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Daeus replied to the topic World building advice? in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 6 months ago
@epicaddie2 I’m working through this myself at the moment, but I do have one or two things to say.
First, you want to develop your world well before you start writing. Sure, you should only spend so much time building your story world. You have to start eventually, but spending a whole month world building would not be unreasonable. A good…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@jadamae Great! Just contact me through the link I posted earlier and I’ll get it to you.
@salome01w4g The google doc would be fine.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@perfectfifths Great. That’s a very good discipline to have. If you want to sign up, just contact me through the link I provided earlier on in this thread.
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Snapper replied to the topic Kapeefer Poem in the forum Poetry 8 years, 6 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien Ah, look what you did to Christi!
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@jess-penrose That would be great. Yep, basically what you did before.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@salome01w4g Sure, you can read it on your kindle.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@salome01w4g Great! You can contact me here and then I’ll send you the doc.
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Daeus replied to the topic Greetings in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 6 months ago
@dekreel Oh, yes. I’ve read the Wingfeather saga. 🙂 I guess it does look like a fang, only more foxish.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@graciegirl Yes. Just pointing out anything that could be improved.
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Snapper replied to the topic Greetings in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 6 months ago
@dekreel
*nods sagely* Greetings.
So…*rubs hands together* Welcome to the bestistest place on the internets! Ah, instrumental. I love instrumental as well. Who are some of your favorite artists? -
Daeus replied to the topic Greetings in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 6 months ago
Hi, @dekreel 😀
Is your profile picture from anything in particular? It reminds me of a Redwall character.
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Snapper replied to the topic Kapeefer Poem in the forum Poetry 8 years, 6 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien Lovely! XD
@daeus Nice one. You got a line of respect. 😛
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Snapper replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
You know you’re a writer when you’re decided whether you want to include someone’s backstory or not, and decide to do so not because it’s fun to write, but because it’s heart wrenching and when you say so, your sister says only this, “Sigh.”
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Daeus replied to the topic How does one write an unhappy ending? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@jess What Kate said. Basically, either the loss your character experiences needs to be necessary for them to become a better person or the ending is just plain tragic, but a side character learns something valuable from it and the readers are left with a lot of hope for that side character.
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Daeus replied to the topic Kapeefer Poem in the forum Poetry 8 years, 6 months ago
😂😂😂 Haha! I love how you used those parenthetical lines. I’ll have to try that myself sometime.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@salome01w4g That was 20,000 words
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@perfectfifths
Content. No language. No sex. Violence: a general description of Aztec sacrifices. Description is not graphic, but if just the idea of human sacrifices makes you sick, then you could have problems with it. One guy has a vision in which he is lacerating himself, though there is not a lot of detail in that part.Otherwise, this book…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@salome01w4g I don’t have a maximum deadline. A week is just my preferred deadline. Within two weeks is not unreasonable to me. However, if I happen to get a lot of volunteers, I would naturally prefer those who can get it done within a week.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@perfectfifths I don’t have an exact deadline, but if anyone could do it in about a week, that would be optimal.
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