vanishes*

@Catwing pssh nah, I’ll be fine…probably. xD Thanks for the offer…come October 30th I might be more desperate. XP

Oh fun, sounds like a great start, @Catwing
All I have for my NaNo novel so far is a couple of basic brainstorming ideas. 😛

@Catwing *cheers* That’s super!

@Catwing Yay! That’s great. I’m a few pages away from finishing my chapter…

Farewell @Dragon-snapper! 😀 *salutes*

*cooks a few more pizzas so there’s more to go around EVERYONE* xP

*sets out a plate of pizza to share*

@Catwing
I have been summoned. I come.
I’ve got one chapter left to critique so I’ll join you!

@Daughteroftheking it’s worth a shot. 😛

@Ethryndal sweeeeeet.

@xonos-darkgrate what @Daeus said, basically.

Otherwise I think it looks very solid. You seem to already have a lot of thematic material (foils and such) to work with, so you’re starting out with a wide perspective and plenty of stuff to juggle around. Also you seem to know what to do with that stuff, which is always a plus. XD

As for names……[Read more]

The story sounds solid from what you’re telling me. *thumbs up*

I do, however, wonder about the story world. It’s not that I think it’s wrong to do what you’re doing, but I wonder if it’s right. A force that leaks through cracks int he universe sounds mystical and there doesn’t appear to be a God in your story. I certainly believe that fantasy…[Read more]

@xonos-darkgrate I’m pretty sure most publishers will technically except writers of any age, though you may have to get a cosigner if you’re under 18 or something like that. I don’t know. I certainly know that some publishers do accept younger writers. Now, if they know that you’re younger, you will probably have a harder time convincing them to…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper Very nice. Love her name. 😉