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Jess replied to the topic Hi there! in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
@MoriahS Hello there, fellow North Carolinian! Welcome to KP! What are your favorite books? 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years ago
@Christi-Eaton thanks. 😉
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Rolena Hatfield posted an update 9 years ago
@kate-flournoy I had a writing break through thanks to your lovely advice!!! (which you probably don’t remember giving 😉 ) Lemme explain. A while ago I posted a scene from the beginning of my book and your critique was that the story didn’t flow quite right when I wrote like this… he said something, then did something, then did something then…[Read more]
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Jess replied to the topic OYAN considerations in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@Jane-maree Whoops, I forgot to respond to this! Thanks. I’m okay with outlining, I just don’t want to be bored out of my mind! 🙂
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Jess replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@Jenali I wrote about 1,500 words, so I’m leaving. Happy writing!
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Jess replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@Jenali, just saw this. I’ll actually be writing for another twenty minutes now. 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years ago
@f5a8c3e92 I like this.
*switches into professional mode* Your prose is stronger than a lot I’ve seen, and you show a lot of promise with dialogue and characterization. Your sense of flow and pacing does seem to be a bit off— the prologue was too short and vague, for one. It didn’t connect me to the story, which is what a prologue is for. I…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years ago
@Christi-Eaton *squeals* Still love it!
… can I post mine again here for comparison? It’ll make it look awful but I want to see the similarities. Thanks. 😀
*doesn’t wait for permission*
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Jess replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@jenali awesome! 🙂
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Jess replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years ago
@christi-eaton That’s so cool! I love her hair!
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Jess replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
*claps* number five. Wow.
I’ll be writing for 45 minutes or so. @that_writer_girl_99 @dragon-snapper, @overcomer, @cloudy @whoever is around -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 9 years ago
@Mark-Kamibaya YES. Rogue One. Everyone. Watch it. The more I think about it, the more sure I may be becoming that it’s my favorite movie ever. Seriously. Everything about it was so well done, and the theme—!
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@f5a8c3e92 welcome to the club. *cackles*
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@Daeus *dreamily contemplates the infinite*
fyi… I really did write that down…
HA! *curtsies* Excepting the king himself, of course.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years ago
@f5a8c3e92 I’ll critique this as soon as I have enough time to give it a thorough read. It looks interesting. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@f5a8c3e92 *scandalized gasp* FIRST RULE OF SURVIVAL AROUND HERE— ALWAYS—! (No…) NEVER! MOCK! KING! DAEUS!
XD
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 shhhh!! Don’t spill the beans! XD
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@Daeus *grins and writes it down* Okay. Now what?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@f5a8c3e92 yes… you INTJ people are the reason we INFP people have to worry about it so much… XD
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@that_writer_girl_99 been there, done that. *grins*
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@rolena-hatfield w… wow. *grins so wide she splits her face* That… makes me incredibly happy. You’re right. I did not even remember that. Congratulations. 😀 *returns flourishing bow* In my experience, truly strong prose is usually one of the last things to come… glad it’s clicking in place for you! 😀
@kate-flournoy Oh dear! *hands you some duck tape to fix the split in your face* I surely did not mean for that to happen 😀 I’m glad it’s clicking in place too! (at long last!!!!) One of those things that make you think… hmmm… I wished I’d learned this years ago.