@writefury
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Rosey Mucklestone replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
“You came here in that magical box of yours, remember?” He frowned, “I’d think after all the time you spent explaining it to us you would at least remember you had it…”
“Oh…” I felt my face grow a little red, but I tried to keep my expression the same, “Yeah. Just… seeing if you remembered right.”
So that’s it then? I’m a time traveler? I…[Read more] -
Rosey Mucklestone replied to the topic Help! I have a nameless poem! in the forum Poetry 8 years, 8 months ago
Generally poems tend to have repeated words or lines scattered throughout. You could pick one of those. Or just call it whatever the poem is about. “Rain” or “Bumblebee” or “Broken heart” sounds fine. 😛
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Rosey Mucklestone replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
“Well, I woke up here. So that’s a little hard to say…” I start out a little annoyed, but something niggles at the corner of my mind. What do I remember anyway? All these people seem to know and look up to me, but I don’t remember any of them.
I think for a minute and a few of their faces trigger slight flashes in my mind. Still, the names of…[Read more] -
Rosey Mucklestone replied to the topic Beginnings make readers— endings make fans in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
YES! Love opening hooks! 😀
This is one of my favorite ones I’ve done:
“My wormhole experiment took a little bit to actually start working. Which was great that it worked at all, but the thing was that it started right in the middle of class.”
*sigh* I need to write more on that… someday.
Also, there’s a kids’ book one that I love:
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Rosey Mucklestone replied to the topic short story one shot. in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
LOVE IT MY GOODNESS. 😀 So fun!
The info dumping wasn’t as huge of a problem for me, but I think most of the stuff you said could probably be interspersed as its relevant to the story.
That, and probably make a few more paragraph breaks near the beginning. Just… less intimidating than a huge chunk of text, if ya know what I mean. XP
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Rosey Mucklestone replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
I’m back! 😛 Sorry. Meant to carry this on sooner…
My feet come to rest on a carpet I most certainly haven’t seen before. Expensive Persian fluff. No one in their right mind would ever let me near that sort of thing. Though that thought does no favors to any idea of how I got here…
It has to be a dream.
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Rosey Mucklestone replied to the topic MBTI in the forum Characters 8 years, 8 months ago
@anna-brie
I’d look into the functions more if the regular test isn’t working out for you. It’s a bit more specific that way. -
Rosey Mucklestone replied to the topic er….hello sweetie in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 8 months ago
@zoe-wingfeather
I’m not sure, having never used blogger. But on wordpress, usually if I copy and paste a blogger into the “follow new blog” thing it works just fine. (Though the posts are delayed about a day or so to show up in the reader.) -
Rosey Mucklestone replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
C’mon, guys. Should I write the next part, too? Restart?
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Rosey Mucklestone started the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
We have nothing to do and no one is doing anything about it.
Someone must save this forum.
Okay, so this’ll be sort of like this topic, but with a story.
Write a paragraph or two, pass it on.Let’s go!
My first thought was This isn’t how I sleep.
The blankets were pulled tidily up to my chin and I could feel them smoothed over on top. My legs…[Read more] -
Rosey Mucklestone replied to the topic er….hello sweetie in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 8 months ago
@zoe-wingfeather
Cool! 😀 I’d definitely like to see that. The blog address didn’t come through for some reason, though… :/
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Rosey Mucklestone posted an update 8 years, 8 months ago
Happy Saint Patrick’s day, everyone! 😀 *hands out mint cookies* *pinches anyone who doesn’t have green on*
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Rosey Mucklestone posted a new activity comment 8 years, 8 months ago
Mission accomplished then. 😛 Spidey is the best. Except he’s on Team Iron Man…
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Ahhhh, good XD
In the comics he switches sides towards the end. I’m hoping they transfer the twist to the movie as well.
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Rosey Mucklestone replied to the topic I've Got A Little List in the forum Poetry 8 years, 8 months ago
Aaw, thanks guys! XD Feel free to add any verses on. 😛
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Rosey Mucklestone changed their profile picture 8 years, 8 months ago
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Rosey Mucklestone started the topic I've Got A Little List in the forum Poetry 8 years, 8 months ago
Gilbert & Sullivan fans may recognize that title. Perfectly fine if you don’t. Just thought you’d like a parody I made.
(Writefury:)
As some day it may happen that a victim must be found,
I’ve got a little list — I’ve got a little list
Of literary persons who might well be underground,
And who never would be missed — who never would be missed!…[Read more] -
Rosey Mucklestone posted a new activity comment 8 years, 8 months ago
It’s really cute. 🙂 Like that’s where he gets his firepower or something. 😛
Ah, I see. 😉
Well, this might come as a shock. But I’m not a sailboat either. :O I’m small with curly, reddish-brown hair and green eyes. Think… a female Pippin. My nose looks a lot like his, actually.-
Wow no what @writefury, you’re not a sailboat?! Welp, I guess that’s just further proof you can’t believe everything you see… 😉
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Rosey Mucklestone posted an update 8 years, 8 months ago
@lightningmouse Well, thank you for changing your picture to the most shocking thing of my week. 😛
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You’re welcome. I aim to please and/or startle the dickens out of people.
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Mission accomplished then. 😛 Spidey is the best. Except he’s on Team Iron Man…
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Ahhhh, good XD
In the comics he switches sides towards the end. I’m hoping they transfer the twist to the movie as well.
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Rosey Mucklestone posted an update 8 years, 8 months ago
@kate-flournoy I have a feeling if I ever meet you in feral life, I’ll be shocked that you’re not a mini-dragon holding a Tabasco sauce bottle. XD
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Hahaha… yes, isn’t the picture so cute @writefury? Just so you know, I don’t really look like that… 😛 😉 I’m about middle height, very thin, with wavy black hair and brown eyes. And no— I don’t like Tabasco. 😉 😀
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It’s really cute. 🙂 Like that’s where he gets his firepower or something. 😛
Ah, I see. 😉
Well, this might come as a shock. But I’m not a sailboat either. :O I’m small with curly, reddish-brown hair and green eyes. Think… a female Pippin. My nose looks a lot like his, actually.-
Wow no what @writefury, you’re not a sailboat?! Welp, I guess that’s just further proof you can’t believe everything you see… 😉
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Rosey Mucklestone replied to the topic Novel Start? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
Haha, definitely get that. I shall keep you in mind, though! 😛
YESSS all those. *takes notes* It’s a kind of humorous situation as well. 😉
Forgiveness is a side theme. I think the main one is something like… taking a stand against larger evils? Something like that. They end up pretty much battling the whole Nimrodian system to try and save…[Read more]
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Thanks and ouch.