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Daeus replied to the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@perfectfifths Thanks 🙂
@dragon-snapper @that_writer_girl_99 I’m not sure I know what you mean. How would writing it from his POV be different? I thought I would write it diary style because he will only get to re-enter into the story on certain days.
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Snapper replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 8 years, 6 months ago

This one is for Tallore too, but it defines him a bit more. @mariposa @shannon @emily @kate-flournoy @catwing @ingridrd @daughteroftheking @jessi-rae
And don’t forget that’s he’s Dyemon’s brother.
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Snapper replied to the topic The Problem Child in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@catwing Man with a gun…mysterious catwing with a gun. That would be creepy. 😛
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Snapper replied to the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@daeus Hey! That is a pretty neat concept! I love how he gets to be the heroes neighbor. That’s awesome.
I agree with @perfectfifths that you should continue this, however, I think it’d be better if you didn’t write it from the perspective of his diary, and instead just his POV, first person.
But that’s it really. Otherwise I love it!
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Daeus started the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
Dear KeePers,
Two days ago, I was inspired to write a short story that at the time seemed like a brilliant idea. I wanted to write the diary of a character from a novel who struggles with his identity and the problem of evil.
The problem was, as I wrote the first entry last night, I felt like what was coming out was practically worthless. Having…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic The Last Jedi in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@his-instrument Porgs are definitely Snoke’s secret minions… 😉
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Snapper posted an update 8 years, 6 months ago
Why is it that all of the famous authors have to have a J starting their first name? J.R.R. Tolkien, John Flanagan, J.K. Rowling, Jennifer A. Nielsen…
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Snapper replied to the topic The Problem Child in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
*double facepalm* And I used the wrong form of ‘your’. My apologies, grammar fairies.
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Snapper replied to the topic The Problem Child in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
Why do I always forget about my own topics? *facepalm*
So first off @daeus You’re point about the lessons to be learned does open up a lot. I planned the second book by plotting out the theme first…I guess I should do that again, just for a national scale. And indeed it works very well. And usually, I would plot it out from beginning to end, I…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Outlines in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@allison-grace I follow the system taught by K.M.Wieland. It’s excellent as many others on here will testify. She has written several books on the subject and she has a series of articles on her blog covering the subject as well.
In her system, there are 18 major plot points. I like to have all of these down before I start writing. On top of…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@xonos-darkgrate I think the youngest person we have is 13–that’s how old I was when I joined but then time happened so now I’m older…. XD
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Daeus replied to the topic My New Fantasy Book Idea and Endeavor in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 6 months ago
@xonos-darkgrate As far as the magic goes, I think it probably needs a bit more fleshing out with details, but as long as the power isn’t actually God’s power, but merely a separate power he created, I think you’re on the right track.
As for romance, it’s really up to you. It could be hard to write it without any experience and you do want to…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic My New Fantasy Book Idea and Endeavor in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 6 months ago
@xonos-darkgrate Good ideas. The one thing that confuses me is point 1. It sounds strange that Satan could manipulate God’s power. Maybe there’s there’s an outside force of power that God created and controls as a testing ground? I’m sure you’ll figure it all out.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@aislinn-mollisong …I guess I just have a lot of sidekicks. 😀
@catwing 😀 *chairs sit there, awaiting destruction*
@jane-maree *resists taking it all*
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Snapper replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 8 years, 6 months ago

This is for Tallore, Dyemon’s brother. He’s sort of important.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@aislinn-mollisong
*redoes last part of math section*
If the cat takes one piece of pizza, *redraws cat with wings taking a piece of pizza that is as big as it is* how much is left for The Loyal Sidekick and the Chosen One *draws two adventurers with capes*? -
Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@catwing *stands in front of the class and whiteboard*
If we started out with eight pieces of pizza *draws a strange drawing of a pizza* then the cat eats one *draws a cat with wings eating pizza*, how much is left for the dragon? *draws a picture of a dragon begging for pizza* -
Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@jane-maree *takes all the pizza*
@catwing I is the fiery friend. *grins* -
Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@jane-maree @catwing I’ll join you guys!
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Add James Riley to that list. (Not famous. I don’t think. But really good.) XD That’s funny.