Clare

@SeekJustice yayy, howdy! *waves* I’ll be here for a while yet. 😀 (Though I may duck off to grab foods at some point)

@Daughteroftheking @Alia fare well! See you both in the future. <3

@Alia I’m working on rewriting a scene from my novella (A Sprig of Green) and including some new character aspects.

@DaughteroftheKing heyyyy. Welcome!! 🙂

@Alia welcome! Pizza is free for the taking. 😛

Yep, I’m still here and writing. 😀

@anyone who might be around

I’m here to do some writing! *sets out a table of pizza in case anyone comes along*

*pokes head in* Hail the late-owl Aussie resurfacing after many days of silence to do some writing while everyone else is quite probably asleep. xP

@kate-flournoy ‘Victorious’ seems a little too soon. Like “oh yes here’s the book, but don’t worry they’re victorious in the end.” That could just be me though. When I started reading the blurb you have there, it made me think “Destroyer” which has a stronger sound and also shows the struggle of the story a little too?

That’s just my thoughts anyways.

@perfectfifths Thanks! It was a lot of crazy writing. 😛

@daughteroftheking *salutes back* I’m also slightly insane… XD

@Dragon-Snapper good job! *salute* See you in the future. 😀

@Jess-Penrose *waves* Heyo. 😛

@daughteroftheking *applauds your motivational speech*

Well, I hit 50k on day ten and finished my novel on day eleven. Since then, I’ve been looking at my Novella that I wrote in July and working out some stuff to edit in it and all those fun things.

@Dragon-snapper @Jess-Penrose I’m heeeeeeere. Brainstorming some stuff for edits.

@radically-surrendered I’m writing up a synopsis.

@radically-surrendered Welcome!

@Emily Thanks for the ice cream!! *waves*

*pokes head in* I LIVE.

I’ll be writing, though I probably won’t say very much as I’m a little busy today so I’ll be focusing on wording. 😀

@0-0enyali0-0 As Dekreel said, focus on the characters rather than the fight and that’ll make the scene that much better.

I can’t recommend research enough. Learn as much as you possibly can about the method of fighting that you’re using. The more you know, the easier the fight scenes will become to write.

@Dekreel everyone else has some good ideas, and I second theirs. Basically, if you can bring in a side plot or throw in another antagonist to add more conflict and higher stakes it’ll keep your middle going strong.

@That_Writer_Girl_99 Oooh nice! Dieselpunk is so fun to write in, and that concept of three islands all different realms–SO COOL. Do the medieval and dieselpunk worlds have any technology from the futuristic one/from each other? It would make sense for that a little. What’s the politics like?