@warrioroftherealm
Active 4 years ago- Rank: Loyal Sidekick
- Total Posts: 115
-
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Why Paolini works (or doesn't) in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
Oh dear @WarrioroftheRealm. What cult?
@Sierra-R @SleepwalkingMK So yes to everything you said!! Though Adora, I think Katrina has a more emotion than a brick, it’s just whiny and selfish emotion… 😛
-
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Why Paolini works (or doesn't) in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
Oh dear @WarrioroftheRealm. What cult?
@SeirraR @SleepwalkingMK So yes to everything you said!! Though Adora, I think Katrina has a more emotion than a brick, it’s just whiny and selfish emotion… 😛
-
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Why Paolini works (or doesn't) in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
Oh dear @WarrioroftheRealm. What cult?
@Seirra-R @SleepwalkingMK So yes to everything you said!! Though Adora, I think Katrina has a more emotion than a brick, it’s just whiny and selfish emotion… 😛
-
Hannah A. Krynicki replied to the topic British beta-readers?? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years ago
(Not great at tagging, but I’ll give it a try) I’m looking for British beta-readers.
@faithdk @hannah-olsen @vanna @overcomer @zoe-wingfeather @ingridrd
@adry_grace @cahndida-serkhaman @lightningmouse @anna-brie @mas410 @gretald @ivy-rose @dbhgodreigns @the-happy-bookaholic @belegteleri @writefury @kate-flournoy @hannah-c @jenali @hislittlerose @wo…[Read more] -
Greta posted an update 8 years ago
Election day is today (you probably already knew that, unless you’ve been living in a hole in the ground 😉 ). Let’s take the time to pray for our country today.
Thy will be done, Lord.
@kate-flournoy @alia @adry_grace @anne-of-lothlorien @anne-swiftblade @aratrea @aella @hannah-krynicki @hannah-c @his-instrument @watersnail @daeus @christi-ea…[Read more] -
Daeus replied to the topic Panel Discussions in the forum Questions and Support 8 years ago
Anyone?
@overcomer @bluejay @kate-flournoy @his-instrument @jess @clairec @timothy-young @warrioroftherealm @winter-rose @ingridrd @Christi-eaton @adry_grace @hope @anna-brie @gretald @jadamae @Hannah-krynicki @graciekry @writefury @Hannah-olsen @sarah-h @Hannah-c @spradlin @ivy-rose @corissa-maiden-of-praise @Julia-r @alia -
Mark Kamibaya replied to the topic Villain Reveal in the forum Fantasy 8 years ago
First, a question: Why exactly do the heroes have to meet the villain?
My problem was that the characters never meet the villain until the end. I read somewhere that that makes for a weaker villain. That’s it.
So I thought of doing something like what Captain America: The First Avenger did. Where there were people who were…[Read more]
-
Snapper replied to the topic Signet Ring in the forum Fantasy 8 years ago
… @warrioroftherealm
I think I should be worried now for Dragons and my kind. First, it was a dragon eye, and now its dragon wings… what. have. you. done?
😀 -
Snapper replied to the topic Signet Ring in the forum Fantasy 8 years ago
@warrioroftherealm Hrmm. Well, there is @kate-flournoy‘s idea, but here’s a list of random things.
1. A character from his alphabet. (or if you invented a language for the orcs or whatever they are, it could be a symbol from that standing for something related to the villain)
2. snake or some other dangerous thing (like teeth)
3. jewel of some…[Read more] -
Mark Kamibaya replied to the topic Villain Reveal in the forum Fantasy 8 years ago
I had the same problem with my story. It’s a little different but whatever. My first thought was legends and tales. Obviously, the guy’s super powerful and way up there so I assume that there’d be legends about him. That way they would know who he is. They don’t have to meet him face to face, do they? Maybe I’m just not getting…[Read more]
-
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Signet Ring in the forum Fantasy 8 years ago
@WarrioroftheRealm is there one particular thing that played any defining role in the villain’s life at all? Signets are chosen for their personal significance. It should be something relevant to the character. What one thing really means a lot to him? Perhaps it has some hidden symbolism.
-
Daeus replied to the topic Villain Reveal in the forum Fantasy 8 years ago
@warrioroftherealm Maybe the villain is out with his troops for some reason (supervising some important project possibly) and the MCs happen to see him. Maybe they see him turn invisible and happen to know some legend about a guy who could do that which lets them know who he is.
-
Snapper replied to the topic Villain Reveal in the forum Fantasy 8 years ago
*hands you napkin* *Sigh* Orcs…
Cha-ching! Good luck with whatever you decide!
@warrioroftherealm -
Snapper replied to the topic Villain Reveal in the forum Fantasy 8 years ago
@warrioroftherealm Maybe they end up capturing an orc and he spills the beans?
Personally, I like to reveal information in italics. By that I mean: journal entries, flashback and chapters not based on the main character.
Oh! *jumps up excitedly* Maybe the MC’s intercept a message from Villain to orcs and they figure it out somehow? -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Villain Reveal in the forum Fantasy 8 years ago
@WarrioroftheRealm hm… let me see. My first idea was, is there any way the villain could have a motive for meeting them without revealing who he is? Maybe he could go and seek them out for that reason (is he curious? Afraid? Daring? Arrogant?) and meet them as a simple traveler, and things escalate from there.
Or maybe he needs to ship something…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writing Dares! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
*digs out old topic* Right…I mean…write. I need a dare; lots of them. I would like them to be kinda historical, but don’t stress if they aren’t. @daeus, @kate-flournoy, @emma-flournoy, @jess, @winter-rose, @dragon-snapper, @aratrea, @sierra-r, @rolena-hatfield. *decides to go and get tags from a different article.*
@graciekry @his-instrument @j…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writing Dares! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
*digs out old topic* Right…I mean…write. I need a dare; lots of them. I would like them to be kinda historical, but don’t stress if they aren’t. @daeus, @kate-flournoy, @emma-flournoy, @jess, @winter-rose, @dragon-snapper, @aratrea, @seirra-r, @rolena-hatfield. *decides to go and get tags from a different article.*
@graciekry @his-instrument @j…[Read more] -
Mark Kamibaya replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 8 years ago
So who has heard of any of these services? And if so how good are they?
http://www.enjoymoviesyourway.com/
http://movie-cleaner.com/
https://www.clearplay.com/
https://www.vidangel.com@sarah-h @kate-flournoy @emma-flournoy @hope @bluejay @winter-rose @ingridrd @daeus @dragon-snapper @rolena-hatfield @christi-eaton @spra…[Read more]
-
Snapper started the topic College in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
Hi everyone!
College. That’s what’s next. After a few more years of high school then off I go. COLLEGE. Some words can be so easy and short to say and spell, but they speak levels of meaning.
What I’m asking you all for is any college suggestions, considerations or universities that have good writing courses. And I’m not just asking those who’ve…[Read more] -
Snapper started the topic College in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
Hi everyone!
College. That’s what’s next. After a few more years of high school then off I go. COLLEGE. Some words can be so easy and short to say and spell, but they speak levels of meaning.
What I’m asking you all for is any college suggestions, considerations or universities that have good writing courses. And I’m not just asking those who’ve…[Read more] - Load More
Yes! Please take a minute (preferably at least five minutes) to come before the Throne and find rest in His peace. We don’t have to worry because we know that God has everything under control. Maybe, through some mysterious twist of fate, this election will improve America. However, sometimes, it was God’s plan for the Israelites to be defeated.…[Read more]
Amen @julia-r! Thank YOU for reminding me. I’m trying to rest in the Lord, but it’s so hard not to worry. I know that God’s got this. 🙂
Thanks for the reminder, Greta.
Yes @Gretald. Thank you.
Amen. Bless the polls, Lord.
@julia-r
Just like you said, whatever the outcome, it’s under control.
Yes, let’s all pray for America. Good to be reminded, @Gretald.
Thanks for the reminder, Greta. So many people are afraid today, but I know God is in control.
Thank you for the reminder, @gretald! May the LORD’s will be done.
Amen!! @corissa-maiden-of-praise
Yes! Thank you for that prodding. It’s cool to know that there are young Christian writers out there who care about these things; you guys inspire me.
It’s a beautiful day, no matter the outcome of the election- because we know where our true citizenship lies. Thanks for the reminder, @gretald
Yes, let’s do that. We need it. (Like always…)
Going to just take a second to say, you guys are beautiful people and a true encouragement. It’s such a blessing to see you all bind together and write for the Kingdom of God and support others who choose to do the same. <3 *fades back into the shadows*
I was praying for you guys too, @gretald. Now that the results are out, I’ve started a topic about politics to satisfy my curiosity…
Thanks @clairec! Your prayers are much appreciated. 🙂