Hannah Carmichael

‘Nother character…

Erika Paige, female, nineteen. Tall, a little bony, dark-ish skin and a light dusting of freckles, with grey-green eyes and a veritable mop of brilliant red hair. She’s a mechanic… her story is steampunk, so she makes steam-powered robots and drones and such… and she also dresses like a Victorian era lady, mostly in dark…[Read more]

*spends several moments choking and gulping and wiping her eyes*
Ouch.
This is superb. Just… everything. You had some typos, especially a lot in the first part, (and one grammar problem— ‘lays’ instead of ‘lay’ or ‘lies’) but everything else was amazing. I was also struck with how well you characterized Ellen— the quiet, sweet characters can…[Read more]

@Aratrea I thought so too. 😉

@overcomer @winter-rose, I’m afraid I shall have to leave the Jedi Writing Order for now. May the writing power be with you!!! 😛

And I finished writing the rough draft of my (short) essay, so I’m pleased. 🙂

Great Writing Master, I shall be writing an essay and would love to join you 😉 @overcomer

@Hope

Wait… where’d it go? Hm…

YIKES! IT’S HUGE! 😛

@Hope…

@Jane-Maree I love Jaye L Knight and the Out of Time trilogy! 😀

Hi @Jane-maree! Any favorite books? 🙂

@Jane-Maree welcome to KP! What do you like to write?

*Eats a lot of vanilla ice cream*

@PerfectFifths

I have to stop looking at her for now, otherwise I’m going to see all the flaws and my perfectionism will drive me crazy!

Congratulations. You just summed up my life in one sentence. :’D

@overcomer, @ethryndal, @r-j-wordsmith, I have to leave now. It’s been a pleasure writing with you. (Better than writing by myself) I wrote an ode and analyzed most of the poems that are due, so I am really pleased. 🙂

@overcomer, @ethyndal, @r-j-wordsmith, I have to leave now. It’s been a pleasure writing with you. (Better than writing by myself) I wrote an ode and analyzed most of the poems that are due, so I am really pleased. 🙂

@Aratrea thank you.
I know I’ve said this a gazillion times but guess what I’m going to say it again.
KP IS AWESOME. You guys have literally been everything to me in my writing journey. That is factually accurate; not an exaggeration. I didn’t know anything or anyone until I found you wonderful people. So thank you.

Yeah.

*ducks out of the room*

@Aratrea thank you.
I know I’ve said this a gazillion times but guess what I’m going to say it again.
KP IS AWESOME. You guys have literally been everything to me in my writing journey. That is factually accurate; not an exaggeration. I didn’t know anything or anyone until I found you wonderful people. So thank you.

*ducks out of the room*